AntiGhazal

by drpandey on January 15, 2010, 04:56:26 PM
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Anti-Ghazal
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Jane kaisa sannata sa pasra-pasra lagta hai,
Mujhko teri chahat mein ab khatra-khatra lagta hai.!

Sach kahta hun samajh sako jo maine ye ahsas kia,
Zamin tumahara ars tumahara quatra-quatra lagta hai.!!

Kis marghat se le aye ho fati-purani, nai kahani,
Payar ki baten ye afsana kura-kachra lagta hai.!!!

Par karoge kaise sir se ye nadano,ye jalladon,
Maut ka phanda mujhko tera sakra-sakra lagta hai.!!!!

Pyar muhabbat sab bemani inhen kitabon mein dafna do,
Husn ka jadu isq ka dariya utra-utra lagta hai.!!!!!

Dr HP Pandey
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«Reply #1 on: January 15, 2010, 05:18:25 PM »
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Pandey Ji aapne ye ek mazahiya ghazal likhi hai ismein mind karne ki koi baat nahin hai. Shayari mazahiya bhi ho sakti hai lekin usko aap concerned section mein hi post karein jaisa ke ab Mazahiya Shayri(Funny Shayari) section mein move kar di gai hai. Dusre aap apni hi post ko quote na kiya karein jaisa ke aapne pahle bhi kain baar kiya hai. After all aapki ye mazahiya Ghazal jise Hazal bhi kehte hain bahut achhi lagi.
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«Reply #2 on: January 15, 2010, 05:50:40 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 15, 2010, 05:52:37 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah!! kaya baat hai drpandey ji behad khoobsurat likha hai apne.. kaya emotions hai!! Good work , Good Creation!!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: January 15, 2010, 06:20:14 PM »
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Thank you Pooja ji

Bahut-bahut Sukriya...Ghazls bhi dekhen
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Wow sach mein bahut khoob likha aapne Pandey ji,wonderful creation.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Bahut khoob Pandey Ji
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