BAHUT ZAALIM HOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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                               main, 'mohabbat'  nadaan.
                               meree    qurbat   nadaan.

                               kisee  ka saathee  nahin.
                               meree   adaawat   nadaan.

                               bekhudee   mein   rah.on.
                               meree  sharaafat  nadaan.

                               koee   na   jaane  mujhe.
                               meree   banaawat  nadaan.

                               muskura.on tanhaaee mein.
                               meree   hemaaqat  nadaan.

                               gazl.on,   nazm.on  mein.
                               padee   jehaalat  nadaan.

                               hua     zakhmee     qalb.
                               meree   nazaaqat  nadaan.
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2013, 07:11:41 PM »
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ghazal sirf nadaaniyoN se bhari hui hai saaheb aur naam de diya hai aapne ki badaa zaalim hooN, ab ye baat zara samajh se baahar ho gayi...

waise umda bayaangi hai, khayaal aur andaaz-e-bayaaN dono hi mujhe pasand aaye, umeed karta huN aage v aapke kalam se aur umda kalaam padhne ko milte raheNge...
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2013, 07:52:22 PM »
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                               main   mohabbat   nadaan.
                               meree    qurbat   nadaan.

                               kisee  ka saathee  nahin.
                               meree   adaawat   nadaan.

                               bekhudee   mein   rah.on.
                               meree  sharaafat  nadaan.

                               koee   na   jaane  mujhe.
                               meree   banaawat  nadaan.

                               muskura.on tanhaaee mein.
                               meree   hemaaqat  nadaan.

                               gazl.on,   nazm.on  mein.
                               padee   jehaalat  nadaan.

                               hua     zakhmee     qalb.
                               meree   nazaaqat  nadaan.


Wah,Wah,Wah Qalbji,
Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2013, 08:15:26 PM »
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Qalb sahab
bada hi zaleem hai aapka post
aur nadaan bhi Usual Smile

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aukaatee chaadar kuchal ke dekhtey hain
aaj, haisiyatt se jiada uchal ke dekhtey hain

uski mohabbt ko paane ki khateer Qalb
aaj, tabiyatt se jiada machal ke dekhtey hain
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2013, 08:19:22 PM »
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                               main   mohabbat   nadaan.
                               meree    qurbat   nadaan.

                               kisee  ka saathee  nahin.
                               meree   adaawat   nadaan.

                               bekhudee   mein   rah.on.
                               meree  sharaafat  nadaan.

                               koee   na   jaane  mujhe.
                               meree   banaawat  nadaan.

                               muskura.on tanhaaee mein.
                               meree   hemaaqat  nadaan.

                               gazl.on,   nazm.on  mein.
                               padee   jehaalat  nadaan.

                               hua     zakhmee     qalb.
                               meree   nazaaqat  nadaan.



Bahut Bahut Khooob Qalb Ji...

Aapka Andaaz-e-Bayaan Hi Kuch Aur hai...

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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2013, 10:31:14 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob qalbji.
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«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2013, 01:41:02 AM »
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Bahut khoob Qalb jee
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«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2013, 01:47:03 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: May 22, 2013, 03:21:53 AM »
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Bahut Khub Qalb Sahab


shad o aaabaad rahiye


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«Reply #9 on: May 22, 2013, 01:05:23 PM »
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ULAJHTEE HAI LOGON SE.
MEREE SADAAQAT NADAAN.

badaa mast kalaam dheron daad
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«Reply #10 on: May 22, 2013, 09:02:48 PM »
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Qalb Sahaab Aadaab...!


Bahut khoob janab kya baat hai naadaani meiN bhi achchi naadaani kar dii aapne.... Usual Smile

Badi khoob kalaam rahi ... kuch aik ashaar toH behad khoob rahe janab.... Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

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Qalb Sahaab mazarrat chahata huN mazaaq ke liye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
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«Reply #11 on: May 22, 2013, 09:47:46 PM »
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                               main, 'mohabbat'  nadaan.
                               meree    qurbat   nadaan.

                               kisee  ka saathee  nahin.
                               meree   adaawat   nadaan.

                               bekhudee   mein   rah.on.
                               meree  sharaafat  nadaan.

                               koee   na   jaane  mujhe.
                               meree   banaawat  nadaan.

                               muskura.on tanhaaee mein.
                               meree   hemaaqat  nadaan.

                               gazl.on,   nazm.on  mein.
                               padee   jehaalat  nadaan.

                               hua     zakhmee     qalb.
                               meree   nazaaqat  nadaan.


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«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2013, 03:53:27 PM »
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ghazal sirf nadaaniyoN se bhari hui hai saaheb aur naam de diya hai aapne ki badaa zaalim hooN, ab ye baat zara samajh se baahar ho gayi...

waise umda bayaangi hai, khayaal aur andaaz-e-bayaaN dono hi mujhe pasand aaye, umeed karta huN aage v aapke kalam se aur umda kalaam padhne ko milte raheNge...


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«Reply #14 on: June 20, 2013, 02:17:36 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Qalbji,
Bahut khoob.


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