AENAA CHAAHIYE......... "MohanN"

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AENAA CHAAHIYE

Mujhe shayaree pe kuchh rai aur Rau chahiye,
Iss liye nahin ke phool ke gubaaraa ban jaaun,
Bas khud ko pehchaanne ko aenaa chaahiye!

  Laughing hard NaNaNa Laughing hard NaNaNa Laughing hard NaNaNa Laughing hard

Surindar. N                      "MohanN"
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2015, 07:40:53 PM »
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Acchi pehchaan banaate ho
Jo ho jaise bhi ho, hame
Ik Acche insaan lagte ho

congrats. bahut accha likhte ho aap. saral..to the point.
ho sake to hame bhi thoda seekha dena.

aapki rachnaaon se jyaada aapke liye rau pesh hai

RABB RAAKHAA..
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Acchi pehchaan banaate ho
Jo ho jaise bhi ho, hame
Ik Acche insaan lagte ho


congrats. bahut accha likhte ho aap. saral..to the point.
ho sake to hame bhi thoda seekha dena.

aapki rachnaaon se jyaada aapke liye rau pesh hai

RABB RAAKHAA..
bahut shukria Alfaaz Sahib, achhon ko sab achhe hee lagte hain. Rab kee Janaab bahut meharbaani hai.
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2015, 05:04:23 AM »
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AENAA CHAAHIYE

Mujhe shayaree pe kuchh rai aur Rau chahiye,
Iss liye nahin ke phool ke gubaaraa ban jaaun,
Bas khud ko pehchaanne ko aenaa chaahiye!

  Laughing hard NaNaNa Laughing hard NaNaNa Laughing hard NaNaNa Laughing hard

Surindar. N                      "MohanN"



boss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

meree rai ye hai kee aap apne umr ke hisaab se likhe.N toh zayadaa achha lage gaa
phhir RAU bhee mile gaa


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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2015, 05:19:54 AM »
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rau for u surindr jii v.nice
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2015, 06:57:53 AM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2015, 09:10:47 AM »
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AENAA CHAAHIYE

Mujhe shayaree pe kuchh rai aur Rau chahiye,
Iss liye nahin ke phool ke gubaaraa ban jaaun,
Bas khud ko pehchaanne ko aenaa chaahiye!

  Laughing hard NaNaNa Laughing hard NaNaNa Laughing hard NaNaNa Laughing hard

Surindar. N                      "MohanN"

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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2015, 02:26:16 PM »
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boss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

meree rai ye hai kee aap apne umr ke hisaab se likhe.N toh zayadaa achha lage gaa
phhir RAU bhee mile gaa


 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Qalb Sahib bahut shukria aapkaa Rai ke liye. Janaab yeh sher main ne sirf apne liye nahin likhaa sab ke liye likhaa hai, sab kee shikaayat ko bayan kiyaa hai. Main jo shayri likhtaa hoon apna dil behlaane ko likhtaa hoon, main peer hoon peer banney ke liye nahin likhtaa hoon naa hee jawan hone ke liye likhtaa hoon. Peeri mein kyaa likhnaa chahiye shayad iss kaa mujhe gian bhi nahin hai. Main peer hoon mere pass time hai main sab ko parhtaa hoon encourage kartaa hoon taalian bajaataa hoon Rau bhi detaa hoon. Main samajhtaa hoon ke log busy hain, paisaa banaane kee daur mein hain aur aisaa honaa bhi chahiye. Lekin jo shayar hain unhke liye comments denaa yeh shayari kaa hee hisaa hai. Janaab phir se bahut shukria. Please note I am not trying to hurt your feelings or rebuff you for anything. I hope you will read this though. Sorry.
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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2015, 04:33:47 PM »
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rau for u surindr jii v.nice
Kondal sahib Rau ke liye shukria, aapne diyaa hai to iss ko accept kartaa hoon. Main ne logon kee feelings describe karne ke liye yeh likhaa thah, apne liye Rau kee bhikshaa nahin maangee thee Janaab.
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waah waah
bahut shukria Saini Sahib.
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