diye ne bada saath diya...

by panks on September 04, 2008, 07:40:23 AM
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us din humne aap ke aane ka bahut intezaar kiya
jab aap nahi aaye - sham dhal gayi thi, isliye hum chal diya

withour inverter the isliye hamne jalaaya roshni ka diya
par hawaa ke jhonke ne use bhujhane ka poora intejaam  kiya

rok liya us jhoonke to hamne badhkar, diye tak nahi jaane diya
jhoonka thanda tha hawa ka, usne hame aap ko yaad karne pe majboor kiya

socha, mile-to nahi aapse par call zaroor karele, isliye phone kiya
buzy tone buzy tone suna suna aapne hame fir hamen pareshan kiya

diye ki us roshni ke sahaare poori raat kaati, subha fir aapse milne chal diya
ek baar phir wahi kahani dohrayi gayi, poore din phir intezaar kiya..

sham aap aaye aur hamare se ye ikraar kiya
bole muskura kar pyar se "jaan humne apna dil kisi aur ke naam kiya"

haaye phooti kismat hamaari
maine kyu pyaar kiya, maine kyu pyaar kiya
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2008, 07:44:50 AM »
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pankh ji different tarike se aapne dard ko bayan kiya hai
starting ki 2-3 lines padhi to funny si lagi par jab ant tak panhuche to jaan paaye aapne to ek behtar kalaam ko anjaam diya........
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2008, 07:56:40 AM »
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pankh ji different tarike se aapne dard ko bayan kiya hai
starting ki 2-3 lines padhi to funny si lagi par jab ant tak panhuche to jaan paaye aapne to ek behtar kalaam ko anjaam diya........

Thank you G, Thank you so much Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2008, 08:02:54 AM »
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pankh ji different tarike se aapne dard ko bayan kiya hai
starting ki 2-3 lines padhi to funny si lagi par jab ant tak panhuche to jaan paaye aapne to ek behtar kalaam ko anjaam diya........

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
ye funny section me hi hai.....
diya jalao aap bhi Giggle
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2008, 09:26:32 AM »
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bahut ache panks
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2008, 09:32:21 AM »
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us din humne aap ke aane ka bahut intezaar kiya
jab aap nahi aaye - sham dhal gayi thi, isliye hum chal diya

withour inverter the isliye hamne jalaaya roshni ka diya
par hawaa ke jhonke ne use bhujhane ka poora intejaam  kiya

rok liya us jhoonke to hamne badhkar, diye tak nahi jaane diya
jhoonka thanda tha hawa ka, usne hame aap ko yaad karne pe majboor kiya

socha, mile-to nahi aapse par call zaroor karele, isliye phone kiya
buzy tone buzy tone suna suna aapne hame fir hamen pareshan kiya

diye ki us roshni ke sahaare poori raat kaati, subha fir aapse milne chal diya
ek baar phir wahi kahani dohrayi gayi, poore din phir intezaar kiya..

sham aap aaye aur hamare se ye ikraar kiya
bole muskura kar pyar se "jaan humne apna dil kisi aur ke naam kiya"

haaye phooti kismat hamaari
maine kyu pyaar kiya, maine kyu pyaar kiya

Haan.. Haan... Bataao naa.. Aapne kyon pyaar kiya,  Is it SO!
Ek bechaari bholi bhaali par kyon aisa atyachaar kiya...  NaNaNa



Lolzzz... Btw, Good One Panks...  Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2008, 09:35:38 AM »
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pyar to yehi soch kar kiya..
kisi ko dil jigaar aur apna jahan diya
aur last mei use apne se door jaane bhi diya
ye atyachaar hai to, maine parathe ki saath khane mei use achaar bhi diya
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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2008, 09:40:37 AM »
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Ek Sirf achhar de kar tum itna kyon itthlaate ho,
Uske liye koi achhi si sabzi kyon nahin banaate ho...
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«Reply #8 on: September 04, 2008, 09:43:40 AM »
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sabji banaate par diye mei garmi kam thi..
bhool gaye hamaare ghar mei light bhi gul thi..
parathe banva diye vo kafi hai
varna hammmare fridge mei sabzi full thi
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«Reply #9 on: September 05, 2008, 05:52:40 AM »
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First, clear to kero funny he ya ishk he, anyway very nice, I like it however, well presented.

wayu se lo ko bacha liya
jab ayega tufan to hoga kiya
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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2008, 06:34:10 PM »
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Jo bhi tha, ab fuuny main hai so funny Winking

Good work Panks....Nice lines Mahiya...


Refrigerator bhi full rakh ke, sabzi nahin banate ho
Achaar rakh ke praanthe pe, yunhi tum ttarkaate ho
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«Reply #11 on: September 05, 2008, 06:44:06 PM »
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ya so be it celmira

prem kia ab kiya rote ho
dil lagaya or khoya bhi diya
wo nahi to koe or sahi
sab larkyo ne tume kiya tukra diya
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«Reply #12 on: September 05, 2008, 06:48:51 PM »
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Ladko ka to yahi bahana hai,
Ek chorh doosri pe aankh jamana hai
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«Reply #13 on: September 06, 2008, 12:15:09 AM »
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hava se bachaya tab bhi nahi hoga kam
diye bujte hen oil sook jane ke bad
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«Reply #14 on: September 10, 2008, 08:43:01 AM »
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oil ki bottle le aaye hai,
dhabe mei sabzi bhi de aaye hai
bas vo laut aaye hamare paar
dua ke liye khuda ke dar pe aaye hai
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