Aja ve Pardesi mahiyea

by Naya_Daur on February 16, 2006, 11:36:16 AM
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Aja ve Pardesi mahiyea, nit main teri rahan takan,
Ossian pa pa unglan thakiyan, neer vaha ke akhan

Vich trinjana sakhiyan pawaan lambe tandh mohabbatan vale,
Ki dassan bin tere arrdia din v langde kaale kaale,

Main birhan de charke, roz gamma diyan poonian kaatan,
Aja ve Pardesi mahiyea, nit main teri rahan takan,

Kaale naag judaiyan vaale, seene dang chalie jaande,
Eh janma janma de bhuke, assan meriyan khaie jaande

Be-aase jehe khawab haniyan, kinjh main samban ,kihte rakhan
Aja ve Pardesi mahiyea, nit main teri rahan takan,

Rowan,veelkan,tarfan har dum, tenu cheete kar kar ke
Tere wangu larre la le, reejh milan di dhaakan

Aja ve Pardesi mahiyea nit main teri rahan takan,
Ossian pa pa unglan thakiyan, neer vaha ke akhan..."


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nikki
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2006, 11:37:33 AM »
WONDERFULL B_D...
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2006, 04:18:40 PM »
thanks nikki ji,, thanks a lot!!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2006, 09:00:57 AM »
Sukhi main jo nahi
Ta dukhi tu kyon hai,

Rah mainu ni labda
Bhatkdi tu kyon hai,

Barsat is var di bemausmi jehi si,
Bhijia main jo nahi ta bhiji tu kyon hai,

eE keho jeha pyar pa leya
 Tadafda ekala main hé ni tadafdi tu kyon hai,

Kiwey mila te kithey mila tainu,
Sochda ekala main he ni sochdi tu kyon hai,

Barbadi ute ta hasda hai har koi mere,
Ronda main jo ha ta rondi tu kyon hai,

Maria ta main ekala he si,
Par meri naal di kabar vich tu kyon hai...Huh?


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Sonu
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«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2006, 03:03:39 AM »
ranjit bahut he suna likha heyga hai.... wonderful...

suniya heyga pyar  kerkey kho deynda,
behtarr heyga uhdeynalo, jeyda pyar na karey,
per haley-gum da ki jideyvech jina mushkil na huvey,
waqif jey gum nal heygey haan taan,
tey pyar he keo kareyeh.
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #5 on: February 27, 2006, 09:56:33 AM »
Sonu , je apne hath vich kuch hunda te Pyaar naam da lafaz heer ranjha, mirza sahiba warge ashiquan de time toh baad kidre gawach jaana

Dil nu lag jan  rog tan ki kariey,
kisi di yaad ch akhian ron ta ki kariey.
Sanu milane di tmana ta rehandi hai har dam,
j yar hi bhul jan tan ki kariye...


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Tere bichran da dukh asi seh nahi sakde ,
bhari mehfil wich kuch keh nahi sakde ,
sade digde hanju phar ke dekh ,
Oh vi kehnde , asi tere bin reh nahi sakde...
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Sonu
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«Reply #6 on: February 28, 2006, 04:38:01 AM »
Ranjit sahi kheya... pyar taan bahut hi purana chali anda hai... kesi da sakar hunda hia tey koi rulda rulda miti vech mil janda hia...

dil daa yea rog purana vey
ahkhaa tey hanjow da sath sadiya purna vey
her kesi no kesy na kesey di milan di tamena rendi hai
jey koi bhul javey yaar taan ruh nal ruh da rabta jaroor rehda hia.

Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Sonu , je apne hath vich kuch hunda te Pyaar naam da lafaz heer ranjha, mirza sahiba warge ashiquan de time toh baad kidre gawach jaana

Dil nu lag jan  rog tan ki kariey,
kisi di yaad ch akhian ron ta ki kariey.
Sanu milane di tmana ta rehandi hai har dam,
j yar hi bhul jan tan ki kariye...


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Tere bichran da dukh asi seh nahi sakde ,
bhari mehfil wich kuch keh nahi sakde ,
sade digde hanju phar ke dekh ,
Oh vi kehnde , asi tere bin reh nahi sakde...
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #7 on: March 06, 2006, 06:32:52 PM »
Sonu ,,pyar de vichore barre tan kaie war likheya,, ajj kamayabi waaste,,do ashiquan barre likan di koshish kitti hai,,kiwe aaj ek ashqui apni mehboob nu, nu kehna hai,,ke jo tu mere nal hain tan saariyan muskilan aasan ne...


Har  kadam te rah vich bhawein hanere honge ,
Jad turrange sang sang channan bathaire honge,

Je hou waqf hawa uccha udange hor,
Jhakhadran de sang paeran de rishte hor Pakere(pakke) honge,

Jo fiza vich naksh(map, nakshe) ulleke ne pavitar soch de,
Jinne toofan aaunge uhne doongere(deeper) honge

Doodh peene majnooan di daar hai lamhi bardhi,
Agg te nal khedna layi saade jehe honge,

Jugno wang jo kaaliyan raatan vich chamkan ge,
Jholiyan vich uhna de sohne saveere honge,
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Sonu
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«Reply #8 on: March 07, 2006, 03:46:24 AM »
ranjit thats nice wonderfull.... mind blwoing.. wonderful ranjit....mada ja change huna chaida....

saver daa khiyal sham nu ahunda hia
naa kerdey huye vi yaad... masla teyra ahunda hia
hakeem di dewaai vi kuch aser na ker saki
khvab vech vi teyra muskurana yaad ahunda hai

Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Sonu ,,pyar de vichore barre tan kaie war likheya,, ajj kamayabi waaste,,do ashiquan barre likan di koshish kitti hai,,kiwe aaj ek ashqui apni mehboob nu, nu kehna hai,,ke jo tu mere nal hain tan saariyan muskilan aasan ne...


Har  kadam te rah vich bhawein hanere honge ,
Jad turrange sang sang channan bathaire honge,

Je hou waqf hawa uccha udange hor,
Jhakhadran de sang paeran de rishte hor Pakere(pakke) honge,

Jo fiza vich naksh(map, nakshe) ulleke ne pavitar soch de,
Jinne toofan aaunge uhne doongere(deeper) honge

Doodh peene majnooan di daar hai lamhi bardhi,
Agg te nal khedna layi saade jehe honge,

Jugno wang jo kaaliyan raatan vich chamkan ge,
Jholiyan vich uhna de sohne saveere honge,
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #9 on: March 08, 2006, 02:56:42 PM »
bhoot hi sona likha hai sohniye

Quote from: "Sonu"
ranjit thats nice wonderfull.... mind blwoing.. wonderful ranjit....mada ja change huna chaida....

saver daa khiyal sham nu ahunda hia
naa kerdey huye vi yaad... masla teyra ahunda hia
hakeen di dewaai vi kuch aser na ker saki
khvab vech vi teyra muskurana yaad ahunda hai

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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #10 on: March 08, 2006, 03:14:29 PM »
Meriyan Akhan de vich Supne
Aaj Akhan de vich tutte,
Tutte supneyan de ajj sheeshe
Meriyan akhan de vich khoobe

Main maut nu galle lagana chaunda c
Par Teri yaad de sangal nal c paer bajje
Na eh tod hoya,na turr hoya
Supneyan Nal rishtey c jo bajje

Aaj main v kisse kakh vangar
Na nazar kisse de aaya
Aaj kagaz kaale kaarke
Bas chain dil nu aaya


~mere tutte hoye supne~
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Sonu
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«Reply #11 on: March 09, 2006, 03:01:19 AM »
meharbani ranjitey...


ju asi bhulana cahundey si oh bhula na sakey
yaad been key daastan reh gayeaan hath unadey
oh taan chaley gaye kush hukey sadey tu dur
khud nu asi bhulana cahundey haan per bhula nahi pandey haan..


Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
bhoot hi sona likha hai sohniye

Quote from: "Sonu"
ranjit thats nice wonderfull.... mind blwoing.. wonderful ranjit....mada ja change huna chaida....

saver daa khiyal sham nu ahunda hia
naa kerdey huye vi yaad... masla teyra ahunda hia
hakeen di dewaai vi kuch aser na ker saki
khvab vech vi teyra muskurana yaad ahunda hai

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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #12 on: March 11, 2006, 02:46:41 PM »
bhut hi sohna likhey hai tusi Sonu,,,really nice

Tenu Chard denge Sulli,
Eh saach de maseehe,
Kitte Saach bolan da na
Gunaah kar behti,

Baada aukha hai
Ishq de painde te turna,
tu v na zindagi
Fanah kar baithi

Dil le ke
sab mukar jaande ne
awein dil na kisse de
naam kar baithi

Load payi te ehna nu jindre
vajj jande ne
kithe hothan nu na
gawah kar baithi

Har raz seene 'ch
daffan rehan de
Jikar karke na khud nu
tabah kar baithi

pa galwakri peeth 'ch
kanjar maarde ne
awein na kisse dost da ,
*Veesah ka baithi


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*veesah =bhrosa,Trust
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nikki
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«Reply #13 on: March 11, 2006, 03:01:18 PM »
very nice Jeet
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #14 on: March 11, 2006, 03:02:35 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
very nice Jeet


Sukriya nikki ji,,,
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