Aja ve Pardesi mahiyea

by Naya_Daur on February 16, 2006, 11:36:16 AM
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Sonu
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«Reply #15 on: March 12, 2006, 03:47:38 AM »
ranjitey har var di thra wonderful...


asi jina chahandey haan per gum vech...
thudi asi pee vi nahi sakdey...
her pal taan yaad ahundi hai teyri...
jalim asi jee vi nahi sakdey...
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bhut hi sohna likhey hai tusi Sonu,,,really nice

Tenu Chard denge Sulli,
Eh saach de maseehe,
Kitte Saach bolan da na
Gunaah kar behti,

Baada aukha hai
Ishq de painde te turna,
tu v na zindagi
Fanah kar baithi

Dil le ke
sab mukar jaande ne
awein dil na kisse de
naam kar baithi

Load payi te ehna nu jindre
vajj jande ne
kithe hothan nu na
gawah kar baithi

Har raz seene 'ch
daffan rehan de
Jikar karke na khud nu
tabah kar baithi

pa galwakri peeth 'ch
kanjar maarde ne
awein na kisse dost da ,
*Veesah ka baithi


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*veesah =bhrosa,Trust
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Pooja
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«Reply #16 on: March 19, 2006, 12:47:15 AM »
wah jeet kaya baat hai, bahoot hi khoob likha hai.... Good job Sonu!!!!

ajja ve mahiyan hun ta, meri zind rul chuki
ake ek najar vekhja, ki meri doli uth chuki

kindan java, chor ke pipal, jithy teri yandan ne
kive paar kara mai nadiyan, yaad wo sari raata ne

tu ta jake ek vaar na sochi, kidan meri din raata ne
hun ta ajja ve perdesi mahiya, uthan lage loki meri lasha ne!!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #17 on: March 19, 2006, 06:53:50 PM »
Quote from: "Sonu"
ranjitey har var di thra wonderful...
asi jina chahandey haan per gum vech...
thudi asi pee vi nahi sakdey...
her pal taan yaad ahundi hai teyri...
jalim asi jee vi nahi sakdey...


Sonu this one is specially for you

Yaar yaar har koi karda phire
Main yaara tere toh jind lutavan
Tu hi mere dil da hani
Tu hi mera parchavan
Tere rah de saare kaande mere
Tere kadma ch main phull vichavan
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #18 on: March 19, 2006, 07:00:50 PM »
Tu tan rou ke dil houla kar laendi aa
Main apne athru sanjhe kis nal  kara

Dukh dard tan mere mukkadran wich,
Main shikwe shikayaatan kis nal kara

Tera saath JEET ne mangeya Judiyan wele
Tenu uhdon khyal na aya main ki kara

Ithe lakhan phirde RANJHE banke
Main Mirza ban ke ki kara??


Last two lines vich bhut hi deep meaning hai,,I hope every one knows about Ranjha N Mirza,,Je ehna lines da meaning samjh nahi aya te poem di depth samjh nahi awegi

Quote from: "Pooja"
wah jeet kaya baat hai, bahoot hi khoob likha hai.... Good job Sonu!!!!

ajja ve mahiyan hun ta, meri zind rul chuki
ake ek najar vekhja, ki meri doli uth chuki

kindan java, chor ke pipal, jithy teri yandan ne
kive paar kara mai nadiyan, yaad wo sari raata ne

tu ta jake ek vaar na sochi, kidan meri din raata ne
hun ta ajja ve perdesi mahiya, uthan lage loki meri lasha ne!!!


thanks pooja,, apne bhi bhut achha likha hai!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #19 on: March 20, 2006, 06:44:49 AM »
Na hi chahiye koi ranjhan, na hi mai Mirza koi chaha
Mil jaye bas ek dilwaala, uste mai balihaari jawan
na koi heer, na hi koi sassi, na hi mai sahiba v loko
Pooja mera naam te, mai usdin hi pooja kahlawan!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #20 on: March 22, 2006, 09:12:27 AM »
thanks ranjitey
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Sonu
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«Reply #21 on: March 22, 2006, 10:53:32 PM »
WONDERFUL RANJITEY TEY POOJA JI.. BAHUT KHOOB...
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Pooja
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«Reply #22 on: March 23, 2006, 03:04:26 PM »
thanks Sonu!!

Payaar de nashe vich, na jaane ki ki kardi eh
ajakl mai jameen te nahi, mitro, hawa ch uradi eh

odi ek ek gal nu, so so baar yaad karndi eh
apni yandan vich, kadi hansdi ta kandi sharmondi eh

sheeshe aggy bath kar, ganto khud nu sanjandi eh
hatha naal thak (chupana) ke munh, na jaane ki ki sapne sanjodi eh!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #23 on: March 23, 2006, 10:16:22 PM »
Your most welcome Pooja...

pyar da nasha beda kamal da hunda hia
per dukh dard nal marham vi deynda hia

jeydiya mahi di udkia kerda hai jado oh na havey tey dil ahh bharda hai
ki dasiye teynu yara ohdey to beygar jindgi ek pata kagej hai

sapney sajandey haan khuliya ahkhaan nal
per jado koi apna hi pyar ahkey usno tod janda hia
pid bahut hundi hai jado dil da ranja hi dila di vanjli tod janda hai

Quote from: "Pooja"
thanks Sonu!!

Payaar de nashe vich, na jaane ki ki kardi eh
ajakl mai jameen te nahi, mitro, hawa ch uradi eh

odi ek ek gal nu, so so baar yaad karndi eh
apni yandan vich, kadi hansdi ta kandi sharmondi eh

sheeshe aggy bath kar, ganto khud nu sanjandi eh
hatha naal thak (chupana) ke munh, na jaane ki ki sapne sanjodi eh!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #24 on: March 27, 2006, 01:47:24 PM »
wow!! Pooja te sonu,, bhut sohna  likheya !!!


Na din langan da pata lagda,
Na kattdi Judaian wali vali raat
Har wele disse mukh sajna da
bas Rehndi milan di tang...!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #25 on: March 27, 2006, 04:17:59 PM »
wowww gr8 all of u Jeet, Pooja sis n Sonu kudiyeee

rahan takdiyan langh jaanda hai din
udeek ch langhe raat vi...
kade sajna jhalak dikha ja
kar ja koi pyar vaali baat vi...
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #26 on: March 28, 2006, 11:34:21 AM »
sochda  main v dine raat tenu
kade dil vich soch teri jaandi nahi

basera kar leya injh tu mere Dil vich
hun raatan nu neend mainu aaundi nahi

kade ekaathe beh ke sukh-dukh sanjhe kariye
Ehi reezh menu hoyi jandi hai

Kado milengi tu mainu sohniye
ehi peer sanu tardpaundi hai...!!!


Gud nikki
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nikki
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«Reply #27 on: March 28, 2006, 12:00:25 PM »
thanx Jeet..n too gud..

kash oh vela vi aa jaye
aapan ral baithiye..
kujh tu apne dil di kahein
kujh main apne dil di sunavan
tu karda rahein gallan
main bass tainu takki jawan
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #28 on: March 28, 2006, 12:12:40 PM »
hmmm,,, mainu hi taki jaana , Puzzled !

Kash main ek panchi hunda
Maar udari tere kol aa janda
Tu mainu ,main tenu bas takda
Hosh na koi phir apaan nu rehnda..!!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #29 on: April 06, 2006, 03:11:14 AM »
Thanks ranjitey.. to vi bahut vadiya likheya hai..

dhiyaan nahi legda aajkal kitaaba vech
yaad ben key oh vech ahhi jandey ney
kar nahi sakdey kuch asi,
khwaaba vech choon to pahila  hi oh nass jandey ney

Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
wow!! Pooja te sonu,, bhut sohna  likheya !!!


Na din langan da pata lagda,
Na kattdi Judaian wali vali raat
Har wele disse mukh sajna da
bas Rehndi milan di tang...!!!
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