HALCHAL

by Naya_Daur on June 09, 2006, 06:19:04 AM
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Naya_Daur
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Halchal hai badi dil vich,chahat hai kuch nigahan vich
Mausam hai mohhabat da,nazakat hai kuch adawan vich

sahan vich koi  dhadhak reha,seene vich jo machal reha
Rabb kare,eh zindagi  nikal jawe,bas uhdiyan bahawan vich

kuch mehak pyaar di main pa lawa,koi Geet pyar da main ga lawa
awain na gujar jawe kitte zindagi saari,enna be-waQt salahan vich

eh dil di kahani kade  mukdi nahi mukayan
naghme tan muk jande ne,mohabbat de rahvan vich

injh murdh murdh ke na  dekh mainu tu rakeeba
ajeeb jeha mitha dard hai,ajj inha hawavan vich ...!!!
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Anushka
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«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2006, 06:26:57 AM »
Quote from: "burniing_desiires"


Halchal hai badi dil vich,chahat hai kuch nigahan vich
Mausam hai mohhabat da,nazakat hai kuch adawan vich

sahan vich koi  dhadhak reha,seene vich jo machal reha
Rabb kare,eh zindagi  nikal jawe,bas uhdiyan bahawan vich

kuch mehak pyaar di main pa lawa,koi Geet pyar da main ga lawa
awain na gujar jawe kitte zindagi saari,enna be-waQt salahan vich

eh dil di kahani kade  mukdi nahi mukayan
naghme tan muk jande ne,mohabbat de rahvan vich

injh murdh murdh ke na  dekh mainu tu rakeeba
ajeeb jeha mitha dard hai,ajj inha hawavan vich ...!!!



Wah wah Jeet bahut khub...

hawavan vich teriya hi khusbuyeh...
Jind kerda aa tera kol ajava...
Ek var menu day tu avazaa
tay meh enj karkay teray kol avaa...

Tenu dekh dekh kay tay meh jeene aa
Sariya umra meh udikdi revaa
Bas ek var tu kar menu isharaa
Tera kol meh avaa...
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Sonu
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«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2006, 06:31:47 AM »
ranjitey bahut sohna likhya hia ....

bulbul ki wah wah wah keya shair mara hai ganjey key tind mey keya bayr mara hai laughing4laughing4 hahha... tuvi ghat nahi hai javab deyn vech vadiya lihiya hai
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2006, 06:32:59 AM »
Quote from: "Anushka"

Wah wah Jeet bahut khub...

hawavan vich teriya hi khusbuyeh...
Jind kerda aa tera kol ajava...
Ek var menu day tu avazaa
tay meh enj karkay teray kol avaa...

Tenu dekh dekh kay tay meh jeene aa
Sariya umra meh udikdi revaa
Bas ek var tu kar menu isharaa
Tera kol meh avaa...


har sah nal tenu yaad kare
har dhadkan nal tera naam lawe
ek var nahi so var kawe
dil awazan maare tenu
jithey pehli var mile se
uthe baith ajj v tera intezar kare..!!!
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Anushka
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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2006, 06:48:14 AM »
Sonuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu gal kiti aa .. bas Jeet tay kamal da sher likhda nay..
chel ek hor kosish kardi aa...

Chavaa chavaa... thendiaa chavaa...
jithay phelivar milay si.. uthay hi haa
udikaa meh keraa teri ind mahiyaa
ek var nei soh var kandi aa
ek var meray kan(ear) vich kehjaa
Tu meri dil di dhadkan aa
eh hi tay meh kendi aa
meh teray dil vich rendi aa
hai teriya udikaa..
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2006, 06:57:34 AM »
Quote from: "Anushka"
Sonuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu gal kiti aa .. bas Jeet tay kamal da sher likhda nay..
chel ek hor kosish kardi aa...

Chavaa chavaa... thendiaa chavaa...
jithay phelivar milay si.. uthay hi haa
udikaa meh keraa teri ind mahiyaa
ek var nei soh var kandi aa
ek var meray kan(ear) vich kehjaa
Tu meri dil di dhadkan aa
eh hi tay meh kendi aa
meh teray dil vich rendi aa
hai teriya udikaa..


assi sher maar v dayi de ne ...  :lol:  :lol:  (jk) :p
bhut sohna andaz hai, bolliyan wala .. BEAUTY :D
thanks Sonu :wink:


ajja rakane murd uhi raasteyan te
ankhan di udeek vadh.dhi jandi aa

baitha han ajj main usse hi maseet utte
chum chum pheran uhi taaveet main

kitte bhuj na jawe sadde pyaar da diwa
zamaane di thandi hawa,dekh vagdhi jaandi aa ...!!!
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Anushka
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2006, 07:11:32 AM »
Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Quote from: "Anushka"
Sonuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu gal kiti aa .. bas Jeet tay kamal da sher likhda nay..
chel ek hor kosish kardi aa...

Chavaa chavaa... thendiaa chavaa...
jithay phelivar milay si.. uthay hi haa
udikaa meh keraa teri ind mahiyaa
ek var nei soh var kandi aa
ek var meray kan(ear) vich kehjaa
Tu meri dil di dhadkan aa
eh hi tay meh kendi aa
meh teray dil vich rendi aa
hai teriya udikaa..


assi sher maar v dayi de ne ...  :lol:  :lol:  (jk) :p
bhut sohna andaz hai, bolliyan wala .. BEAUTY :D
thanks Sonu :wink:


ajja rakane murd uhi raasteyan te
ankhan di udeek vadh.dhi jandi aa

baitha han ajj main usse hi maseet utte
chum chum pheran uhi taaveet main

kitte bhuj na jawe sadde pyaar da diwa
zamaane di thandi hawa,dekh vagdhi jaandi aa ...!!!



wah ji jeet..... bahut sona likhya nay

Hava nu vagenday...
tey tu makam par hi reh..
Jineiyah uchiya masedda nay
unhi gehri meri chaa hai
na hondevi tu HALCHAL veh
bas hun ek vaar HAA karja veh.... :D
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2006, 07:21:20 AM »
Quote from: "Anushka"

wah ji jeet..... bahut sona likhya nay

Hava nu vagenday...
tey tu makam par hi reh..
Jineiyah uchiya masedda nay
unhi gehri meri chaa hai
na hondevi tu HALCHAL veh
bas hun ek vaar HAA karja veh.... :D



kyun uddekan ne ajj v mainu teriyan
kyun jhalda han tere layi main haneriyan
kyun jaan k v anjaan hoyi jandi hain tu
ki tenu nahi pata,galan dil diyan meriyan ...!!!
 :D
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Anushka
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2006, 08:43:10 AM »
Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Quote from: "Anushka"

wah ji jeet..... bahut sona likhya nay

Hava nu vagenday...
tey tu makam par hi reh..
Jineiyah uchiya masedda nay
unhi gehri meri chaa hai
na hondevi tu HALCHAL veh
bas hun ek vaar HAA karja veh.... :D



kyun uddekan ne ajj v mainu teriyan
kyun jhalda han tere layi main haneriyan
kyun jaan k v anjaan hoyi jandi hain tu
ki tenu nahi pata,galan dil diyan meriyan ...!!!
 :D



 :D bas chad di kala nu Bolay Sonay Ha......!!!

Galan teriya dilah diyan
jana meh kisterah?
Jad poochdi vi sa ...
tay tu kendaa vi naa...
Hun kis diya udikaa meray mahiyaa
jo hogeye bejaan si aa
na rehi meri akhiyaa
tay na rehi teri udikaa!!!!
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2006, 06:04:42 AM »
Bahoot khoob Anu and Jeet!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2006, 07:53:12 AM »
Quote from: "Pankhuri2"
Bahoot khoob Anu and Jeet!!

Thanks Pooja ji
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Anushka
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«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2006, 08:03:50 AM »
Quote from: "Pankhuri2"
Bahoot khoob Anu and Jeet!!


sHUKRIYA PANKHURI... :D
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Sonu
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«Reply #12 on: June 12, 2006, 05:01:29 AM »
anu tey ranjitey bahut sohna likhiya hia dova ney... na bulbul meynu nahi peta si to ena sohna likhdi hai... lagi rey likhdi reh punjabi vech sohna likhdi hia.... Usual Smile
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Sonu
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«Reply #13 on: June 12, 2006, 05:02:59 AM »
khush ravey to sadha asi khuda to yea fariyaad kerdey haan
tusi meyrey ek sawaal da jawab do
ki tusi vi sanu kadhi yaad kerdey ho
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Anushka
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«Reply #14 on: June 12, 2006, 05:07:39 AM »
Quote from: "Sonu"
khush ravey to sadha asi khuda to yea fariyaad kerdey haan
tusi meyrey ek sawaal da jawab do
ki tusi vi sanu kadhi yaad kerdey ho



Sonuuuuuuuuuuuuuu meri jaan yaar tera asra eh hun tay rok v na rukay gi geddi :D heeheheh
chel  ek gal dasdi aa..

Yaad una nu kita janda aa
jina nu pulia janda aa
Massa massa si aayi maut
ik hor hii adchan pe gayi
Tusi kal milan da vaada kar gayee
saanu ummer vdhaani pe gayii....

Luv u and miss you
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