tu kyu kita

by komalpreet kaur on August 14, 2009, 07:12:01 AM
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asi tainu apna jaan ,
tere agae dukh feroliya c,
asi taan apni zindagi da,
ik warka teri agae kholiya c.
tu sanu samjhya kyu nahi,
sanu samaj na aavae.
teri is kiti ho galti di ,
koi ramaj na aavae.
meri zinda gi har pal bahut kimti hai,
ohna palaan c kitae gam tae kitae meri hassi chuppi hai,
tu istarah kidaan ohna nu kisae hor agae khol dita,
mainu halle v samaj na aavae ,
ki tu  aaedaan kidaan sade bare bol dita.....
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«Reply #1 on: August 14, 2009, 07:40:29 AM »
bahut vadhiya likha hai tussi komal ji..... Applause Applause

Teriya bolliyaan ne zehar zindadi vich ghol ditta
Sannu samajh na aave kidaan saade baare tu bol ditta
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«Reply #2 on: August 14, 2009, 04:49:02 PM »
good work Komal ji and Poppoetry ji!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 14, 2009, 05:14:33 PM »
asi tainu apna jaan ,
tere agae dukh feroliya c,
asi taan apni zindagi da,
ik warka teri agae kholiya c.
tu sanu samjhya kyu nahi,
sanu samaj na aavae.
teri is kiti ho galti di ,
koi ramaj na aavae.
meri zinda gi har pal bahut kimti hai,
ohna palaan c kitae gam tae kitae meri hassi chuppi hai,
tu istarah kidaan ohna nu kisae hor agae khol dita,
mainu halle v samaj na aavae ,
ki tu  aaedaan kidaan sade bare bol dita.....

Bahut Bahut Khoob Komalji..

Tussi Te Chaa Gaye Ho.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Ache..Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Punjabi Vich Bahut Kam Hi likheya Hai..Ek Koshish Zaroor Karanga..

Teriyan galaan Ajj Vi Yaad Hai Saanu,
Teriyan Yaadan Saanu Rula Jaande Ne...

Jo hoya Si Saade beech oh maada Hoya Par Banda Te Ohi hai
Jeda Dujeyan Di Khata Nu Bhula Jaande ne....

Gile-Shikveyan Naal Nahi Pyaar Nibhda,
Pyaar Karan Vale Te Gile-Shikwe Bhi mitaan Jaande Ne...

Tu Iss Bahane Hi Saanu yaad Rakh Layi "Heeriye"
Ke Kotte Sikhe Vi Kadi Kaam Aa jaande Ne....
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«Reply #4 on: August 14, 2009, 05:26:50 PM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wow too good Khwaish ji!!! bada he vadia likhia hai tusi.... ek dost hua karda se Jeet ohndein naal kai baar punjabi ch likhia per hun likh ni honda...
per punjabi ch tuwanu te hora nu likhde wekh khushi hoi!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 14, 2009, 05:58:35 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Komalji..

Tussi Te Chaa Gaye Ho.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Ache..Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Punjabi Vich Bahut Kam Hi likheya Hai..Ek Koshish Zaroor Karanga..

Teriyan galaan Ajj Vi Yaad Hai Saanu,
Teriyan Yaadan Saanu Rula Jaande Ne...

Jo hoya Si Saade beech oh maada Hoya Par Banda Te Ohi hai
Jeda Dujeyan Di Khata Nu Bhula Jaande ne....

Gile-Shikveyan Naal Nahi Pyaar Nibhda,
Pyaar Karan Vale Te Gile-Shikwe Bhi mitaan Jaande Ne...

Tu Iss Bahane Hi Saanu yaad Rakh Layi "Heeriye"
Ke Kotte Sikhe Vi Kadi Kaam Aa Jaande Ne....

Bahut hi vadhiya likhya hai tussi khwaish ji...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2009, 07:23:33 AM »
thnxs allot to all of u....
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2009, 11:50:54 AM »
very nic words khwaish ji..and plzz let me now that how to add pics in our profile and how to send mail....thnxs  sunny sunny sunny sunny icon_salut
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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2009, 12:07:36 PM »
asi tainu apna jaan ,
tere agae dukh feroliya c,
asi taan apni zindagi da,
ik warka teri agae kholiya c.
tu sanu samjhya kyu nahi,
sanu samaj na aavae.
teri is kiti ho galti di ,
koi ramaj na aavae.
meri zinda gi har pal bahut kimti hai,
ohna palaan c kitae gam tae kitae meri hassi chuppi hai,
tu istarah kidaan ohna nu kisae hor agae khol dita,
mainu halle v samaj na aavae ,
ki tu  aaedaan kidaan sade bare bol dita.....




Wah kamala da lekh hai Komal ji… bahut hi khooob….



MERI SAMAJ NA AAWEH, WEH HANIYAA
KU SAANU TARSAWEY, WEH HANIYAA

TENU APNA ASI DIL DITTA
TERE TEY ASI YAKEEN KITTA
PAR KU TU SANAM EH KITTA
MERI SAMAJ NA AAWEH, WEH HANIYAA
KU SAANU TARSAWEY, WEH HAANIYA

GALI GALI MERE CHARCHEY NEH
HER EK KOL MERE PARCHEY NEH
KISS NASHEY ITCH TU EH KITTA
MERI SAMAJ NA AAWEH, WEH HANIYAA
KU SAANU TARSAWEY, WEH HAANIYA

JI KEY VI MAIN KI KARANGI
MARR KEY VI NA JIII SAKANGI
PYAR EHAAJA TU KU KITTA
MERI SAMAJ NA AAWEH, WEH HAANIYAA
KU SAANU TARSAWEY, WEH HAANIYAA




JASBIR SINGH



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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2009, 12:26:04 PM »
wow these words are really too good..jasbir ji very nicc words.....
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2009, 01:11:26 PM »
bahut vadhiya likha hai tussi komal ji..... Applause Applause

Teriya bolliyaan ne zehar zindadi vich ghol ditta
Sannu samajh na aave kidaan saade baare tu bol ditta





 Applause Applause

bahut hi khoob poetry ji ....

TENU ASI KI SAMJAWANGEY "JASBIR"
KUCH KEHAN NU VI HUNN NA SADA DIL KITTA
KU MERI JINDAGI WHICH TU EH ZEHAR GHOL DITTA



JASBIR SINGH

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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #11 on: August 16, 2009, 01:14:14 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Komalji..

Tussi Te Chaa Gaye Ho.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Ache..Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Punjabi Vich Bahut Kam Hi likheya Hai..Ek Koshish Zaroor Karanga..

Teriyan galaan Ajj Vi Yaad Hai Saanu,
Teriyan Yaadan Saanu Rula Jaande Ne...

Jo hoya Si Saade beech oh maada Hoya Par Banda Te Ohi hai
Jeda Dujeyan Di Khata Nu Bhula Jaande ne....

Gile-Shikveyan Naal Nahi Pyaar Nibhda,
Pyaar Karan Vale Te Gile-Shikwe Bhi mitaan Jaande Ne...

Tu Iss Bahane Hi Saanu yaad Rakh Layi "Heeriye"
Ke Kotte Sikhe Vi Kadi Kaam Aa jaande Ne....



WAH KHAWISH JI WAH , WAH WAH


BAHUT HI KAMAAL TUSI EH KITTA
BADI KHOOBSURTI NAAL TUSI EH JAWAAB DITTA


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2009, 01:16:36 PM »
wow these words are really too good..jasbir ji very nicc words.....

THANKS KOMAL JI

JASBIR SINGH
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: August 16, 2009, 06:52:14 PM »
wah kaya baat hai... dil khush ho gaya yaha ki mehfil dekh kar...

bahoot changa likhia hai Jass ji
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«Reply #14 on: August 16, 2009, 08:28:40 PM »
wah kaya baat hai... dil khush ho gaya yaha ki mehfil dekh kar...

bahoot changa likhia hai Jass ji

THANKS POOJA JI

JASBIR SINGH
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