tere door hundiyaan hi:Love Poetry in Punjabi

komalpreet kaur

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tere door hundiyaan hi,
jivae sab door chala gaya,
jivae takdeer v muh morrh gae,
jivae na chahundiyaan v kismat mere toh niraash ho jae,

bus ki dassan tere door jandiyaan hi,
main apnae aap naal v naraaz ho gae,
mere mukhrae di muskurahat v kitae koh gae,
mere jindagi di har harkat bus othe hi tham gae.

main tainu kivae dasaan tae kivae samjhawan ,
ki tere jaan di na koi khushi mainu,
tere jaan piccho ,
zindagi cho v milli baerukhi mainu,
mereyaan saha dae mankae v hun tut rahenae,
mere bakki apnae v maitho khus rahe nae,

main tainu kis tarah samjhawaan ,
aaj meri kavita dae lafaaz v tere bare puch rahe nae..


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Re: tere door hundiyaan hi

«Reply #1 on: August 14, 2009, 06:59:09 AM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Komal ji..

Bahut Dard Hai Iss Kavita Vich..Bahut Ache


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Pooja

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Re: tere door hundiyaan hi

«Reply #2 on: August 14, 2009, 04:49:27 PM »

once again Good work Komal ji!!


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jasbirsingh

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Re: tere door hundiyaan hi

«Reply #3 on: August 14, 2009, 05:13:59 PM »

Quote from: komalpreet kaur on August 14, 2009, 06:57:15 AM

WAH KOMAL JI... bahut hi khoob keha hai tusi ....

GUM-EH-JINDAGI HUNN GUJARDI NAHI
TERA BINA JI MERA KIDHEY LAGTA NAHI
KISMAT NAL KI LADA MAIN EH "JASBIR"
TERA BINA MERI TAQDEER BADALDI NAHI

JASBIR SINGH


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komalpreet kaur

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Re: tere door hundiyaan hi

«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2009, 07:25:07 AM »

thnxs pooja ji n jasbir ji


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deepika_divya

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Re: tere door hundiyaan hi

«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2009, 07:53:51 AM »

Waah Waah Kya abaat hai Komal Ji.. bahoot bahoto Khoob !

Good Lines Jas Ji


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jasbirsingh

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Re: tere door hundiyaan hi

«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2009, 11:24:08 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on August 16, 2009, 07:53:51 AM

Waah Waah Kya abaat hai Komal Ji.. bahoot bahoto Khoob !

Good Lines Jas Ji

thanks sophi ji

jasbir singh


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komalpreet kaur

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Re: tere door hundiyaan hi

«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2009, 11:55:34 AM »

sophi ji thnxs for nic comments


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Pooja

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Re: tere door hundiyaan hi

«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2009, 06:52:33 PM »

nice lines Jass ji


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jasbirsingh

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Re: tere door hundiyaan hi

«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2009, 08:02:31 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on August 16, 2009, 06:52:33 PM

nice lines Jass ji

THANKS POOJA JI

JASBIR SINGH


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