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by komalpreet kaur on April 06, 2010, 07:32:12 AM
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main door kitae vehendae chinnah di gunz ban rahi haan,
main usdae wich khidae kamalaan di khuboo ban rahi haan,
main us wichon nikli har boond da ehsaas ban rahi haan,
main us toh dae na juda hoon wali leher ban rahi haan,
main us wich veh rahe pavitar pani di pavitarta ban rahi haan,
main usdi har navi leher di udeek ban rahi haan,
main usdae pani di machli ban usda saath ban rahi haan,
main usdae pani tae pae har kiran di chamak ban rahi haan,
main usdae pani di thandak ban rahi haan,
main usdae har konae di gehrae toh wakif ho rahi haan,
main usdi komalta da sarot ban rahi haan,
main usdi khubsurati da gawah ban rahi haan,
main usdi gehrae ch chupae motiyaan da akash ban rahi haan,
main usdi kadae na khatam hoon wali gehrae ban rahi haan,
kis tarah dasan tae kis tarah baeyaan karan,
main har pal har lamha bus usdi hi ban rahi haan,
tae usdiyaan lehran ch usdi machli ban taer rahi haan.[/i][/glow][/color]
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«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2010, 07:41:31 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Komalji..

Bahut Hi vadiya Creation..Ishq De Khumaar Vich Dubeya Hoya..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2010, 07:53:56 AM »
thnxs khawaish ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 06, 2010, 08:02:54 AM »
wah wah wah
wah ji wah

kya baat hai komal ji... wah wah ...


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