MUJHE TUM YAAD AAYE

by pritam tripathi on October 30, 2011, 05:47:54 AM
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TERE PAAYAL KE GHUNGHROO CHAN SE BAJTE HAIN
SANNATE ME AAWAJ HOTI HAI CHOODI KHAN SE BAJTI HAI
YE AAWAJE NAHI TERE AANE KI SOOCHAK HAIN
JAB TUJHE KHOJNE BAITHE MUJHE TUM YAAD AAYE

JAB BARSAAT KI KUCH BOONDE DHARTI PAR GIR BAITHI
HUI DHARTI NA SANTRIPT BOOND ASTITVA KHO BAITHI
BOOND KA TO KAAM THA DHARTI ME MIL JAANA
JAB BOOND DHOONDNE BAITHA MUJHE TUM YAAD AAYE

MUJHE MANDIR ME JANA THA MAIN MADIRALAY ME JA BAITHA
THA PAANI KA MAIN PYASA MAIN JAAM PEE BAITHA
YE GALTI NAHI MERI SAB PRABHU KI MAYA HAI
MUJH PAR NASHA THA CHAYA JAB MUJHE TUM YAAD AAYE

TUJHE MAASHOOQ MAIN KEH DOON YA TUJHE BEWAFA SAMJHOON
TUJHE PYAAR ME KAR LOON YA TUJHE NAFRAT SE MAIN DEKHOON
YE SOCH NAHI MERI TERI CHAHAT KA JAADO HAI
AISE KASHMAKASH ME AAYE JAB MUJHE TUM YAAD AAYE...

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«Reply #1 on: October 30, 2011, 07:32:19 AM »

Pritam Ji,

Bahut achchhee koshish hai
keep it up and if I could
advise read good poets work
also to understand technical
things of poetry.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2011, 09:11:36 AM »
Pritam ji,bahut sundar rachna prastut ki hai.Meri ore se dheron badhai sweekar kijiye.Hasan
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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2011, 10:23:55 AM »
thanks a lot for your suggestion shukla sir
i keep in my mind and work upon that


and hasan ji very very thank you to you
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2011, 10:31:57 AM »
boht khoob pritam ji
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«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2011, 10:35:18 AM »
thank you sahil ji
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«Reply #6 on: November 05, 2012, 05:43:32 PM »
siddiqui sir bahut bahut shukriya sarahane ke liye
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