tere bajo

by komalpreet kaur on August 14, 2009, 07:49:17 AM
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tere harfa nae aaena ravaya ke hun,
hanju v suk gae.
tere sabda wichaaena jehar ke,
asi peendae peendae muk gae.
tere vichorah ajeha ke,
asi wang patiya murjah gae.
tere murrh aaoun di koi udeek nae,
phir v asi udeka di sulli jhul gae.
tere pyaar nae aaena badnaam kita ,
ke asi wang kakah rul gae.
tere wallon kitae sare wadae v,
aaj kaaudiyaan dae pa tul gae.
ekale baith asi bus aena sochdae ,
ki teri dargah vich sade ki mul pae.
tere bajo sanu inj lagae ,
ki asi apnae hanjuyaan dae paa hi tul gae.
tere baajo asi yeh sajna ,
bina mariyaan hi mitti ch rul gae.
kadae kadae asi sochdae haan,
ki tusi aaedaan kidaan sanu bhul gae.
tere jaan toh baad sadae haanjuaan naal,
tere ditae daag thul gae..
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: August 14, 2009, 09:46:32 AM »
Bahut khoob Komal ji ,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: August 14, 2009, 04:48:27 PM »
wah kaya baat hai Komal ji... maafi chahti hu ki mujhe punjabi main likhna nahi atta... warna apka sath dene ki  poori koshish hoti!!!
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2009, 07:27:55 AM »
thnxs madhuwesh ji.n pooja ji dont worry i wll try to rite in hindi phir aap mera saath daena...
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2009, 07:41:36 AM »
Waah Kya baat hai Komal Ji.. bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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Sammual
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2009, 07:47:36 AM »
Bahut Khoob Komal Ji.
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2009, 11:59:04 AM »
thnxs sammual ji and sophi ji
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2009, 05:49:37 PM »
Bahut bahut Khoob Komal Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2009, 04:33:04 AM »
thnxs khwaish ji
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Mast_Malang_Munda
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«Reply #9 on: September 05, 2009, 08:50:09 AM »
wah kaya baat hai Komal ji... maafi chahti hu ki mujhe punjabi main likhna nahi atta... warna apka sath dene ki  poori koshish hoti!!!



Pooja ji aap hindi mein likh kr komal ji ka sath dijiye
Aur hum 5bi mei usse translate kr ke aap ka aur komal ji ka sath denge


Kidda da Idea@ Komal ji
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2009, 04:02:37 PM »
bahut accha idea hai...........
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #11 on: September 05, 2009, 04:29:07 PM »
wah komal ji, wah.. bahut hi khoob

jasbir singh
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2009, 01:50:47 PM »
thxs jass ji
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #13 on: September 10, 2009, 04:51:02 PM »
welcome komal ji
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dalwara1
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«Reply #14 on: October 21, 2009, 03:06:52 AM »
Very nice ji,

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