hissab e zindagi (full poetry) sharing

by komal1990 on September 10, 2016, 08:31:38 AM
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Eh kitab da hissab Mai ni rakh skdi
Kuch glla meriya jo Mai ni das skdi

Raah koi lbbda nhi , manzil duur ho gyi.
 sheeshe di c duniya jo chuur-2 ho gyi
Jo beetya c Kal mera ajj jaan dA
Ja oh jan da ya mera rabb Jan da
Hun rabb De bhrose v nhi reh skdi
Ohna pathra nu rabb v e chnga jan da

Raat din socha vch mai hisaab krdi
Tere mool te mai hje tK byaaj bhrdi
Oh sma jo hun kdi mud k nhi auna
Eh jande hoye v mai aas rkhdi

E kittab da hissab Mai  ni  rkh skdi
Kuch glla meriya jo Mai nhi das skdi  

Purani Ji kahani tu smbhal k rkh lyi
Jo hona c o hoya tu Sabr rakh lyi
Mere sabra da kadha kando paar ho gya
Mithe jheel da c paani jo zeher ho gya
E kitaab da hisab...

Saare Jan De c Sach jo Tere Nal c kharey
Ek Mai te mera Sach Sb naal c larrey
Teri duniyA DAARI TE C JITT ho gyi
Us din to meri duniya veeran how gyi
Hje Kal di c gal mere vall da c tu
Kisi Hor diya akhan da guroor ho gya
Mere hisse di khushi kise na krk
Kise Hor De kyaariya da ful ho gya....

Eh kitaab da hissab Mai ni rakh skdi
Kuch glla meriya jo mai nhi dass skd. ...
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«Reply #1 on: September 10, 2016, 08:56:59 AM »
Beautiful!
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«Reply #2 on: September 10, 2016, 09:17:26 AM »
very  nice komal ji
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«Reply #3 on: September 10, 2016, 09:09:01 PM »
Kamal jee bagut hee sunder likhyaa tussi bas waa ee waa.
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2016, 03:45:31 PM »
Thnx for d appreciation
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