CHUDAIL......SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on August 07, 2013, 12:14:47 AM
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«Reply #45 on: August 10, 2013, 02:36:44 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on August 10, 2013, 01:39:32 AM
yeh chudail ka hi to hai jaadu jo tum us par atak gaye ho
uski uljhi uljhi zulfon par juo.n ki tarah latak gaye ho

uska bhayank chehra dekh shayad fuse ud gaya hai tumhara
chudail ko pari keh rahe ho kya  dimag se satak gaye ho

yeh "kasak the chudail" ka lal lal aakhon se kiya jadu hai
jo tum pari aur chudail ki pehchan karne se bhatak gaye ho

honth gulab jaise muskan dilkash aur dil mein pyar chudail ka
yeh sab kehkar "Touhid" tum meri nazar mein khatak gaye ho

tumhari nazaro.n mein saaf nazar aa raha hai chudail ka jadu
"soudagar" to yahi kahega "Touhid" dimag se chatak gaye ho


meri hasi nahi ruk rahi kambakht  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard.... shaitaan ke par nanaa ho tum   NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa.... kya likha hai   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley..... hats offf dear  icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut..... lajawaabbbbbbb jawaabbb diya hai tumne rishi aur MT ko  Winking Winking Winking Winking..... ab to koi mujhe pari sabit nahi kar sakta.... Winking Winking Winking Winking

and tumko kaise pata chala mera nam....   love4 love4 anamika d chudail  love4 love4.... u knw i love it  love4 love4 ....... thnxxxxxxxxxxxx main express nahi kar pa rahi apni feelings yaar,,,,,,,,  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower tumne wakai apni baat rakhi.... bura bhi keh diya and that too gracefully  notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy........
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«Reply #46 on: August 10, 2013, 02:39:13 AM »
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Bahut khoob Rishi ji
mast likha hai aapne.. mazahiya mahaul men aapki kalaam thodi hatkar hai par hai dilkash.
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«Reply #47 on: August 10, 2013, 02:44:33 AM »
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ab to teesra roop bhi khulkar nazar aa gaya hai..muqabla aur mazedaar ho gaya hai..
saudagar jee apni nazar saaf hone ka saboot bhi apne zordaar kalaam se de diya hai. lage raho..lage raho..darna nahee. mera matlab hai .C   se...samajh gaye na aap.
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«Reply #48 on: August 10, 2013, 02:47:51 AM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on August 10, 2013, 01:51:10 AM
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
bahut khoob soudagar bhai, mukabla takkar ka hai.

aur mkv ji nd kasu, jst wait fr my turn.

Touhid bhai
aapne theek kaha..saamne vaale ko kamzor naheen samajhna hai..
dam lagaaiye..
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«Reply #49 on: August 10, 2013, 02:59:29 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on August 10, 2013, 02:44:33 AM
ab to teesra roop bhi khulkar nazar aa gaya hai..muqabla aur mazedaar ho gaya hai..
saudagar jee apni nazar saaf hone ka saboot bhi apne zordaar kalaam se de diya hai. lage raho..lage raho..darna nahee. mera matlab hai .C   se...samajh gaye na aap.




MKV ji aap bhi koi kum nahi hain.... rocket ki dum par mast me chingari laga rahe hain aur dhamake sun rahe hain.... lage rahiye yunhi .... aur mast mast sawal jawab k maze lijiye....
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«Reply #50 on: August 10, 2013, 03:12:56 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on August 10, 2013, 01:39:32 AM
yeh chudail ka hi to hai jaadu jo tum us par atak gaye ho
uski uljhi uljhi zulfon par juo.n ki tarah latak gaye ho

uska bhayank chehra dekh shayad fuse ud gaya hai tumhara
chudail ko pari keh rahe ho kya  dimag se satak gaye ho

yeh "kasak the chudail" ka lal lal aakhon se kiya jadu hai
jo tum pari aur chudail ki pehchan karne se bhatak gaye ho

honth gulab jaise muskan dilkash aur dil mein pyar chudail ka
yeh sab kehkar "Touhid" tum meri nazar mein khatak gaye ho

tumhari nazaro.n mein saaf nazar aa raha hai chudail ka jadu
"soudagar" to yahi kahega "Touhid" dimag se chatak gaye ho


Ha Ha Ha Ha Saudagar Bhai Aap Bhi Naa.....  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #51 on: August 10, 2013, 03:14:45 AM »
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Saudagar Bhai Aapki Baat Ka Hum Reply De Rahe Hain... Hume Tum Shbd Ka Paryog Kiya Hai uske LIye Pahle Hi Maafi Chahte Hain.. Aur Meri Kisi Bhi Baat Ka Bura Lage To Maafi Chahte Hain..

Ye Chudail Nahi Hain Saudagar, Lagta Hain Tum Kahi Bhatak Gaye Ho,
Uski Zulfo Se Chmkta H Angan, Shayad Aap Jayda Hi Satak Gaye Ho..

Uska Chehra Bhayanak Nahi, Wo To Khilte Huve Kamal Ki Raunak Hain,
Pari Ko Pari Hi Kaha Jata Hain Yaar, Tum Ek Hi Baat Pe Latak Gaye Ho,

Samne Mat Aana Ghayal Ho Jaoge, InKi  Aankhe Badi Mastani Hain,
Hum Bhatake Nahi Saudagar, Tum Pari Ko Chudail Kyu Bata Rahe Ho,

Unke Hontho Ki Pankhudiya Gulab Ki, Dil Unka Hain Samunder Jaisa,
Na Jane Ye Chudail Ka Roop Kasak Ke Liye Kyu Baar Bar Bata Rahe Ho,

Hum pe Nahi Hua Kisi Ka Jadu, Hum To Sach Ko Sach Hi Kahenge,
"Rishi" To Yahi Kahega "Saudagar" Lagta Hain Aap Raah Bhatak Gaye Ho..
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«Reply #52 on: August 10, 2013, 03:22:19 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 10, 2013, 02:31:23 AM
hayeeeee rabbaaaa  Shocked Even More Shocked Even More Shocked Even More Shocked Even More
rishi kya mastammmmmmmmm mast likha hai yaar.... just awesome.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley mujhe to wakai lagne laga hai k main aisi hun....  happy3 happy3 happy3 uffffffffffffff kaashhhhhhhh main wakai iti dilkash hoti.........  love4 love4 love4 love4

hats off yaarrr....  icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut sach me bht mast likha hai  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause..... thnxxxxxxxxxx and thnxxxxxxxx alot   notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy for being with me... and tolerating me... thnx  happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3

Dhnywaad Kasak Ji... Aapka Bina Respect Ke Naam Liya Maafi Chahta Hun. Khush Rhe God Bless U
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«Reply #53 on: August 10, 2013, 03:31:31 AM »
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Iss post pe itni halchal dekhi to socha kuchh ham bhi likh dete hai..Tooti phooti chand lines pesh hain..

Wo hai kaun jo chudailo ko badnaam kar aaya,,
     Dekho to sahi ek dilfareb chudail ka saaya..

Usne sabke dil me halchal kar rakhi hai,,
     Har kisi ke kalaam me hai bas ab to wahi chhaya..

Kabhi khud ko anamika bataye, kabhi kasak, kabhi chudail,,
     Apni kaatil ada se hai usne sabka khoon bahaya..

Lambe nakhoon, darawni hansi ye uski pehchan,,
     Uski lehrati julfo.N me hai poora Yo samaaya..

Suna hai iss chudail ka dil bhi Yo ke aashiqo.N pe aaya,,
     Phir iss sweet chudail ko dekh har koi kyu kapkapaaya..

Na wo hai jaise wo khud ko batati hai
     Sabki muskurahat ki khatir hai usne ye roop apnaya..

 
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«Reply #54 on: August 10, 2013, 10:26:26 AM »
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shukriya aap sabka....
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«Reply #55 on: August 10, 2013, 11:27:56 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 10, 2013, 02:59:29 AM
MKV ji aap bhi koi kum nahi hain.... rocket ki dum par mast me chingari laga rahe hain aur dhamake sun rahe hain.... lage rahiye yunhi .... aur mast mast sawal jawab k maze lijiye....
sach kaha aapne
ab ladiya phootne lagee hai..ek ke baad ek..
dekhiye n..nashwani ji ne bhi dhamaka kiya hai..
kaanoN par haath rakh leejiye.
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«Reply #56 on: August 10, 2013, 11:35:04 AM »
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Quote from: nashwani on August 10, 2013, 03:31:31 AM
Iss post pe itni halchal dekhi to socha kuchh ham bhi likh dete hai..Tooti phooti chand lines pesh hain..

Wo hai kaun jo chudailo ko badnaam kar aaya,,
     Dekho to sahi ek dilfareb chudail ka saaya..

Usne sabke dil me halchal kar rakhi hai,,
     Har kisi ke kalaam me hai bas ab to wahi chhaya..

Kabhi khud ko anamika bataye, kabhi kasak, kabhi chudail,,
     Apni kaatil ada se hai usne sabka khoon bahaya..

Lambe nakhoon, darawni hansi ye uski pehchan,,
     Uski lehrati julfo.N me hai poora Yo samaaya..

Na wo hai jaise wo khud ko batati hai
     Sabki muskurahat ki khatir hai usne ye roop apnaya..

 
Mazahiya mahaul ko barkaraar rakhne ke liye shukriya nashwani ji.
aapne aakar phir se maqabla barabri ka bana diya hai..
Lambe nakhoon, darawni hansi ye uski pehchan,,
     Uski lehrati julfo.N me hai poora Yo samaaya..

Na wo hai jaise wo khud ko batati hai
     Sabki muskurahat ki khatir hai usne ye roop apnaya..

ab to suspense gahra gaya hai..
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«Reply #57 on: August 10, 2013, 11:46:26 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on August 10, 2013, 10:26:26 AM
shukriya aap sabka....
Aur bhai mere
aapko daad deni padegi.
aapne behatreen patience ka parichay diya hai. aur mazhaiya touch barkaraar rakha hai..
aap mujhe poetry ke bahut kareeb dikhe..aur isiliye ..c..b.. aapka hausla badha rahee hai..
ise aage badhaiye..
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«Reply #58 on: August 10, 2013, 02:56:49 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on August 10, 2013, 03:31:31 AM
Iss post pe itni halchal dekhi to socha kuchh ham bhi likh dete hai..Tooti phooti chand lines pesh hain..

Wo hai kaun jo chudailo ko badnaam kar aaya,,
     Dekho to sahi ek dilfareb chudail ka saaya..

Usne sabke dil me halchal kar rakhi hai,,
     Har kisi ke kalaam me hai bas ab to wahi chhaya..

Kabhi khud ko anamika bataye, kabhi kasak, kabhi chudail,,
     Apni kaatil ada se hai usne sabka khoon bahaya..

Lambe nakhoon, darawni hansi ye uski pehchan,,
     Uski lehrati julfo.N me hai poora Yo samaaya..

Suna hai iss chudail ka dil bhi Yo ke aashiqo.N pe aaya,,
     Phir iss sweet chudail ko dekh har koi kyu kapkapaaya..

Na wo hai jaise wo khud ko batati hai
     Sabki muskurahat ki khatir hai usne ye roop apnaya..

 

हा हा हा हा laughing4 laughing4 laughing4
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«Reply #59 on: August 10, 2013, 07:05:01 PM »
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rishi bhai sabse pehle to aapne jo qalaam likha hai behad khubsurat qalaam aur jawab ke tour par qabil-e-tareef hai.....jawab de sakta hoon main par uski pehle  aapse ijjajat chahunga...kyunki mujhe aap bahut sensative lagte hain kahin aapko meri majak mein ki hui koi baat buri na lag jaye... isliye aap mujhe permission de to hee jawab dene ki koshish karunga .. nahi to nahi...
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