wapis kyu nae aaounda?

by komalpreet kaur on August 16, 2009, 03:51:01 PM
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tera har pal chete aaounda aae,
sanu na cahundiyaan hoeyaan v tu sataunda aae.
bahut koshish kardae na tainu na yaad kariyae,
par pal pal tu chete aaounda aae..

is dil ch hale v tera basera aae,
pavae sadi zindagi c bahut hi hanera hai.
tu janda janda tur gaya aae,
saadi zind nu sulli tang gaya aae.
asi kalle tahaan mardae aan,
teriyaan yadaan nu asi sardae aa,
tu taan v yaad aaounda aae,
har pal kyu sanu ravaounda aae.

tere ishq di suli chadae hoe aan,
asi wich ishq maedanae khadae hoe aan.
tu kyu na wapis aaounda v,
tu kyu aaena sataounda v.

teri khair asi sada mangdae aa,
tainu wapis mangan to na sangdae aan.
tu aavae jaa na aavae,
asi har dua ch tainu mangdae aan.
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2009, 03:59:29 PM »
komal ji kamaaal da likhdey oh tusi ....
issnu padd key koi vi wapas aa jayega ..... may all your wish come true................... BAZSH,,,,,,,


jasbir singh
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2009, 04:03:28 PM »
sachi Komal ji .. bahoot bahoot khoob Likhna hai aapne.. Waah bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2009, 05:46:16 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Komal Ji..

Bahut vadhiya Likhde Ho tussi.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2009, 06:51:26 PM »
good work Komal
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2009, 04:30:50 AM »
likha tae ki dosto ,
bus koshish kari jandae aa.
kisae dae ditae hoe gama tae,
bus shabadaan dae malaam malli janae aa....



thnxs jasbir ji,,
sophi ji,
pooja ji,
and khwaish ji....
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2009, 04:42:29 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Komal ji,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2009, 04:48:04 AM »
thnxs madhuwesh ji
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jaindost
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«Reply #8 on: August 20, 2009, 09:20:59 AM »
malham je aina pyaara hai..............
te gam kinne ku dhunge honge.......
take care dear....
good one again........
bhut dina baad punjabi vich kuch padeya......
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #9 on: August 21, 2009, 07:05:53 AM »
thnxs jaindost ji
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