ek bol............(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on July 29, 2012, 09:38:53 PM
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                          kar ke khataa na pachhtaao janaab.!
                          kah kar 'sorry'kaam chalaao janaab!!

                          
                          karo  istemaal  waqt  ka  sahi se tum.!
                          daur-e-ashiqi mein naa sharmaao janaab.!

  
                          karo  ibtedaa apne rahnumaao.n ka dost.!
                          sunn kar gaaliyaan bhool jaao janaab.!


                          darmayaan rindio.n ke ye ittefaaq hai puranaa.!
                          poorii nahin to aadhii hii pilaao janaab.!

                          
                          paitrey hamne bhi seekhe hain talwaar-o-khanjar se.!
                          inn bholi - bhaali chhooriyon se na daraao janaab.!


                         hai  meraa andaaz wahii puranaa saadgii ka khamosh.!
                         abb naye alfaaz mein mujhe naa samjhao janaab.!
                          

                
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«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2012, 11:00:15 PM »
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Bahut achhi mazahia peshkash hai . last but 1 sher 'paitrey hamne...' bahut umda hai.bahu mubarak ho.
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2012, 12:35:47 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2012, 12:50:58 AM »
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                          kar ke khataa na pachhtaao janaab.!
                          kah kar 'sorry'kaam chalaao janaab!!

                         
                          karo  istemaal  waqt  ka  sahi se tum.!
                          daur-e-ashiqi mein naa sharmaao janaab.!

 
                          karo  ibtedaa apne rahnumaao.n ka dost.!
                          sunn kar gaaliyaan bhool jaao janaab.!


                          darmayaan rindio.n ke ye ittefaaq hai puranaa.!
                          poorii nahin to aadhii hii pilaao janaab.!

                         
                          paitrey hamne bhi seekhe hain talwaar-o-khanjar se.!
                          inn bholi - bhaali chhooriyon se na daraao janaab.!


                         hai  meraa andaaz wahii puranaa saadgii ka khamosh.!
                         abb naye alfaaz mein mujhe naa samjhao janaab.!
             
waaaaah  Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2012, 03:13:54 AM »
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very good khamosh awaz jee.
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2012, 03:17:34 AM »
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                          kar ke khataa na pachhtaao janaab.!
                          kah kar 'sorry'kaam chalaao janaab!!

                         
                          karo  istemaal  waqt  ka  sahi se tum.!
                          daur-e-ashiqi mein naa sharmaao janaab.!

 
                          karo  ibtedaa apne rahnumaao.n ka dost.!
                          sunn kar gaaliyaan bhool jaao janaab.!


                          darmayaan rindio.n ke ye ittefaaq hai puranaa.!
                          poorii nahin to aadhii hii pilaao janaab.!

                         
                          paitrey hamne bhi seekhe hain talwaar-o-khanjar se.!
                          inn bholi - bhaali chhooriyon se na daraao janaab.!


                         hai  meraa andaaz wahii puranaa saadgii ka khamosh.!
                         abb naye alfaaz mein mujhe naa samjhao janaab.!
                         

               
Waah waah Khamosh ji bahut umda peskash behtrin gazal dheron daad aur mubarakbad qabool kariye....
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2012, 05:23:54 AM »
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waaahh wwaahhh
kya khubsoorati se likha hai khamosh sir
haaq hai Applause Applause

bohot khoobsorat Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 30, 2012, 05:33:09 AM »
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waah wah bahut mazedaar
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«Reply #8 on: July 30, 2012, 07:00:27 AM »
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Ye andaaj khoob bhaaya khamosh jee

4-6th sher...laajavaab.

bahut majedaar.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2012, 07:03:55 AM »
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khub K_A Ji
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«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2012, 08:31:05 AM »
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bahut khub. bahut hi umda K_A ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: July 30, 2012, 09:53:05 AM »
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waaahhh ji waaaahhh

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«Reply #12 on: July 30, 2012, 10:27:35 AM »
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Good
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«Reply #13 on: July 30, 2012, 06:15:28 PM »
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Bahut Khoob K_A Jee.
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«Reply #14 on: August 07, 2012, 10:11:06 AM »
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Bahut achhi mazahia peshkash hai . last but 1 sher 'paitrey hamne...' bahut umda hai.bahu mubarak ho.

thanx
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