Wo saadhey hai moun!:Kaifiyaat-ae-maye

abdbundeli

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Deykh Saaqiyah! Dwaar par,
Kharhaa huaa hai koun?
Too uljhee hai jaam mein:
Wo saadhey hai moun!
Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya'


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Re: Wo saadhey hai moun!

«Reply #1 on: November 13, 2008, 08:17:25 PM »

Nice lines Abd ji


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abdbundeli

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Re: Wo saadhey hai moun!

«Reply #2 on: November 14, 2008, 01:26:51 AM »

Shukriyah Pooja ji!
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Talat

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Re: Wo saadhey hai moun!

«Reply #3 on: November 14, 2008, 11:45:02 AM »

Nice lines Abd Ji


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Wo saadhey hai moun!

«Reply #4 on: November 14, 2008, 12:12:50 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on November 03, 2008, 10:23:31 AM

Deykh Saaqiyah! Dwaar par,
Kharhaa huaa hai koun?
Too uljhee hai jaam mein:
Wo saadhey hai moun!
Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya'

shaikh saheb dwar khade
kar rahe intezar
abd jo nikle maikhane se
woh bheetar aaye yaar


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abdbundeli

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Re: Wo saadhey hai moun!

«Reply #5 on: November 14, 2008, 12:25:07 PM »

Shukriyah Celmira ji!
- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Wo saadhey hai moun!

«Reply #6 on: November 14, 2008, 12:37:14 PM »

sajid_ghayel ji!
Meyree eik saaloun puraanee gazal hai, jis kee shuruaat key do asha'ar (jaisey ki mujhey yaad hain) peish hain, mulaahizaa farmaayen:

"Siyah kaa pardah-ae-aam honey to dey!
Saaqiyah, ruk zaraa, shaam honey to dey!!

Saath mein kuchh khudaa waaley moujood hain;
Har ta'arruf ko gumnaam honey to dey!!!!"

Ho saktaa hai, mein ney is gazal ko yoindia mein post kiyaa ho, yadi naheen kiyaa hogaa to jab nigaah mein aayegee post kar doonga!
- abd bundeli


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Shikha12

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Re: Wo saadhey hai moun!

«Reply #7 on: November 14, 2008, 12:49:35 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on November 03, 2008, 10:23:31 AM

Deykh Saaqiyah! Dwaar par,
Kharhaa huaa hai koun?
Too uljhee hai jaam mein:
Wo saadhey hai moun!
Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya'

Quote from: abdbundeli on November 14, 2008, 12:37:14 PM

sajid_ghayel ji!
Meyree eik saaloun puraanee gazal hai, jis kee shuruaat key do asha'ar (jaisey ki mujhey yaad hain) peish hain, mulaahizaa farmaayen:

"Siyah kaa pardah-e-aam honey to dey!
Saaqiyah, ruk zaraa, shaam honey to dey!!

Saath mein kuchh khudaa waaley moujood hain;
Ab, unhain aam aawaam honey to dey!!"

Ho saktaa hai, mein ney is gazal ko yoindia mein post kiyaa ho, yadi naheen kiyaa hogaa to jab nigaah mein aayegee post kar doonga!
- abd bundeli

Waah ...

Bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hai Abd ji..


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abdbundeli

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Re: Wo saadhey hai moun!

«Reply #8 on: November 14, 2008, 01:57:44 PM »

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Mahiya ji!
- abd bundeli


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Talat

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Re: Wo saadhey hai moun!

«Reply #9 on: November 14, 2008, 02:43:19 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on November 14, 2008, 12:37:14 PM

"Siyah kaa pardah-e-aam honey to dey!
Saaqiyah, ruk zaraa, shaam honey to dey!!

Saath mein kuchh khudaa waaley moujood hain;
Ab, unhain aam aawaam honey to dey!!"

Bohot hi Khoob.....In asha'ar ki poori ghazal padhne ka intezar rahega Abd Ji icon_thumleft


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abdbundeli

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Re: Wo saadhey hai moun!

«Reply #10 on: November 14, 2008, 02:49:24 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on November 14, 2008, 02:43:19 PM

Bohot hi Khoob.....In asha'ar ki poori ghazal padhne ka intezar rahega Abd Ji icon_thumleft

Celmira ji! Shukriyah! Aap kee famaaish sir-aankhoun par! Talaash karoongaa!
- abd bundeli


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