Andhere mein??

by vasista on July 30, 2004, 09:34:52 AM
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CHANDNI RAAT THI.
AKELI WOH JAA RAHI THI.
BILLI KI CHAAL THI USKI.
BAAL THI USKI SILKY.
APUN SOCHA WOH HOGI URMILA.
WOH TO GHOODE KA POONCH NIKLA. :cry:
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2004, 10:03:56 AM »
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Baabrey.. but .. man.. it was little unreadable..
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2004, 10:18:55 AM »
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Ricky buddy,
Please give some feed backs so that I can make it more comprehendable.
                   Regards....
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2004, 01:28:56 PM »
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Well man.. i got its meaning.. but took me while to get exact word.. anyway..

I think it should be like

CHANDNI RAAT THI.
AKELI WOH JAA RAHI THI.
BILLI KI CHAAL THI USKI.
BAAL THAE USKEY SILKY.
APUN SOCHA WOH HOGI URMILA.
WOH TO GHODE KI POONCH NIKLA

Usual Smile

NO problem. keep it up
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2004, 05:09:58 PM »
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Thank you for the feed back Ricky bhai. Will try to minimize these errors as far as possible.... tongue3
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2004, 05:11:02 PM »
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Thank you for the feed back Ricky bhai. Will try to minimize these errors as far as possible.... tongue3
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2004, 08:22:11 PM »
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akeli raat dekh kar jo usne gana gaya,
Char logo ne akar usko yah samjhya,
Itna basura tum gaty kayun ho,
Itani raat mai gandho ko bulaty kayun ho :lol:  :lol:  :lol:
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2008, 09:30:22 AM »
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AND NEXT TIME DONT COMPARE GHODE KI POOCH WITH URMILA SHE IS MY SAMJHA KARO YAAR.
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