minnat

by sumir on August 29, 2009, 03:09:06 PM
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kuj kehn nu man kre, naal tere vehn nu man kre, aa mehrama tenu gal naal laava, lai lvaan sb balaavan, shiddat naal chahea hai , arse baad paya hai, ki ki kahaan hun mai, tere ander khud nu paya hai, rab nu paya hai, bin tere pathar ho javangi, haan mai murda ho javangi, ki kahaan k tu ruk jaayen, ki khaan k sb smj jayen, bin tere nhi hai guzara, auna nhi ae pal dubara, akh khuli ta spna c, mai te mera gum hi apna c, spne vich hi mil jaya kr, even na tarsaya kr, roj nhi ta kde kde aaya kr, meri ruh ch smaya kr, meri ruh hi lai jaya kr, mere saah hi lai jaya kr, bs aaya kr, bedarda kde ta aya kr.............
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2009, 01:26:34 AM »
Bahut khoob Sumir ji,beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Mast_Malang_Munda
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2009, 08:51:25 AM »
Awesome
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sumir
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«Reply #3 on: March 18, 2010, 06:51:23 AM »
kuj kehn nu man kre,
 naal tere vehn nu man kre,
 aa mehrama tenu gal naal laava, 
lai lvaan sb balaavan,
 shiddat naal chahea hai ,
 arse baad paya hai,
 ki ki kahaan hun mai,
 tere ander khud nu paya hai,
 rab nu paya hai,
 bin tere pathar ho javangi,
 haan mai murda ho javangi,
 ki kahaan k tu ruk jaayen,
 
ki khaan k sb smj jayen,
 bin tere nhi hai guzara,
 auna nhi ae pal dubara,
 akh khuli ta spna c, 
mai te mera gum hi apna c,
 spne vich hi mil jaya kr,
 even na tarsaya kr,
 roj nhi ta kde kde aaya kr,
 meri ruh ch smaya kr, 
meri ruh hi lai jaya kr,
 mere saah hi lai jaya kr,
 bs aaya kr, bedarda kde ta aya kr.............
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j@ss
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«Reply #4 on: March 22, 2010, 05:01:39 PM »
very touchy poem ji
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sumir
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«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2010, 03:18:46 AM »
thxx j@ss ggggg!!!!!!!
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