"aadhi raat hai aur"

by aaina on September 08, 2009, 02:05:16 PM
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Aadhi raat hai aur tere dil pe dastak ki hai
Lagta hai ke meine koi pitne ki harkat ki hai


Dhoni pad jayengi aaj paleten bhayye
Bin bulaawe kisi dawat mai shrkat ki hai


Hame bhi mil jaaye haaye koi madhuri, preety
Kis qadar dil ne machal kar ye hasrat ki hai


Ye jo soghaat mein miley hain humko anday
Abhi jo ghazal kahi hai usne barkat ki hai

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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2009, 02:10:43 PM »
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 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard


Aap ne funny main bhi koi kasar nahin rakhi  NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa

Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji  Giggle



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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2009, 02:11:47 PM »
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Milegi milegi... Giggle... Accha likha hai aapne dear Aslam  Usual Smile
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cara
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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2009, 03:11:14 PM »
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Aadhi raat hai aur tere dil pe dastak ki hai
Lagta hai ke meine koi pitne ki harkat ki hai


Dhoni pad jayengi aaj paleten bhayye
Bin bulaawe kisi dawat mai shrkat ki hai


Hame bhi mil jaaye haaye koi madhuri, preety
Kis qadar dil ne machal kar ye hasrat ki hai


Ye jo soghaat mein miley hain humko anday
Abhi jo ghazal kahi hai usne barkat ki hai


KYA BAAT HAI  AAINA JI......

AADHI RAAT HAI AUR TERE DIL PE DASTAK KI HAI,
PAHELE BHI MAAR MILI THI,FIR AAJ HIMMAT KI HAI.

DHONI PAD JAYENGI AAJ PALETEN BHAYYE,
BIN JEB ME PAISE, KHAANE KI JO HIMMAT KI HAI.

HAMEN BHI MIL JAAYEN HAAYE KOI MADHURI,PREETY,
FIR AAJ JOOTE KHWAAB DEKHNE KI KHWAAISH KI HAI.

YEH JO SOGHAAT MEIN MILEY HAI HAMKO ANDAY,
YEH WO HAI JO MEHFIL MAIN,HASEENA KO DEKH KAR HARKAT KI HAI.



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madhuwesh
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«Reply #4 on: September 09, 2009, 02:20:31 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Aslam ji and Cara ji very funny. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #5 on: September 09, 2009, 05:12:11 PM »
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Wah wah wah bohat khoob Aslam bhai its very funny so gooooood  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Giggle......care ji aap ne bohat acha likha hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Giggle Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #6 on: September 09, 2009, 06:06:17 PM »
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aaina ji aur cara ji bahut khob verry funny...nice creation by u both... Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause

cara ji aajkal aati nhi aap jhagda karne? NaNaNa
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #7 on: September 18, 2009, 03:57:27 PM »
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Aadhi raat hai aur tere dil pe dastak ki hai
Lagta hai ke meine koi pitne ki harkat ki hai


Dhoni pad jayengi aaj paleten bhayye
Bin bulaawe kisi dawat mai shrkat ki hai


Hame bhi mil jaaye haaye koi madhuri, preety
Kis qadar dil ne machal kar ye hasrat ki hai


Ye jo soghaat mein miley hain humko anday
Abhi jo ghazal kahi hai usne barkat ki hai



 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Yea kya kiya Aslam ji.. Bin bulaye Davat khaa aaye.. bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai

Agali baar dobara jao tho sach sach batana ki Bartan dhone pade the ki nahi Usual Smile
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sabreena
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«Reply #8 on: October 05, 2009, 12:19:06 PM »
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arey wah maza aa gaya...aise hee likhte raho orr hume hasate raho...good one
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #9 on: December 26, 2009, 09:05:35 PM »
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Aadhi raat hai aur tere dil pe dastak ki hai
Lagta hai ke meine koi pitne ki harkat ki hai


Dhoni pad jayengi aaj paleten bhayye
Bin bulaawe kisi dawat mai shrkat ki hai


Hame bhi mil jaaye haaye koi madhuri, preety
Kis qadar dil ne machal kar ye hasrat ki hai


Ye jo soghaat mein miley hain humko anday
Abhi jo ghazal kahi hai usne barkat ki hai


Bahut Khoob Aslam Ji
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