**aisi tanhaayi me

by vimmi singh on October 11, 2012, 06:11:17 PM
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Baithe hain wo door humse par nazren yahin tiki hain
Aisi bhi kya khata humaari, jo paas aa bhi nahi sakte

Karte hain wo duniadaari ki baaten, ye nahi samajhte
Hum bhi hain isi dunia ke ,mangal grah se nahi tapke

Aaj aaye the humaari khidki ke saam’ne , guftagu karne
Mshroof rahe wo yaaro’n me,humne palke bhi nahi jhapke

Nazren chura kar yun naa dekho hume,saamne bhi aa jao
Dil ki kitabo’n ka basta kholo, hum bhi padhe’n dhire dhire

Naa rakho koi gunzaaish ki saath chhod denge kisi umra me
maut ko bhi halaal kar de’n, dekho toh sahi zindagi me aake

naa do nasihate ke baith jaaun kisi aur ki doli me,tanha tumhe chhodkar
are bahut dekhe tum jaise tanha, nai jaldi mil jaati hai aisi tanhaayi me

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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2012, 06:58:40 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   masssttt likha hai aapne Vimmi ji... mazaa aa gayaa... ek dum jhakkkassss..... kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai iske jawaab me ummeed hai aapko pasand aayegi...!!!

aasaani  se  mil  jaao   humein   tum   aisi  to koi cheez nahi ho
chhoote   hi   sharmaa   jaao   tum   aisi   to koi cheez nahi ho

dekhaa thaa  kal shaam tumhe  thappad  lagaate kaske kisiko
mujhpe tumko  pyaar  aa jaaye tum aisi to  koi  cheez nahi ho

bulaa rahe ho newtaa deke, aate hi  kyaa  tum khaatir karoge
phoolon ki tum  maalaa  pehnaa  do  aisi to koi cheez nahi ho

kehte ho main kaayar hoon, tumse main kyun itna darta hoon
dekh mujhe  seene  se  lagaa  lo tum aisi to koi  cheez  nahi ho

duur se hi dekhunga tumko, paas aane ki koshish na karungaa
pyaar  ko  mere  sweekaar  karo  tum  aisi to koi cheez nahi ho

*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2012, 07:25:13 PM »
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Vimmy Jee Aadaab!


hahahaha achche kalaam pesh kiye haiN aap dono ne.... Usual Smile
Bahut khoob jee ... aise hi khoob kalaam kahte rahiye...
Hum log shate raheNge...  icon_geek

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2012, 02:33:01 AM »
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Bahut khoob Vimmy jee
bahut hi mazedaar peshkash
Applause Applause
aur hriday jee..aapne bhi khoob likha
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2012, 03:10:52 AM »
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waaah vimmi ji bohut khub
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2012, 03:46:25 AM »
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bahoot khub bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2012, 03:47:29 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2012, 05:32:03 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   masssttt likha hai aapne Vimmi ji... mazaa aa gayaa... ek dum jhakkkassss..... kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai iske jawaab me ummeed hai aapko pasand aayegi...!!!

aasaani  se  mil  jaao   humein   tum   aisi  to koi cheez nahi ho
chhoote   hi   sharmaa   jaao   tum   aisi   to koi cheez nahi ho

dekhaa thaa  kal shaam tumhe  thappad  lagaate kaske kisiko
mujhpe tumko  pyaar  aa jaaye tum aisi to  koi  cheez nahi ho

bulaa rahe ho newtaa deke, aate hi  kyaa  tum khaatir karoge
phoolon ki tum  maalaa  pehnaa  do  aisi to koi cheez nahi ho

kehte ho main kaayar hoon, tumse main kyun itna darta hoon
dekh mujhe  seene  se  lagaa  lo tum aisi to koi  cheez  nahi ho

duur se hi dekhunga tumko, paas aane ki koshish na karungaa
pyaar  ko  mere  sweekaar  karo  tum  aisi to koi cheez nahi ho

*****HRIDAY*****

bahut bahut shukriya Hriday ji....  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
kuchh hum'ne bhi koshish ki hai...

hum chiz kya hain, pta chal jaayega tumhe
paas aakar toh dekho
pyaar hi pyaar bhara hai in aankho’n  me
nazare’n mila kar toh dekho

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«Reply #8 on: October 12, 2012, 05:37:04 AM »
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Vimmy Jee Aadaab!


hahahaha achche kalaam pesh kiye haiN aap dono ne.... Usual Smile
Bahut khoob jee ... aise hi khoob kalaam kahte rahiye...
Hum log shate raheNge...  icon_geek

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                  



bahut bahut shukriya ParwaaZ ji......  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: October 12, 2012, 05:42:29 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!! Applause Applause Applause


humne  pehle  bhi  pyaar karke  dekhaa  hai
kisi  hasi  se  beshumaar  karke  dekhaa  hai
badle   me   bas   bewafaai   hi mili har baar
humne pehle bhi aetbaar karke  dekhaa hai


bahut bahut shukriya Hriday ji....  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
kuchh hum'ne bhi koshish ki hai...

hum chiz kya hain, pta chal jaayega tumhe
paas aakar toh dekho
pyaar hi pyaar bhara hai in aankho’n  me
nazare’n mila kar toh dekho


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«Reply #10 on: October 12, 2012, 05:45:07 AM »
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Bahut khoob Vimmy jee
bahut hi mazedaar peshkash
Applause Applause
aur hriday jee..aapne bhi khoob likha

bahut bahut shukriya mkv ji....... aise hi saath dete rahiye.........  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: October 12, 2012, 06:03:43 AM »
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waaah vimmi ji bohut khub
bahut shukriya saahill ji......  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: October 12, 2012, 06:07:19 AM »
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bahoot khub bahut khoob
thank you very much Anmol ji.....  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: October 12, 2012, 06:09:08 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut shukriya saini sir ji.........  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: October 12, 2012, 06:11:24 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!! Applause Applause Applause


humne  pehle  bhi  pyaar karke  dekhaa  hai
kisi  hasi  se  beshumaar  karke  dekhaa  hai
badle   me   bas   bewafaai   hi mili har baar
humne pehle bhi aetbaar karke  dekhaa hai



bahut khoooooob Hriday ji......  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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