adhuri nazar..................(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on August 05, 2012, 10:54:55 PM
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                           adhuri  nazar  se  pooraa  dekhne ki khataa karte ho.!
                           issi wajah se mujhe buraa kahne ki khataa kartre ho.!!


                           hua kyaa, maraa kaun ,phailaai hawaa ne dahshatt yahaan.!
                           afwaaho.n  pe  tum  yaqeen  karne  ki  khataa  karte ho.!


                           likha  kisne,  sunayaa  kisne , hai  ye  ghazal  kiski.!
                           kyon  itni  baariki  se  samajhne  ki  khataa karte ho.!


                           hai   zindagi   pyaari  aur  aashiqi bhi naa chhoote  .!
                           parwaano.n    ki    tarah   marne  ki  khataa  karte  ho.!


                           kare  qatl  lafzo.n se koi aur muskuraate rahein hum.!
                          'khamosh'  ki  tarah  tum bhi sahne ki khataa karte ho.!!

                          


                          


                          
                          


                          
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2012, 11:09:04 PM »
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                           adhuri  nazar  se  pooraa  dekhne ki khataa karte ho.!
                           issi wajah kar mujhe buraa kahne ki khataa kartre ho.!!


                           hua kyaa, maraa kaun ,phailaai hawaa ne dahshatt yahaan.!
                           afwaaho.n  pe  tum  yaqeen  karne  ki  khataa  karte ho.!


                           likha  kisne,  sunayaa  kisne , hai  ye  ghazal  kiski.!
                           kyon  itni  baariki  se  samajhne  ki  khataa karte ho.!


                           hai   zindagi   pyaari  aur  aashiqi bhi naa chhoote  .!
                           parwaano.n    ki    tarah  kyon  marne  ki  khataa  karte  ho.!


                           kare  qatl  lafzo.n se koi aur muskuraate rahein hum.!
                          'khamosh'  ki  tarah  tum bhi sahne ki khataa karte ho.!!

                                                             

wah wah bahut khoob  Applause Applause (meri poori nazar is shayri mein raha tongue3 )
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2012, 02:05:36 AM »
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nice. K_A
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2012, 02:21:45 AM »
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Bahoot umda.
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2012, 02:51:00 AM »
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Bahut Umda.
kya baat hai..
majedaar.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2012, 02:53:03 AM »
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Nice. K_A Ji
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2012, 03:32:16 AM »
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                           adhuri  nazar  se  pooraa  dekhne ki khataa karte ho.!
                           issi wajah kar mujhe buraa kahne ki khataa kartre ho.!!


                           hua kyaa, maraa kaun ,phailaai hawaa ne dahshatt yahaan.!
                           afwaaho.n  pe  tum  yaqeen  karne  ki  khataa  karte ho.!


                           likha  kisne,  sunayaa  kisne , hai  ye  ghazal  kiski.!
                           kyon  itni  baariki  se  samajhne  ki  khataa karte ho.!


                           hai   zindagi   pyaari  aur  aashiqi bhi naa chhoote  .!
                           parwaano.n    ki    tarah  kyon  marne  ki  khataa  karte  ho.!


                           kare  qatl  lafzo.n se koi aur muskuraate rahein hum.!
                          'khamosh'  ki  tarah  tum bhi sahne ki khataa karte ho.!!

                           


                           


                           
                           


                           
WAaah waaah kya khoob andaz-e-bayan rahe hain is gazal me Khamosh ji... Bahut umda bahut behtrien peskash par dheron daad aur mubaarakbad qabool kariye.....    Applause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2012, 04:11:55 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob khamosh ji badhai ho
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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2012, 09:34:35 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar , bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne K_A ji....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: August 06, 2012, 11:47:14 AM »
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bahut khub khamoshji
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2012, 12:03:36 AM »
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bahut khub likha hai khamohji.badhai.
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«Reply #11 on: August 07, 2012, 11:20:38 AM »
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masha allah .. bahut hi umda likha hai khamosh ji...

kaha se dhoond laye ho lafzo ko khazana
apne jazbaato se lafzo ko puroya karte ho
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«Reply #12 on: August 09, 2012, 08:01:37 PM »
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wah wah bahut khoob  Applause Applause (meri poori nazar is shayri mein raha tongue3 )


THANX Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: August 11, 2012, 07:51:49 PM »
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nice. K_A


thanx--S.K
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«Reply #14 on: August 11, 2012, 08:17:57 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai khamosh ji... bahut khubsurat peshkash...


Intezar !
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