to apne hi haal pe TARAS khaa ke piyaa...!!

by ghayal_shayar on October 30, 2012, 01:06:51 AM
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«Reply #15 on: November 07, 2012, 02:05:53 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smileyabsolutly very very good lines please keep it up ,,,bahut hi khub ,,,bahut hi khub
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«Reply #16 on: November 09, 2012, 06:05:46 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 30, 2012, 03:28:21 AM
waah waah bahut khoob

sir ji thanku.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: November 09, 2012, 06:30:57 PM »
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Lucky Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia baat hai bahut umdaa badi hi khoob kalaam kahi
hai janab.... Behad khoob khayaal aur umdaa bayaani rahi... Usual Smile

Aur presentation ke bare meiN kia kahna aap ke is umdaa andaaz se
hi humne qitaa kahna sikha hai... Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Likhate rahiye...

Bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 



Quote from: ghayal_shayar on October 30, 2012, 01:06:51 AM
sharaab ko main peeta hi kab tha,, iske bina main jeetaa hi kab tha,, ye cheez hai aisi ki chodi nahi jaati,, ek kasam hai kambakht jo todi nahi jaati,, aaj fir jaam honthoN se takraayega,, ek ashq fir aankhon se gir jaayegaa....!!



sahbaa*me aaj kuch dard mila ke piyaa,
sanam ke laboN pe jaam sajaa ke piyaa.

*sharaab....!

kiya inkaar kabhi kisi ne pilane se hume,
to ashqon se ek jaam banaa ke piyaa.

kisi ne di thi kasam hume v na peene ki,
aaj us dilbar ko saamne bithaa ke piyaa.

main pee ke, to saaqi bhi pila ke royaa,
unki tasveer ko hi dil se lagaa ke piyaa.

ro diye jab sab, humari haalat ko dekh,
to apne haal pe hi taras khaa ke piyaa.

maikade ne de diya naam hume "Taish",
har zakhm pe uska naam bulaa ke piyaa.
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«Reply #18 on: November 12, 2012, 07:24:21 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 30, 2012, 05:15:26 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukriya hriday ji... Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: November 14, 2012, 05:03:58 PM »
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Quote from: Sunil Malhotra on October 30, 2012, 06:05:38 AM
Laajwab...  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

sunil sahab pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya, bas aage v yuNhi apni hausla afzaayi se josh badhaate rahen...
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«Reply #20 on: November 15, 2012, 06:16:34 AM »
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Quote from: qalb on October 30, 2012, 09:48:32 AM

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

qalb ji pasand karne ka shukriya, yunhi saath nibhaate raheN... Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: November 18, 2012, 04:38:17 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on October 30, 2012, 11:33:31 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
lajawab


shukriya aqsh ji, yuNhi aate rahiye...
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«Reply #22 on: November 20, 2012, 06:25:50 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on November 05, 2012, 02:52:19 AM
bahut umda bahut hee lajawab creation

soudagar sahab, bahut bahut shukriya ise pasand karne k, bas yuNhi peete rahiye.... tongue3
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«Reply #23 on: November 20, 2012, 12:49:48 PM »
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on November 07, 2012, 02:05:53 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smileyabsolutly very very good lines please keep it up ,,,bahut hi khub ,,,bahut hi khub

sunil sahab, humari khushnaseebi ki aapne ise pasand kiya, bas yunhi aage v saath nibhaate rahiye aap...
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«Reply #24 on: November 20, 2012, 12:53:06 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 09, 2012, 06:30:57 PM
Lucky Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia baat hai bahut umdaa badi hi khoob kalaam kahi
hai janab.... Behad khoob khayaal aur umdaa bayaani rahi... Usual Smile

Aur presentation ke bare meiN kia kahna aap ke is umdaa andaaz se
hi humne qitaa kahna sikha hai... Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Likhate rahiye...

Bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 




aadaab janaab, waise kasam upar waale ki, kisi ko jhaad pe chadhana aapse seekhna chahiye, miyaaN hum tehre adne se shauqiyaa kalam chalaane wale log, aur aap itni tareef kar dete hain ki poochiye mat, janaab itni bhi tareef a kijiye ki hazam karne ki kosish me haazmaa hi kharaab ho jaaye tongue3 bas aage bhi yuNhi saath dete rahiyega janaab...
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