desh ka bhavishya ab shaandaar lagta hai ..bekarar

by bekarar on January 23, 2011, 08:32:19 PM
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desh ka bhavishya ab shaandaar lagta hai,
kalmaadi ke aage koda imaandaar lagta hai,

ab ghotalon ka bhi vistarikaran ho gaya,
comonwelth games ka kalmadi-karan ho gaya,

kalmaadi ko koun pooche ab raja ne baja bjaya hai,
sou-do sau nahi miya arbon ki inki maya hai,

radiya ji ab tay karti hain mantrimandal,
tata ji ke dil me bhi macha di hai hal-chal,

ab to shaheedon ke naam pe bhi bhumi ki loot hai,
netaon aur afsaron ko bhrshtachaar ki choot hai

idhar kabhi tamatar to kabhi pyaaz rulaata hai,
petrol ka daam har teen maheene me badh jaata hai,

vot bike, neta bike aur ab media bhi bika hai,
char stambhon ka loktantr aakhir kis stambh pe tika hai,
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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2011, 08:46:28 PM »
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Bahut Khub Sanjiv Ji Bahut Sundar Likha Hai Aapne Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 24, 2011, 02:46:53 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 23, 2011, 08:32:19 PM
desh ka bhavishya ab shaandaar lagta hai,
kalmaadi ke aage koda imaandaar lagta hai,

ab ghotalon ka bhi vistarikaran ho gaya,
comonwelth games ka kalmadi-karan ho gaya,

kalmaadi ko koun pooche ab raja ne baja bjaya hai,
sou-do sau nahi miya arbon ki inki maya hai,

radiya ji ab tay karti hain mantrimandal,
tata ji ke dil me bhi macha di hai hal-chal,

ab to shaheedon ke naam pe bhi bhumi ki loot hai,
netaon aur afsaron ko bhrshtachaar ki choot hai

idhar kabhi tamatar to kabhi pyaaz rulaata hai,
petrol ka daam har teen maheene me badh jaata hai,

vot bike, neta bike aur ab media bhi bika hai,
char stambhon ka loktantr aakhir kis stambh pe tika hai,



Ek Sahi tasveer pesh ki hai aapne ... bekarar ji !

Bahut Badhiyaa likha hai ... tahe dil se daad ... !

likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2011, 06:09:43 AM »
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aap ka post achha hai padhne me. real hai.
lekin Bekarar ji maaf kariye bt ye ek prakaar se insult bhi hai desh ka.
mujhe Comedy bahut pasand hai lekin Bhai desh ko lekar hasna mere bas se bahar hai.
mai hamesha kahta hu manta hun---
Imaandari aaj bhi hai. par imaandar famous nahi hote.
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sorry kuch bura laga ho to
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thanx
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«Reply #4 on: January 24, 2011, 06:19:48 AM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 23, 2011, 08:46:28 PM
Bahut Khub Sanjiv Ji Bahut Sundar Likha Hai Aapne Applause Applause

shukriya rishi ji aapko pasand aaya ye prayaas bhi  Usual Smile
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Quote from: Anshumali on January 24, 2011, 02:46:53 AM

Ek Sahi tasveer pesh ki hai aapne ... bekarar ji !

Bahut Badhiyaa likha hai ... tahe dil se daad ... !

likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !

bahoot shukriya anshu ji....housala-afzaai ke liye
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«Reply #6 on: January 24, 2011, 12:05:24 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on January 24, 2011, 06:09:43 AM
aap ka post achha hai padhne me. real hai.
lekin Bekarar ji maaf kariye bt ye ek prakaar se insult bhi hai desh ka.
mujhe Comedy bahut pasand hai lekin Bhai desh ko lekar hasna mere bas se bahar hai.
mai hamesha kahta hu manta hun---
Imaandari aaj bhi hai. par imaandar famous nahi hote.
"
sorry kuch bura laga ho to
"
thanx
"

comedy me aur vyangy /tanz me yahi to farq hai Nirala sahab ki tanz me hansi bhi aati hai to dard ki chubhan liye hue....

imaandaari aaj bhi hai aur bilkul hai isliye to maine kavita ke ant me ek sawal choda tha...ki jab lakhon karodon balki arabon ke ghotale ho rahe hon..aur sarkaar se lekar nyay-palika aur media tak pe bhrshtachaar ke gambheer aarop hon uske bawazood desh aakhir kis-ke sahare chal raha hai..to jawab yahi hai..ki sab log ek jaise nahi hai..isi ek wazah se...
aapki bebaak rai kadil se swagat
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2011, 12:20:10 PM »
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aapke iss post par ek chota sa nazraana pesh hai---shayd achha hi lage:-
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kar do sarhade simaon ki
   ye UP hai wo Bihaar hai
ye MP hai wo maharashtra hai
   ye Chennai hai wo Aasaam hai
Aapas me milkar rahne me Hum sab Naakaam hain

bana do deewaren Mazhab ki
   ye Hindu hai wo Musalmaan hai
Hamare Mahan Desh me Sauhardya ka kya kaam hai
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thanx
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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2011, 07:54:06 AM »
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bahoot achche nirala ji..

mulk ke rahbaron ke ghotalon me naam hain,
mahngai se kahin jyaada "MUNNI badnaam hai,
baithe baithe kalam hi to chalani hai,
rishvat le ya de koi hume kya kaam hai,
laanten bhejte raho netaon aur afsaron ko,
khaa-pee ke so jana, yahi hamara kaam hai,
ab koun desh-hit pe yachika.yen dayar kare,
police-court-kach.hari, me fasti jaan hai,
news wale kuch bhi dikhaate hain,
chillane wale ho-halla machate hain,
humara kya sarokaar inse, hume kya kaam hai,
yahan muni badnaam hai, ab sheela jawan hai
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«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2011, 08:01:10 AM »
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hahaha
mast likha aapne.
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aur yahan dekho hami logon ka jeena haraam hai.
     bahut maze se sunte hain munni ki badnaami aur sheela jawaan hai
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bekarar ji..........bahot hi badiya "HASY VYANG" present kiya he apne..........bahot khub sahab bahot hi aacha laga padkar........aaj ye hi sach he........

nirala ji apne bhi bahot aacha sath diya he........bht khub sahab.......nirala ji ek baat kahna chahunga.jesa ki apne uper kaha desh ko lekar hasna aacha nahi ......100% agreed with u ......aap sahi he but ye ek "hasy vyang" he aur isme main desh he aur jinki naam liye he wo kirdar he is poetry ke......hasi poetry me kirdaro ki hui he desh ki nahi......apke aache vichar he is baat se bahot aacha feel hua......ki aaj bhi ese log he jo desh ko leker itna sensetive he........really behad khushi hui nirala ji....
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Sukriya mg saahna ke liye bhi aur aapne jo likha uske liye bhi  Usual Smile
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