Tab Pee Leta Hoon "Khwaish" -Panna 2:Kaifiyaat-ae-maye

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«Reply #15 on: July 28, 2012, 02:47:41 AM »

bahut bahut vdhiya Clapping Smiley


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Re: Tab Pee Leta Hoon "Khwaish"

«Reply #16 on: July 28, 2012, 03:29:27 PM »

Quote from: suman59 on July 28, 2012, 02:45:36 AM

bahut khoob. Applause

(yeh poem tak teek hai. zindagi bhoj utana kaisa yeh sikhata hai. her ek ne jaam uta liya bhoj utarne k liye toh ...yeh galat hai na. )

Suman Ji Aapka yeh Comment mere Chehre Par muskurahat Ki Wajeh Ban gaya, Sahee Kahaa Aapne..Zindagi ka Bhoj Uthaana Kaisi Seekhati Hai Sharaab Par Aapne Yeh Sher Bilkul Bhi Gaur se Nahi padha Yaa Nahi Samjha

"Kuch pal Ke Liye Jab Yeh Fikr Mitaati Hai Tab Pee Leta Hoon"

Maine Yeh Bilkul Bhi Nahi kahaa Ke yeh Kisi Cheez Ka Ilaaj Hai....Yaa yeh Bhi Nahi Kahaa Ke Jaam Uthaane Se Zindagi Ka Bhoj Kam Ho Jaata Hai..

Yeh Sirf Kuch pal Ka Aaraam De Sakti Hai Aur Kuch Nahi....

Shayad Meri Woh line Hi sab Kuch keh Deti Hai..Hai Naa??


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Re: Tab Pee Leta Hoon "Khwaish"

«Reply #17 on: July 28, 2012, 03:33:45 PM »

Quote from: Sps on July 15, 2012, 01:07:09 PM

beautiful khwaish ji

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Re: Tab Pee Leta Hoon "Khwaish"

«Reply #18 on: July 28, 2012, 03:35:12 PM »

Quote from: mkv on July 15, 2012, 01:10:16 PM

Bahut umda likha hai Khwaish jee
Vaah... sabhi ash'aar khoob rahe.

inn Beshumaar Taaliyon Ke Liye Aur Aapki Daad Ke Liye Mukesh Ji Aapka Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Shukriya


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Re: Tab Pee Leta Hoon "Khwaish"

«Reply #19 on: July 29, 2012, 01:00:50 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on July 28, 2012, 03:29:27 PM

ooh khwaish jee aapne toh bura maan gaye. mujhe pata hai shayri sharabi pe hai. Aur aapne bahut hi khoobsurati se likha bi hai. maine yeh sochkar likha ke koyi is tarah ka sharabi ka poem padkar... kuch seekh na le tongue3

aap dil pe na lagao. maine aapko kuch nahi kaha. plzzzzzz bura na mano notworthy


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Re: Tab Pee Leta Hoon "Khwaish"

«Reply #20 on: August 17, 2012, 10:53:22 AM »

Very Good!!!! Aap Ke sabhi ghazals and shers bohat hi umda hote hai!!!! Applause


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Re: Tab Pee Leta Hoon "Khwaish"

«Reply #21 on: November 24, 2013, 10:36:25 PM »

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