BAZAAHIR TO WOH ZAALIM ........................... HASAN

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Ba-zahir  to  woh   zaalim   sub’h   ka  akhbaar  dekhe  hai  ,
Bacha  kar  baap  ki  nazreiN  hameiN  sau  baar  dekhe  hai


Bahut  gahri  lakeereiN  haiN  mere  hathoN  meiN  shadi  ki  ,
Nujoomi   meri   barbaadi  ke   jald   aasaar   dekhe   hai

  
Woh  rishta   dhoondhne  aayi   hai   apni  moti   didi  ka  ,
Kabhi  ghoore  hai  woh  mujhko  ,  kabhi  ghar baar  dekhe  hai


Milaayi  yaar   se   Mehbooba   apni  ,  le   uda   kambakht  ,
’Hello’  kar   ke  badi   be-sharmi  se  Ghaddar  dekhe  hai


Bhari  mehfil  meiN  hai  majboor , lekin  Jaan-e-Man  humko  ,
Tumhara   Dad   nazroN   se   badi   khunkhwar   dekhe   hai


Badi   hasrat  se    agle   saal   dekhe  ga   kunwaaroN  ko  ,
Khushi  se  ho  ke , jo  Doolha , abhi  sarshaar  dekhe  hai


Qasam  lay  hai  woh  aksaar , munh  na  dekhe  ga  ’Hasan’  mera ,
Gharaz  padne   pe   lekin   munh   mera  das   baar   dekhe  hai
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2013, 09:55:31 AM »
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Wow Hasan bhaai aaapne to kamaaal kar diyaaaaaaa.
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2013, 10:00:18 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 21, 2013, 09:04:19 AM

Ba-zahir  to  woh   zaalim   sub’h   ka  akhbaar  dekhe  hai  ,
Bacha  kar  baap  ki  nazreiN  hameiN  sau  baar  dekhe  hai
meri complaint ko aakhir sher mein utaar hi liya. abb to sudhar jaao icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Bahut  gahri  lakeereiN  haiN  mere  hathoN  meiN  shadi  ki  ,
Nujoomi   meri   barbaadi  ke   jald   aasaar   dekhe   hai
haath hi apna katwa lo main kahti hoon. barbaadi se inshaallah bach jaao ge tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3
  
Woh  rishta   dhoondhne  aayi   hai   apni  moti   didi  ka  ,
Kabhi  ghoore  hai   mujhko  ,  kabhi  ghar baar  dekhe  hai
haan ghar baar to dekhna hi padta hai na. per main to eklauti hoon meri koi bahan nahin hai. haan pados ki aunty ka tum pe dil aa gaya tha unhon ne hi mujh se request ki ke main unka rishta tum se propose karon samjhe icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Milaayi  yaar   se   Mehbooba   apni  ,  le   uda   kambakht  ,
’Hello’  kar   ke  badi   be-sharmi  se  Ghaddar  dekhe  hai
mauqa parst logon ki kami nahin hai.isliye her muamle mein hoshiyaar rahna chahiye. icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent

Bhari  mehfil  meiN  hai  majboor , lekin  Jaan-e-Man  humko  ,
Tumhara   Dad   nazroN   se   badi   khunkhwar   dekhe   hai
haan ji ladki ka baap apni beti ko protect to kare ga hi. kisi aire ghaire ke saath to nahin bhej de gaa. isliye ab mujhe ghooorna bund karo aur ghazal likho Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Badi   hasrat  se    agle   saal   dekhe  ga   kunwaaroN  ko  ,
Khushi  se  ho  ke , jo  Doolha , abhi  sarshaar  dekhe  hai
beete hue waqt ko yaad kar ke koi faayda nahin. dulha ban na tumhaari chaah hai.
majboori nahin. shadi nahin hogi to opareshan hui to pareshan. kuch nahin ho sakta tumhara icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch

Qasam  lay  hai  woh  aksaar , munh  na  dekhe  ga  ’Hasan’  mera ,
Gharaz  padne   pe   lekin   munh   mera  das   baar   dekhe  hai

aaj ke logon ki qasam ki koi value nahin. waise bhi qasam khana buri baat hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


kya kahne fazal sahab................!
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2013, 10:00:36 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


Masha Allaah janab kia kahne... kia umda aur khoob mazahiyaa kalaam kahi
hai aapne... Usual Smile

MaiN to soNch raha huN ke kahaaN kahaaN se khayaal aa jate hai aapke zahen
meiN.... Usual Smile
Behad khoobsurat aur umdaa gazal rahi janab.. sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar
aik rahe... Usual Smile

Is umda kalaam par hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2013, 10:17:54 AM »
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waah waah  love4
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2013, 10:31:07 AM »
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 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2013, 10:37:25 AM »
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 laughing4 bahut khoob Hasan sb,...great sense of humour !! Laughing hard aur ab is umr me jo mil jaae wohi ghaneemat jaaniye...khaamoshi se qubool kar hi leN !!  mubaarakbaad with daad dene ko hum hain na !! bas dheroN dher qubool kijiye !!
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bahut bahut khoob hasan jee. dheron daad qubool kare .
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«Reply #9 on: January 21, 2013, 05:02:17 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 21, 2013, 09:04:19 AM

Ba-zahir  to  woh   zaalim   sub’h   ka  akhbaar  dekhe  hai  ,
Bacha  kar  baap  ki  nazreiN  hameiN  sau  baar  dekhe  hai


Bahut  gahri  lakeereiN  haiN  mere  hathoN  meiN  shadi  ki  ,
Nujoomi   meri   barbaadi  ke   jald   aasaar   dekhe   hai

 
Woh  rishta   dhoondhne  aayi   hai   apni  moti   didi  ka  ,
Kabhi  ghoore  hai   mujhko  ,  kabhi  ghar baar  dekhe  hai


Milaayi  yaar   se   Mehbooba   apni  ,  le   uda   kambakht  ,
’Hello’  kar   ke  badi   be-sharmi  se  Ghaddar  dekhe  hai


Bhari  mehfil  meiN  hai  majboor , lekin  Jaan-e-Man  humko  ,
Tumhara   Dad   nazroN   se   badi   khunkhwar   dekhe   hai


Badi   hasrat  se    agle   saal   dekhe  ga   kunwaaroN  ko  ,
Khushi  se  ho  ke , jo  Doolha , abhi  sarshaar  dekhe  hai


Qasam  lay  hai  woh  aksaar , munh  na  dekhe  ga  ’Hasan’  mera ,
Gharaz  padne   pe   lekin   munh   mera  das   baar   dekhe  hai


mazahiya kalaam khoob raha 2nd sher zayada khaas raha Applause Applause Applause Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2013, 05:09:26 AM »
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masooom saheb , bahut shukriya aur duaaein.Hasan
Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on January 21, 2013, 09:55:31 AM
Wow Hasan bhaai aaapne to kamaaal kar diyaaaaaaa.
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«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2013, 07:22:43 AM »
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Correction : 3rd sher mein doosre misre mein ghalti se eik lafz chhoot gaya hai. Misra is tarah hai :

Kabhi ghoore hai woh mujhko , kabhi ghar baar dekhe hai.

 Saini saheb ka shukriya jinhon ne
ghalti poit out ki. HASAN
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2013, 07:38:32 AM »
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hahaha.. awesome.... loved it...

kahin din .. khain raatein .. kahin barsaat dekhi hain..
humne aisi magar likhat, jo hai umda, nahi ek baar dekhi hai..
kahan se laaye hain khamoshi ki hansi zara humko bhi batle dein..
humne aaj aapki in baaton mein ajab mithaas dekhi hai..

bahut hi sundar.. just too good.. ek rau apke liye sir Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2013, 10:55:09 AM »
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bahut  bahut   shukriya  ,  Sheba  ji . khush  rahye .
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«Reply #14 on: January 22, 2013, 04:31:13 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 21, 2013, 10:00:36 AM
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard


Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


Masha Allaah janab kia kahne... kia umda aur khoob mazahiyaa kalaam kahi
hai aapne... Usual Smile

MaiN to soNch raha huN ke kahaaN kahaaN se khayaal aa jate hai aapke zahen
meiN.... Usual Smile
Behad khoobsurat aur umdaa gazal rahi janab.. sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar
aik rahe... Usual Smile

Is umda kalaam par hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
PARWAAZ  SAHEB , ADAAB. BAHUT BAHUT SHKRGUZAR HOON .
KHUSH RAHYE.DUAON MEIN YAAD RAKHYE.HASAN
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