HALCHAL

by Naya_Daur on June 09, 2006, 06:19:04 AM
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Sonu
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«Reply #15 on: June 12, 2006, 05:49:40 AM »
anu mey boli nahi hyegi yaar jeyda sarey mohaney valiya ni utha deyni hai chika mar mar key.... bulbul koi na mey teyrey nal hi haan likhdi reh... jey koi gayal hu gaya tey merya jima nahi  :lol:  :lol: per phir vhi to ghabravi na likhdi rani mey hoon naa  :lol:  :lol: ....

sohan likha hia per kidha curaya hai ahvi dasdey  :lol:

nal rehndey rehndey ehda hi waqt guzer janda hai
door hun to badh kaun kenu yaad kerda hai
jee lo eh pal jado asi ek dujey dey nal haan
kal ki peta, waqt kithey ley javey

Quote from: "Anushka"
Quote from: "Sonu"
khush ravey to sadha asi khuda to yea fariyaad kerdey haan
tusi meyrey ek sawaal da jawab do
ki tusi vi sanu kadhi yaad kerdey ho



Sonuuuuuuuuuuuuuu meri jaan yaar tera asra eh hun tay rok v na rukay gi geddi :D heeheheh
chel  ek gal dasdi aa..

Yaad una nu kita janda aa
jina nu pulia janda aa
Massa massa si aayi maut
ik hor hii adchan pe gayi
Tusi kal milan da vaada kar gayee
saanu ummer vdhaani pe gayii....

Luv you and miss you
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Anushka
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«Reply #16 on: June 12, 2006, 09:16:08 AM »
Quote from: "Sonu"
anu mey boli nahi hyegi yaar jeyda sarey mohaney valiya ni utha deyni hai chika mar mar key.... bulbul koi na mey teyrey nal hi haan likhdi reh... jey koi gayal hu gaya tey merya jima nahi  :lol:  :lol: per phir vhi to ghabravi na likhdi rani mey hoon naa  :lol:  :lol: ....

sohan likha hia per kidha curaya hai ahvi dasdey  :lol:

nal rehndey rehndey ehda hi waqt guzer janda hai
door hun to badh kaun kenu yaad kerda hai
jee lo eh pal jado asi ek dujey dey nal haan
kal ki peta, waqt kithey ley javey

Quote from: "Anushka"
Quote from: "Sonu"
khush ravey to sadha asi khuda to yea fariyaad kerdey haan
tusi meyrey ek sawaal da jawab do
ki tusi vi sanu kadhi yaad kerdey ho



Sonuuuuuuuuuuuuuu meri jaan yaar tera asra eh hun tay rok v na rukay gi geddi :D heeheheh
chel  ek gal dasdi aa..

Yaad una nu kita janda aa
jina nu pulia janda aa
Massa massa si aayi maut
ik hor hii adchan pe gayi
Tusi kal milan da vaada kar gayee
saanu ummer vdhaani pe gayii....

Luv you and miss you



Sonu.... yea kida legiya.. cheeka tay nei naa??? Chel yar jo likhya dilo likhya ka ki kebar chori karlenday na.... :D

kal diya gala tu jaan,
Meh tay aaj aa....
duroo dekhkay tera ehsaas kardi aa
dekhay dekhay sari jind lang jani aa...
hun aah meray kol bhait jaa,
kal ki hoveh gah ki peta...
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Rajbir
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«Reply #17 on: June 12, 2006, 09:32:57 AM »
Quote from: "Anushka"
Sonuuuuuuuuuuuuuu meri jaan yaar tera asra eh hun tay rok v na rukay gi geddi :D heeheheh
.........
Luv you and miss you


Anu

Ki gal gaddi diyan breakan fail ho gaiyan ne  :D

Horan nu vi love you and miss you kar leya kar  Puzzled !  (jk)

Rajbir
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Anushka
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«Reply #18 on: June 12, 2006, 09:35:11 AM »
Quote from: "Rajbir"
Quote from: "Anushka"
Sonuuuuuuuuuuuuuu meri jaan yaar tera asra eh hun tay rok v na rukay gi geddi :D heeheheh
.........
Luv you and miss you


Anu

Ki gal gaddi diyan breakan fail ho gaiyan ne  :D

Horan nu vi love you and miss you kar leya kar  Puzzled !  (jk)

Rajbir


NA RAJBIR... gedi tay tez hi chelan deyi aa bas sonu denal tey puraniya yaarana aa tusi deso tusi kyu inhay kush oo
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Pooja
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«Reply #19 on: June 12, 2006, 06:22:05 PM »
Quote from: "burniing_desiires"


Halchal hai badi dil vich,chahat hai kuch nigahan vich
Mausam hai mohhabat da,nazakat hai kuch adawan vich

sahan vich koi  dhadhak reha,seene vich jo machal reha
Rabb kare,eh zindagi  nikal jawe,bas uhdiyan bahawan vich

kuch mehak pyaar di main pa lawa,koi Geet pyar da main ga lawa
awain na gujar jawe kitte zindagi saari,enna be-waQt salahan vich

eh dil di kahani kade  mukdi nahi mukayan
naghme tan muk jande ne,mohabbat de rahvan vich

injh murdh murdh ke na  dekh mainu tu rakeeba
ajeeb jeha mitha dard hai,ajj inha hawavan vich ...!!!


Wah Jeet kaya baat hai, kamal ka likha hai, jab likhaty ho dil se likhaty ho, hamesha ki tarah dil ko chu jaane wala..... ek koshish meri bhi meri Truity Fruity Punjabi vich........

Halchal hai badi dil vich, Raz hai kuch nigahan vich
pard sake tan pard le, ki gal hai meriyan adawan vich

machal rahe han jo armaan, uh raag hai dhadkan vich
mehek de geet main ga rahi han, tere hi khayalan vich

Jal rahi han jis nal,uh agg hai teri inha do bahan vich
bhatak diyan sahvan nu ki samjhavan, jo gavachiyan ne tere khumar vich

vagdiyan rehan eh hawavan sadha sadiyan rahan vich
na muke kade eh nagme,teri meri zindgani vich
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Rajbir
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«Reply #20 on: June 12, 2006, 06:34:41 PM »
Pooja

Wah behna teri Truity Fruity Punjabi di ki gal hai  :D

Bahut sona likhiya e !

Rajbir
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Pooja
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«Reply #21 on: June 12, 2006, 07:42:24 PM »
thanks Veer ji!!!! Acha padne ko mile to acha khud hi likha jaata hai.... janati hu jitani achi meri punjabi hai... sad5
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Anushka
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«Reply #22 on: June 12, 2006, 09:36:14 PM »
Acha likha Pooja... wah belay belay hojai gi hun Jeet di!! :D
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Pooja
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«Reply #23 on: June 12, 2006, 10:13:19 PM »
Quote from: "burniing_desiires"

har sah nal tenu yaad kare
har dhadkan nal tera naam lawe
ek var nahi so var kawe
dil awazan maare tenu
jithey pehli var mile se
uthe baith ajj v tera intezar kare..!!!


armaan hai dil vich, juban khamosh hai
sard hai hath-panw, dil mai utha shor hai
hu wahin mai, jahan kar rahe mera intzaar ho
tum hi payaar mera, tum hi dil ka karaar ho
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #24 on: June 13, 2006, 04:16:33 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"

Wah Jeet kaya baat hai, kamal ka likha hai, jab likhaty ho dil se likhaty ho, hamesha ki tarah dil ko chu jaane wala..... ek koshish meri bhi meri Truity Fruity Punjabi vich........

Halchal hai badi dil vich, Raz hai kuch nigahan vich
pard sake tan pard le, ki gal hai meriyan adawan vich

machal rahe han jo armaan, uh raag hai dhadkan vich
mehek de geet main ga rahi han, tere hi khayalan vich

Jal rahi han jis nal,uh agg hai teri inha do bahan vich
bhatak diyan sahvan nu ki samjhavan, jo gavachiyan ne tere khumar vich

vagdiyan rehan eh hawavan sadha sadiyan rahan vich
na muke kade eh nagme,teri meri zindgani vich


tuhaadi truity fruity  bhut vadhiya hai  ji... eh special treat mildi rehni chahdi hai  :oops:  :oops:

just Superb :D
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #25 on: June 13, 2006, 04:37:04 AM »
shukariyan Jeet ji!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #26 on: June 13, 2006, 05:55:06 AM »
ahow bulbul hun thik hia evey sotey paye huey luka nu vi chika mar key utha deyni hai :lol:  :lol: ... ahow chal koi na churi da hi sahyee kuch likhiya tey hai....acha ek gal tey dass gaddi keydi nal chalandi paye hai desel nal key patrol nal.. key donu mix kerkey  :lol:  :lol: ...

sohna likhiya hia likhdi reh hai baliyeh :lol:  mey teyrey nal haa lagi rey kitey na kitey gaddi vaj hi jaow  :lol:  :lol:

Quote from: "Anushka"
Quote from: "Sonu"
anu mey boli nahi hyegi yaar jeyda sarey mohaney valiya ni utha deyni hai chika mar mar key.... bulbul koi na mey teyrey nal hi haan likhdi reh... jey koi gayal hu gaya tey merya jima nahi  :lol:  :lol: per phir vhi to ghabravi na likhdi rani mey hoon naa  :lol:  :lol: ....

sohan likha hia per kidha curaya hai ahvi dasdey  :lol:

nal rehndey rehndey ehda hi waqt guzer janda hai
door hun to badh kaun kenu yaad kerda hai
jee lo eh pal jado asi ek dujey dey nal haan
kal ki peta, waqt kithey ley javey

Quote from: "Anushka"
Quote from: "Sonu"
khush ravey to sadha asi khuda to yea fariyaad kerdey haan
tusi meyrey ek sawaal da jawab do
ki tusi vi sanu kadhi yaad kerdey ho



Sonuuuuuuuuuuuuuu meri jaan yaar tera asra eh hun tay rok v na rukay gi geddi :D heeheheh
chel  ek gal dasdi aa..

Yaad una nu kita janda aa
jina nu pulia janda aa
Massa massa si aayi maut
ik hor hii adchan pe gayi
Tusi kal milan da vaada kar gayee
saanu ummer vdhaani pe gayii....

Luv you and miss you



Sonu.... yea kida legiya.. cheeka tay nei naa??? Chel yar jo likhya dilo likhya ka ki kebar chori karlenday na.... :D

kal diya gala tu jaan,
Meh tay aaj aa....
duroo dekhkay tera ehsaas kardi aa
dekhay dekhay sari jind lang jani aa...
hun aah meray kol bhait jaa,
kal ki hoveh gah ki peta...
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Sonu
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«Reply #27 on: June 13, 2006, 05:58:20 AM »
Sadhu maharaj jey uhney keyta na sariay no tey luka di chikaa nikal janiya hai  :lol:  :lol:  ehda kuch jana nahi luka vech ladi ho jow key usney love  u miss u kinu keya hai  :lol:  :lol: phila hi oh chan chadi phirdi hai :lol:  :lol:

Quote from: "Rajbir"
Quote from: "Anushka"
Sonuuuuuuuuuuuuuu meri jaan yaar tera asra eh hun tay rok v na rukay gi geddi :D heeheheh
.........
Luv you and miss you


Anu

Ki gal gaddi diyan breakan fail ho gaiyan ne  :D

Horan nu vi love you and miss you kar leya kar  Puzzled !  (jk)

Rajbir
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Sonu
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«Reply #28 on: June 13, 2006, 06:02:41 AM »
Pooja ji javab nahi tuhada yaar eni sohni punjabi likhdey hu tey usnu naa tuty fruity deyndey ho..... bahut sohna likhiya hai tusi ehda hi sanu dose deyndey rehna  Usual Smile

 

Quote from: "Pooja"
Quote from: "burniing_desiires"


Halchal hai badi dil vich,chahat hai kuch nigahan vich
Mausam hai mohhabat da,nazakat hai kuch adawan vich

sahan vich koi  dhadhak reha,seene vich jo machal reha
Rabb kare,eh zindagi  nikal jawe,bas uhdiyan bahawan vich

kuch mehak pyaar di main pa lawa,koi Geet pyar da main ga lawa
awain na gujar jawe kitte zindagi saari,enna be-waQt salahan vich

eh dil di kahani kade  mukdi nahi mukayan
naghme tan muk jande ne,mohabbat de rahvan vich

injh murdh murdh ke na  dekh mainu tu rakeeba
ajeeb jeha mitha dard hai,ajj inha hawavan vich ...!!!


Wah Jeet kaya baat hai, kamal ka likha hai, jab likhaty ho dil se likhaty ho, hamesha ki tarah dil ko chu jaane wala..... ek koshish meri bhi meri Truity Fruity Punjabi vich........

Halchal hai badi dil vich, Raz hai kuch nigahan vich
pard sake tan pard le, ki gal hai meriyan adawan vich

machal rahe han jo armaan, uh raag hai dhadkan vich
mehek de geet main ga rahi han, tere hi khayalan vich

Jal rahi han jis nal,uh agg hai teri inha do bahan vich
bhatak diyan sahvan nu ki samjhavan, jo gavachiyan ne tere khumar vich

vagdiyan rehan eh hawavan sadha sadiyan rahan vich
na muke kade eh nagme,teri meri zindgani vich
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Sonu
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«Reply #29 on: June 13, 2006, 06:04:13 AM »
wonderful jitey tey pooja ji...

Quote from: "Pooja"
Quote from: "burniing_desiires"

har sah nal tenu yaad kare
har dhadkan nal tera naam lawe
ek var nahi so var kawe
dil awazan maare tenu
jithey pehli var mile se
uthe baith ajj v tera intezar kare..!!!


armaan hai dil vich, juban khamosh hai
sard hai hath-panw, dil mai utha shor hai
hu wahin mai, jahan kar rahe mera intzaar ho
tum hi payaar mera, tum hi dil ka karaar ho
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