Yaad-E-Madira

by Pooja on June 21, 2007, 07:44:41 PM
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Yaad atti hai din bhar teri, waqat nikal jaata hai
Raat ka karu kaya main, dil kisi tarah samjh nahi pata hai

Sochati hu ki ajj nahi, dil kisi tarah ruk nahi paata hai
Khul jaati hai yah Madira ki bottle, ek saroor sa aa jaata hai

Pahle krati hu tujhse baatein, ek dard sa phail jaata hai
Phir deti hu khud ko jawab, her sawal per ulajh jaata hai

Thak kar karati hu bottle se baatein, mera hi nasha mujh per hansi jaata hai
Her ek kamre ki chees se karti hu wahin sawal, jawab kahin se nahi atta hai

Yaad atti hai din bhar teri, waqat nikal jaata hai
Raat ka karu kaya main, dil kisi tarah samjh nahi pata hai!!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 21, 2007, 11:03:21 PM »
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Pooja

Wah ! wah ! wah ! Superb ! =D> =D> =D>
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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2007, 07:23:54 AM »
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Yaad atti hai din bhar teri, waqat nikal jaata hai
Raat ka karu kaya main, dil kisi tarah samjh nahi pata hai

Sochati hu ki ajj nahi, dil kisi tarah ruk nahi paata hai
Khul jaati hai yah Madira ki bottle, ek saroor sa aa jaata hai

Pahle krati hu tujhse baatein, ek dard sa phail jaata hai
Phir deti hu khud ko jawab, her sawal per ulajh jaata hai

Thak kar karati hu bottle se baatein, mera hi nasha mujh per hansi jaata hai
Her ek kamre ki chees se karti hu wahin sawal, jawab kahin se nahi atta hai

Yaad atti hai din bhar teri, waqat nikal jaata hai
Raat ka karu kaya main, dil kisi tarah samjh nahi pata hai!!!


toota hooa ashik dhundta hai sanj dalte hee jise
madira hai wo bhool jata hai gam wo pee kar ise

kya hota hai saroor iska pooch lo sharabi se kisee
kya hoti kashikh iskee maykhane me ja kar dekh lo kisee

dil me utha hai janoon sa, khanakte hai pyale  jab
jee uth the murde bhee sharabe-gandh sunghte  hai jab

shyaro kee gajal banjate hai sharab sanj dhalte hee
sakee bhee sajte hai maykhano me  suraj ke dhalte hee

netra...


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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2007, 09:41:08 PM »
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good one Netra ji!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2007, 09:30:43 AM »
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khil utha man mera sanj dhale jab ata hoo
ek kone me baith botal jab mai gale lagata hoo

pyari hai botal is me wo aalam hai madhoshi ka
nayari hai jag me yah pyari hai apne aashik ka

kabhi karo tum nahi daro tum gam bhee isse hara hai
khulee botal jab gar ke neecha sara jag isse hara hai

pyalo kee garima hoti hai, mayakhano kee aas
bhool jaoge man ko apne le lo ise apne dil ke paas

nahi nashi hai, nahi paap hai, nahi hoti hai gali
charno me devi ke chadthi hai khoob bahao tali

netra.....
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«Reply #5 on: June 29, 2007, 05:54:08 AM »
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Kya Baat hai Pooja di.... Aap to yaha bhi chha rahe ho.... Usual Smile
Bahut achha likha hai... Just Superb.... =D>


Netra ji... Bahut achhe reply hai aapke... Its always nice to read your writings... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: June 29, 2007, 09:13:11 AM »
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shukriya shikha ji,

kyo juthlate hao yahi sach hai jindgee ka
madhoosi hai pyale yahi aalam hai masti ka

nahi chahiye roti, nahi kisi haseena kee chah hai
ek botal letne ko 2gaj jamee, yahi chah sharabi ke hai

mat poocho kya saroor hota hai, kya hoti hai mad hoshi
dekh lo kisi sharabi kee keechad me dubi huyee behoshi

netra...
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«Reply #7 on: June 29, 2007, 02:43:11 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria Shikha ji!!

Netra ji hamesha ki tarah bahoot hi acha likha hai apne!!

Doob kar dard mai jo tham li madira
Phir hosh kaha, dard kuch is kadar bikhra

Dil mai ek hi soch, wo is kadar kyun gira
Dekar dard mujhe usko zindagi mai kaya mila

Pi kar yah madira, her sawal bas bikhra bikhra
Hatho mai jakhmi dil ka bach gaya ek tukra

Doob kar dard mai jo tham li madira
Phir hosh kaha, dard kuch is kadar bikhra
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«Reply #8 on: June 29, 2007, 04:32:32 PM »
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Again Very Nice Writing Netra ji...


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bahoot bahoot shukaria Shikha ji[/b]!!

Netra ji hamesha ki tarah bahoot hi acha likha hai apne!!

Doob kar dard mai jo tham li madira
Phir hosh kaha, dard kuch is kadar bikhra

Dil mai ek hi soch, wo is kadar kyun gira
Dekar dard mujhe usko zindagi mai kaya mila

Pi kar yah madira, her sawal bas bikhra bikhra
Hatho mai jakhmi dil ka bach gaya ek tukra

Doob kar dard mai jo tham li madira
Phir hosh kaha, dard kuch is kadar bikhra



Yahan bhi Shikha ke saath JI[/b] sad5
Pooja Di.... sad5 Kya hua... Koi Galti hui kya Mujhse... sad5


By the Way... Humesha ki tarah bahut hi khoobsoorat likha aapne...
Its always a pleasure to read you... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2007, 05:29:35 PM »
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Bahoot bahoot shukaria SHIKHA.....

Same reply apki shikayat ka dard section mai bhi de kar aai hu...

Yah kaise kaya app baat kah gai
Narajgi apse, kaise yah soch gai

Ji lagati hu ki apki rachnaye bahoot bhati hai
Maan karti hu ki apki baatein bahoot suhati hai

Narajagi nahi, maan ki yah JI pahchaan hai
Apki aise baat pard kar, dil hua preshan hai!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 29, 2007, 07:25:28 PM »
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Pooja di... Aapne to dara hi diya tha...


Aaj aapne naam ke saath "ji" laga kar, shikha ko rula diya,
Aisa laga, jaise kisi apne ne, gale laga ke humey thukra diya...

Aap hum ko padh kar tareef karti hai, yeh kisi maan se kum nahin...
Ji keh kar sharminda naa karey... Pooja di itne kaabil to hum nahin....
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«Reply #11 on: June 29, 2007, 09:36:00 PM »
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back to Madira  :wink:

Madira  :evil: ka hai saara kasoor hume koi ilzaam na do
Pi kar kho dete hai hosh, app is kadar preshan na ho

Be-hoshi main bhi apko hum JI kah kar bulate hai
Khud hi sochiye phir app, kitne pyaar se dil mai apko basate hai  :lol:

Kabil hai app kitani yah to shabdo main kaha na jayega
Aao batho piyo kuch jaam sung, khud-b-khud apko samjh aa jayega tongue3
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«Reply #12 on: June 30, 2007, 04:19:58 AM »
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kyo dutkarte ho hame jo panw dagmay hai mere
jahar to nahi manga tha, thokar bhee kyo marte ho mere

do ghoot hee pee thee, khata thee bhee kya aye bedard
tum to hogaye the bewafa sahaara jine ka yahi tha mere

tum kahate ho sharaab ise, ham amrat kahate hai isko
tum to lagate ho gale gair ko yahi lagatee hai gale muj ko

haa badnaam hoo hami, numainda hoo gandi galiyo ka
so gaya hoo mot ke aagosh me ,aashhik kai lipta kar kabr pe rote mere

netra..
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«Reply #13 on: July 06, 2007, 11:40:43 PM »
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Yaad atti hai din bhar teri, waqat nikal jaata hai
Raat ka karu kaya main, dil kisi tarah samjh nahi pata hai

Sochati hu ki ajj nahi, dil kisi tarah ruk nahi paata hai
Khul jaati hai yah Madira ki bottle, ek saroor sa aa jaata hai

Pahle krati hu tujhse baatein, ek dard sa phail jaata hai
Phir deti hu khud ko jawab, her sawal per ulajh jaata hai

Thak kar karati hu bottle se baatein, mera hi nasha mujh per hansi jaata hai
Her ek kamre ki chees se karti hu wahin sawal, jawab kahin se nahi atta hai

Yaad atti hai din bhar teri, waqat nikal jaata hai
Raat ka karu kaya main, dil kisi tarah samjh nahi pata hai!!!


Wah Pooja ... Lovely...

Do pal ki chahat main..
Yu dil ka sauda karte hai..!!

Dil toot.ta hai pyar main
Bottle main dawa doondte hai..!!

Roja[/color]
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«Reply #14 on: July 09, 2007, 01:26:44 AM »
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bahoot khoob Netra ji...

Thanks Roja, nice lines..


Pite hai pi kar utar jaati hai
Wo hi tanhaai aor gahari ho jaati hai

Yaadein atti hai siskiye liye hue
Jakhmo ko aor taja kar jaati hai

Band kar ke ankhon ko mehsoos karu tujhe
Khayalo main bhi ek akelapan de jaati hai

Pite hai pi kar utar jaati hai
Wo hi tanhai aor gahari ho jaati hai
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