SONE di EET......

by Naya_Daur on February 08, 2006, 11:27:43 AM
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Naya_Daur
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Sone di eet mahiya,
rab tenu kalam diti...ehde julam na likh mahiya...

Tenu khabar na koi jehri sade naal hoyi  
jive ujre aan asi oove ujre na koi
 kidaan kari da gujara,
kidaan kari da gujara,kidaan kari da gujara...
SADA RAB JAANDA
sanu kina tu pyara sada rab jaanda...

-Aive naveyaan de nasheya ch choor ho gayi hai  
kehdi gal piche sanu chhad door ho gayi hai...
majburi si ja laara....SADA RAB JAANDA...
sanu kina tu pyara sada rab jaanda...(nm)


yes its not mine,, but  like to start it with this post
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #1 on: February 08, 2006, 11:36:01 AM »
Assin pyar dil to kita si,
par oh utto utto jatonde rahe,

je dilon pyar nahi si karna tan,
 oh kyon sade tute dil nu staunde rahe,

ohna dil layeya ameeran nal,
 te sade dil nu agg lagaunde rahe,

assin akhan de ashkan nal,
apne dil di agg bajhonde rahe...
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #2 on: February 08, 2006, 05:34:17 PM »
kamaal ka likha hai.........spec. " aasin pyaar....bajhonde rahe"
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nikki
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2006, 06:28:03 PM »
bahut vadhiya likhiya B_D...

je sanu pata hunda laggi da anjaam
tan assin launde hi na

par je pyar na karde tan
tainu kuch pal layi hi sahi "sajna"paunde hi na

pyar oh anmol tohfa hai rabb da
jisde layi razi ho jaanda hai dil sabb da
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2006, 07:21:56 PM »
thnks isha,,for appreciating

bhut vadhiya likhya hai tusi nikki

Mitha intzar te intzar nalo yar mitha ,
mitha yar te yar nalo pyar mitha,
mitha pyar te pyar nalo mithi sadi yari,
es to mitha kuch ni milna lab lai duniya sari.
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Sonu
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«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2006, 05:11:51 AM »
jeet wonderful... very nice nikki ji...
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nikki
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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2006, 03:32:26 PM »
nice BD..n Thanx Sonu..

sone di ett lagwa layi sajna
apne dil de mehal nu

hun saambh-2 rakhde ne
iss kade na lute jaan wale mehal nu

kyonki dil tan ohi gum ho sakda
jis di dhadkan hove

kisse de pyar ch jehda ro sakda hove
kisse di mohabbat ch jehda kho sakda hove
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2006, 04:50:35 PM »
na sone diyan ettan
na heere de mahal

yarri uthe layie
jithe yaadan de phul
sada kird de rehne!!


(in the very first poem eet = SLATE not brick,just in case ,if u have misunderstood, )

very well written nikki ji...
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nikki
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2006, 07:16:23 PM »
thanx B_D..
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Sonu
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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2006, 03:09:01 AM »
u r welcome nikki...

wonderful nikki tey jeet...

huney kol see kandiyaan di chuben,
key khushbo mehak gulab di kaliyaan vech bahar ha jandi,
sada vaqt tey guzer chaleya jaa he reha hai,
peta keno ahkhri safer di ghadi ah jandi...
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2006, 05:36:12 PM »
Ek saach zindagi
Duja saach Mout
Teeza saach saadi yaari aardia

Rabb russe ya jag russe
sada tan Tere nal vaasda jahan  belliya!
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Sonu
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2006, 03:14:30 AM »
sanu cha nahi jindgi di...
sanu perva nahi mout di...
hon bhayve rab rusey yea jag rusey
sanu chaa hia teyrey miln di...
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #12 on: February 17, 2006, 06:55:50 PM »
Kyu har vele usdi udeek g rehndi aa,
kyu us nal milan di taang g rehndi aa,
kyu duniya soundi te mein jagda,
kyu aakihya vich 1 usdi hi tasvir  rehndi aa??
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Sonu
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«Reply #13 on: February 18, 2006, 02:59:55 AM »
sanu sajna di her veyley udeedk hai rehndi keo ki asi ajj vi ohno chaney haan,
sanu ohdey milan di tang g rehndi hia keo ki asi ohno apna keyney haan,
duniya tey jagdi rehendi hai luka dey ghar puten vastey,
ishq jagdey ney mehboba dey vastey
ahkiyaan vech tasveer yaar di hai keo ki us vech oh rehnda hai...
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #14 on: February 18, 2006, 08:30:55 AM »
jide waste apni jind rouli
usne hi mere dukhan di kahni likhi

jisnu phull samjh ke pani ditta
uh kikkaran de taali nikli
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