dhobi ka kutta - return

by samnoj on April 07, 2008, 12:56:39 PM
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dhobi ka kutta
le ke bhaga malik ka juta
nikal pada jungle ki side
but he reached beside
jungle ki ghaat
socha achaar banuga
aur khaunga chaat
per khayi laat
kyunki in the ghaat
rahti thi magermach ki zaat
pahle hi sec me nikal pheka usko
nikal pada wapas wo gher ko
malik ne bola nikal ja
kutta bola ye dhobi ka kuta
na gher ka rha na ghat ka
tabhi usko muncipal ka aadmi mila
tees rupe ka inaam hai bola
aadha tera
aadha mera
vichar karne pe pasand aaya
kutta khoob kamaya
is se hume ye seekh milti hai
is kutte ki trah kabhi bhi
hume mouka gvana nahi chahiye
coz mout aur mouka ek hi bar aate hai
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2008, 06:48:30 PM »
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hi,
very nice.....
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2008, 11:39:26 AM »
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pehle bhi achcha tha.......ye bhi achcha hai...
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2008, 11:45:41 AM »
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Nice posting Sam bro Winking
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2008, 01:33:28 PM »
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dhobi ka kutta
le ke bhaga malik ka juta
nikal pada jungle ki side
but he reached beside
jungle ki ghaat
socha achaar banuga
aur khaunga chaat
per khayi laat
kyunki in the ghaat
rahti thi magermach ki zaat
pahle hi sec me nikal pheka usko
nikal pada wapas wo gher ko
malik ne bola nikal ja
kutta bola ye dhobi ka kuta
na gher ka rha na ghat ka
tabhi usko muncipal ka aadmi mila
tees rupe ka inaam hai bola
aadha tera
aadha mera
vichar karne pe pasand aaya
kutta khoob kamaya
is se hume ye seekh milti hai
is kutte ki trah kabhi bhi
hume mouka gvana nahi chahiye
coz mout aur mouka ek hi bar aate hai

Very Nice Post Samnoj...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2008, 02:16:36 PM »
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ye mera likha thori na hai jo meri wah wahi ker rahe ho

waise thanx
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