hissab e zindagi

by komal1990 on September 10, 2016, 02:43:29 AM
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Eh kitaab da hissab Mai ni rakh skdi,
kuch glla merriya jo mai nhi dass  sakdi.
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«Reply #1 on: September 10, 2016, 04:01:32 AM »
NEED SOME MORE LINES TO COMPLETE THIS POETRY
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«Reply #2 on: September 10, 2016, 04:34:58 AM »
Sure
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«Reply #3 on: September 10, 2016, 06:02:17 AM »
Nice...keep writing.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: September 10, 2016, 09:38:32 PM »
Eh kitaab da hissab Mai ni rakh skdi,
kuch glla merriya jo mai nhi dass  sakdi.
bahut hee wadiya likhyaa ey jee.
Kuchh galaan meriyan jo main nahin dass sakdi
Eis line de baad te kuchh dassan nun rehnda ee nahin...
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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2016, 03:32:23 PM »
Thnx all
@ surindern I h'm written d full poetry.. there is lot to write bb
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«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2016, 03:15:41 PM »
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