Thakoongaa nahin umra-bhar peetey-peetey!

by abdbundeli on March 10, 2012, 03:09:03 PM
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Thakoongaa nahin umra-bhar peetey-peetey:
Nazar mein rahogey agar jeetey-jeetey!
Sarokaar hai saaqiyah sey puraanaa:
Raqeebaat jee-bhar lagaa leyn paleetey!!

                  - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2012, 04:52:28 PM »
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Nice
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2012, 06:59:29 PM »
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waa waa bhot khub. Applause Applause

chalak na jaye ankho se jaam likte likte
bhul jata hu khud ko tera naam likte likte.
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«Reply #3 on: March 11, 2012, 06:20:35 AM »
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Quote from: Kohinoor on March 10, 2012, 04:52:28 PM
Nice

Shukriyah, Kohinoor ji!
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«Reply #4 on: March 11, 2012, 06:22:54 AM »
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Quote from: ~Aatish~ on March 10, 2012, 06:59:29 PM
waa waa bhot khub. Applause Applause

chalak na jaye ankho se jaam likte likte
bhul jata hu khud ko tera naam likte likte.

Shukriyah, Aatish ji! Bahut hee badhiyaa sher hai yah aapkaa! Waah!
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«Reply #5 on: March 12, 2012, 04:44:14 AM »
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Bahuttttttttttttttttttttttt khooooooooooooooob
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«Reply #6 on: March 12, 2012, 02:23:39 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 12, 2012, 04:44:14 AM
Bahuttttttttttttttttttttttt khooooooooooooooob

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Dr Saini ji! Mujhey khushee huyee, ki, yah 'imagery' aapko pasand aayee!
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