"APNA NA BANA KE RAKHYA"

by k.shael on May 13, 2008, 11:48:55 AM

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k.shael

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OHDE SAAH NU APNE SAAHA WICH
WASA KE RAKHYA,
OHDA NAAM APNI BAAWA TE LIKHA
KE RAKHYA....
OHNU JAGG DIYAA NAJRAAN TO BACHA
KE RAKHYA,
OHDE PYAR NU DIL APNE WICH LUKA
KE RAKHYA....
OHDE DITE DUKHA NU SINE AAPNE
LAGA KE RAKHYA,
AASI AAJ TAK NA USNU KADE BHULA
KE RAKHYA....
PATA NAHI KYUN CHAD KE TUR GAYA OH
BEDARD....
SHYAD USNE HI SANU APNA NA BANA
KE RAKHYA....
BY. K.SHALLY


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Re: "APNA NA BANA KE RAKHYA"

«Reply #1 on: May 13, 2008, 11:57:03 AM »

Shally

Bahut khoob !

Keep it up !


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khwahish

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Re: "APNA NA BANA KE RAKHYA"

«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2008, 03:10:53 PM »

bahut vadiya shael bro..

bahut ache Applause


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Rajbir

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Re: "APNA NA BANA KE RAKHYA"

«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2008, 03:15:47 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on May 13, 2008, 03:10:53 PM

bahut vadiya shael bro..

bahut ache Applause

Kitu bhaaji chashme lagao !

Shael bro nahi

SHALLY sis Winking


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Re: "APNA NA BANA KE RAKHYA"

«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2008, 03:18:23 PM »

aila!!!

galti se mistake ho gaya...

shallyji bahut acha likha hai aapne..


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Re: "APNA NA BANA KE RAKHYA"

«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2008, 03:21:05 PM »

Quote from: Rajbir on May 13, 2008, 03:15:47 PM

Kitu bhaaji chashme lagao !

Shael bro nahi

SHALLY sis Winking

paaji,abhi chasme lagaye...haan ab sahi dikh raha hai par yeh kya, aapne shally to bold letters mein likha par sis chote se aksharo mein likha hai...aisa kyon??


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Rajbir

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Re: "APNA NA BANA KE RAKHYA"

«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2008, 03:26:13 PM »

Kitu bhaaji

Tusi minor details ch na jaawo...

Read Shally's poetry...you will enjoy it (dard, judai, vichoda, all there)


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Lovepreet

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Re: "APNA NA BANA KE RAKHYA"

«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2008, 07:29:38 PM »

Very Nice Shayrana ji . Welldone .


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k.shael

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Re: "APNA NA BANA KE RAKHYA"

«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2008, 05:44:05 AM »

THANX SO MUCH....
RAJBEER,
I JUST WRITE MY HEART FEELINGS,
U LIKE THESE LINES IT'S MY PLEASURE....
BY. K.SHAEL


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k.shael

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Re: "APNA NA BANA KE RAKHYA"

«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2008, 05:46:44 AM »

THANX SOOOOOOOO MUCH,
KHAWISH JI....
YE AAP SAB KI INAYAT HAI KI
MEIN AAP SAB KE SAATH HO....
AUR KUCH LIKH PA RAHI HOON....
YES, I'M A GIRL, MY NAME IS SHALLY
BUT I LIKE MY NAME K.SHAEL
SOOOOOORY FOR U'R CONFUSION
BY. K.SHAEL


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k.shael

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Re: "APNA NA BANA KE RAKHYA"

«Reply #10 on: May 14, 2008, 05:50:52 AM »

THANK YOU SO MUCH....
LOVEPREET....
MEIN AISE HI LIKHTI RAHOONGI,
AAP SAB MUJHE MERI GALTIYAAN BATATE REHNA....
BY. K.SHAEL


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Sonu

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Re: "APNA NA BANA KE RAKHYA"

«Reply #11 on: May 16, 2008, 05:32:00 AM »

shael ji javab nahi tuhdaa tusi tey ahg dey bhamedh machi phirdey hu... rajbir jara fire bigade nu taan boloww veylsey hi gadiyaa bhajiyaa phirdey hu kuch kam dhandaa vi ker leyaa kro...

shael ji valey hi tusi kamal da likhdey hu


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k.shael

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Re: "APNA NA BANA KE RAKHYA"

«Reply #12 on: May 17, 2008, 08:45:31 AM »

THANX SOOOOOO MUCH,
SONU JI....
BY. K.SHAEL


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