dil toot gaya:(

by killbill on November 26, 2010, 06:24:00 AM
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chatakkk ki awaz hui,
chok gaye hum anchahi asanka se!
ghabra gaye hum,
kisi kone me ja chupe hum!
kya hua kya na hua,
har taraf tha srf dhua dhuan!
achhanak ek dard ki lahar uthi seene me haye,
tadapte rahe soch bhi na paye,
akhir jayen to kahan jayen!
socha haalaat-e-dard kuch utaar du kaagaz par,
par ye kya! haye allah GUUM ho gaya mera Shayraana Mizaz shayad kahin pr!
dil tutne ki awaz thi,
likh bhi na sake jane kya kami thi!
dil ne kha awaz na kr zoron ki,
ban gaye ho Shayri Qadradan
qarda kr auron ki
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«Reply #1 on: November 26, 2010, 07:55:41 AM »
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Wah wah Kb ji,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne,excellent.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 26, 2010, 08:08:38 AM »
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ye bahot dadrnaak hai..
humara Shayrana Mizaaz gayaab kaise ho gaya
         lagta hai ab to sab kuch           kho gaya
mai to ab Shayri Qadradaan ho gaya
         likhne ko alfaaz nhi the
         Qadra ke alfaa dhundnewala ho gaya
....wah wah !!!!
     
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«Reply #3 on: November 26, 2010, 08:26:05 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: November 26, 2010, 08:45:54 AM »
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....manzil ji...thanku:)
apka Shayraana Mizaaz bhi khtre me dikh rha mujhe..sambhal jaiye Mohtarma Mazil ishq:)
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«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2010, 09:46:58 AM »
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uffffffffff.....KB ji..apka yehi andaaz lubha jata hai...har baat pe ek alag andaaz hai aapka ..kabhi shokh chanchal kabhi bilkul sady kabhi bilkulhut k....wahhhhhhh kya likha hai uss waqt k scene ko..sach me dil tutta hai to hosh nahin rehta kuch pal ko.......kho jate hain shabd aur .....jane dijiye
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«Reply #6 on: November 26, 2010, 10:00:55 AM »
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Kas akkk ji ....aapka yahi
Taareefe Andaaaz ..haye kya josh dilata h ungliyon me or kya ka kya likh jaata hun Cell pr direct...
teh dil se sukriya Kasak ji wo bhi dil ki wah wah:)
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«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2010, 10:08:06 AM »
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hhahhahahahahha..........thnx alot.....mujhe apni tareef iss andaz me aur bhi achchi lagi....
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«Reply #8 on: November 26, 2010, 10:17:14 AM »
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offo mene aapki taareeeeeeef thode na ki..mene SACHHHHHHHHHH KAHAAAA  RE
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bahut khub bhaijee.....
kya mast likha hai aapne...
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missing U KB...kahan ho aajkal dikhte nahin...
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