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aaine ki baarat thi
patthar the baarati
kaise manate hum khushiyan yaaro
jab mile ho aise saathi !!!!!
naach naach kar bikhra gaye wajood mera
bante the humraaz dil ke batlayen bhi na kusoor mera!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2011, 09:08:41 AM » |
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niralaji... bahut khub......
sab trhik to hai na.... dekh rahe hain ki aaj kal aap pahle wale nirala nahin rahe... kya hua........ sab thik hai na........
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«Reply #2 on: March 26, 2011, 09:39:48 AM » |
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kya hua nhi ye pocho kya na hua
mere dil ka purza purza bol pada hai……
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hmm dekh rhe hai hm ki aise ilzaam par lagne lage hai.
wo actualy yo ka asar h kynki yaha to sab dard ke saathi hai masti ke saathi bot kam. to socha k dard me bhi haath azma lu thoda. lekin naakamyab rha
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«Reply #3 on: March 26, 2011, 10:28:22 AM » |
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are nahi dard ko khub bayan kar lete hain aap.... ab tak jo bhi aapne likha dard wala wo bahut badia raha hai....
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«Reply #4 on: March 26, 2011, 10:43:36 AM » |
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hmm lekin ab se hum yo par sirf parhne aya karenge. shayd aaj ke baad comnt bhi band. lekin wo monday se hoga  2 din khoob pareshan karenge aap sabko :  |
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«Reply #5 on: March 26, 2011, 10:56:14 AM » |
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ye to galat baat hai. niralaji...
aapke cmnt to chahie hi honge hame... aur aap to hamse hamesha khushi ka geet likhne ko kahte hain... aap cmnt nahin karenge to ye kon kahega.... hmse.....
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«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2011, 01:11:03 PM » |
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bht bht khoob nirala ji...
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«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2011, 02:01:26 PM » |
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mast hai....likhte raho ji...jab tak un Baaraatiyon....ko koi Ram ji mile aur unko insaan banaayein.....
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«Reply #9 on: March 26, 2011, 04:27:23 PM » |
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Bahaut khoob dost..  Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #10 on: March 26, 2011, 06:03:54 PM » |
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lo koyal ji ram na sahi par rahim to aa gaye na sabko insaan bana denge mere lie to ram aur rahim ek hi hain ji. thanx dost aor koyal ji aapko b thanx |
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«Reply #11 on: March 26, 2011, 06:41:33 PM » |
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Bahut Khub Nirala Bhai
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«Reply #12 on: March 26, 2011, 06:48:02 PM » |
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””
aaine ki baarat thi
patthar the baarati
kaise manate hum khushiyan yaaro
jab mile ho aise saathi !!!!!
naach naach kar bikhra gaye wajood mera
bante the humraaz dil ke batlayen bhi na kusoor mera!!!!!
Bahot khoob Nirala Ji... |
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«Reply #13 on: March 26, 2011, 10:36:25 PM » |
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Very nice Nirala G!
Abb baraat chahe aine ki ho ya pathar ki
nuksaan to hoga
kuch tootne ki aawazein aayeingi
kuch shor-gul ka intzaam to hoga
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