badee shiddat se dil lagaya tha…!!!!

by sarfira on July 20, 2011, 11:27:34 AM
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badee shiddat se dil lagaya tha humne bhi yaron
…utni hi shiddat se dil behlaaya apna usne bhi yaron!!‘

lo haar gaye hum dil uska behlaate behlaate
…maut par bhi meri lekin chain na aya fir usko yaron!!!

aa leitee woh bhi paas wali kabar me dekho
…kisi aur ne dil apna behlaaya jab usse yaron tongue3
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #1 on: July 20, 2011, 01:32:59 PM »
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Wah, kya baat kahi aapne.

Very good !
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sarfira
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«Reply #2 on: July 20, 2011, 01:43:44 PM »
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Wah, kya baat kahi aapne.

Very good !
thanx sahiba Usual Smile

aapka signature bhw lubha gaya hume
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«Reply #3 on: July 20, 2011, 02:36:39 PM »
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Accha..



Accha laga ki hamari likhe hue kuch alfaaz apko ache lege!
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«Reply #4 on: July 20, 2011, 03:24:02 PM »
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umda !
maza aa gaya Usual Smile
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sarfira
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«Reply #5 on: July 20, 2011, 06:03:15 PM »
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Accha..



Accha laga ki hamari likhe hue kuch alfaaz apko ache lege!
yn kuch alfaaz nahi hain
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«Reply #6 on: July 21, 2011, 04:37:45 AM »
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excellent........ye thought hi mast laga mujhe...and ur words and presentation..wow good re..
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«Reply #7 on: July 21, 2011, 04:43:06 AM »
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badee shiddat se dil lagaya tha humne bhi yaron
…utni hi shiddat se dil behlaaya apna usne bhi yaron!!‘

lo haar gaye hum dil uska behlaate behlaate
…maut par bhi meri lekin chain na aya fir usko yaron!!!

aa leitee woh bhi paas wali kabar me dekho
…kisi aur ne dil apna behlaaya jab usse yaron tongue3

wow Bhuat Bhuat Behtreen Peskash
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«Reply #8 on: July 21, 2011, 05:06:36 AM »
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excellent........ye thought hi mast laga mujhe...and ur words and presentation..wow good re..

acha laga ki sarfire ka likha bhi kuch log padhte hain Usual Smile
tnx
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«Reply #9 on: September 12, 2011, 03:22:44 PM »
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umda !
maza aa gaya Usual Smile
thanx Manish
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«Reply #10 on: September 12, 2011, 03:28:32 PM »
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umda !
maza aa gaya Usual Smile
thank u boss Usual Smile
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