EK THAA SHAAYAR

by khamosh_aawaaz on August 26, 2012, 05:45:20 PM
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                      churaa kar dupatta teraa wo bhaag niklaa.!
                      aayaa ilzaam mujh pe wo be-daag niklaa.!!

                    
                      kiya roshan ashiyana jisse, shamaa samajh kar.!
                      kar diya khaaq mujhey, aisi aag niklaa.!


                      huaa maaloom jabsey kii miskeen hoon main.!
                      lagaa karney ishq baap se, aisaa ghaag niklaa.!


                      padhtaa huaa ghazal ek baar jo pakdaa gayaa.!
                      merii baddhaali kaa phir suraag niklaa.!

            
                      baarah kahti rahee.n amaa key sudher jaa tu.!
                      baney sitaarey sabhi buss main chiraag niklaa.!


                      karey daaavaa  kapdey ki safaai ka  jo.!
                      uss 'DETERGENT'sey bhii dekhiye daagh niklaa.!


                      kaashtkaari karein kaise abb hum khamosh!
                      daalaa beej dhaan kaa aur saag niklaa.!
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2012, 05:56:41 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 26, 2012, 05:45:20 PM


                      churaa kar dupatta teraa wo bhaag niklaa.!
                      aayaa ilzaam mujh pe wo be-daag niklaa.!!

                   
                      kiya roshan ashiyana jisse, shamaa samajh kar.!
                      kar diya khaaq mujhey, aisi aag niklaa.!


                      huaa maaloom jabsey kii miskeen hoon main.!
                      lagaa karney ishq baap se, aisaa ghaag niklaa.!


                      padhtaa huaa ghazal ek baar jo pakdaa gayaa.!
                      merii baddhaali kaa phir suraag niklaa.!

             
                      baarah kahti rahee.n amaa key sudher jaa tu.!
                      baney sitaarey sabhi buss main chiraag niklaa.!


                      karey daaavaa  kapdey ki safaai ka  jo.!
                      uss 'DETERGENT'sey bhii dekhiye daag niklaa.!


                      kaashtkaari karein kaise abb hum khamosh!
                      daalaa beej dhaan kaa aur saag niklaa.!
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hahaha bahut khoob K_A jee  tongue3
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2012, 06:06:42 PM »
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K A Jee Aadaab!


Janab kia baat hai badi hi khoob kalaam kahi hai... Aik se
badhkar aik khayaal aur aik se badhkar aik ashaar bahut khoob

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe... Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                  


Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 26, 2012, 05:45:20 PM


                      churaa kar dupatta teraa wo bhaag niklaa.!
                      aayaa ilzaam mujh pe wo be-daag niklaa.!!

                    Hahahaha Kia kahne janab bada hi
gazab ka ilzaam aa gaya... bahut khoob daad daad daad ...                    

                      kiya roshan ashiyana jisse, shamaa samajh kar.!
                      kar diya khaaq mujhey, aisi aag niklaa.!

WaaH bahut khoob bada hi khoobsurat sher kaha
hai daad daad daad ... Usual Smile                  

                      huaa maaloom jabsey kii miskeen hoon main.!
                      lagaa karney ishq baap se, aisaa ghaag niklaa.!

Is sher ko hum samjhe nahi janab.. " ghaag" ke
kia mayne huye aur... is sher par zara tafsil se roshni chaheNge.. Usual Smile                    

                      padhtaa huaa ghazal ek baar jo pakdaa gayaa.!
                      merii baddhaali kaa phir suraag niklaa.!

Hmmmm achcha hai par kamzor sa sher hai...                    
            
                      baarah kahti rahee.n amaa key sudher jaa tu.!
                      baney sitaarey sabhi buss main chiraag niklaa.!

WaaH waaH waaH bahut umdaa daad daad daad... behad khoob                  

                      karey daaavaa  kapdey ki safaai ka  jo.!
                      uss 'DETERGENT'sey bhii dekhiye daag niklaa.!

Daagh ke pahle "naa: chahiye tab sher ko koi wazan
mil sakta hai... Usual Smile                  

                      kaashtkaari karein kaise abb hum khamosh!
                      daalaa beej dhaan kaa aur saag niklaa.!

YeH bhi khoob raha daad ... achcha maqta hai par kashtakaari ke mayne shayad kapde bunne wala hota hai... ?                  


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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2012, 06:10:41 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2012, 06:18:15 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 26, 2012, 06:06:42 PM
K A Jee Aadaab!


Janab kia baat hai badi hi khoob kalaam kahi hai... Aik se
badhkar aik khayaal aur aik se badhkar aik ashaar bahut khoob

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe... Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 




perwaaz sb. itnii tafseel se padhne ka bahut bahut shukria. aap jaisey shora ekraam key comments ek mayaar rakhtey hain.


daagh mein ghalatfahmi ki wajah se h nahin lagaya. haan ghain ko pronunciation hai ismein.


ghaag ka matlab chalaak,shrud se hota hai.


kaashtkaari-agriculture hai.

thanks
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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2012, 08:03:26 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 26, 2012, 05:45:20 PM


                      churaa kar dupatta teraa wo bhaag niklaa.!
                      aayaa ilzaam mujh pe wo be-daag niklaa.!!

                   
                      kiya roshan ashiyana jisse, shamaa samajh kar.!
                      kar diya khaaq mujhey, aisi aag niklaa.!


                      huaa maaloom jabsey kii miskeen hoon main.!
                      lagaa karney ishq baap se, aisaa ghaag niklaa.!


                      padhtaa huaa ghazal ek baar jo pakdaa gayaa.!
                      merii baddhaali kaa phir suraag niklaa.!

             
                      baarah kahti rahee.n amaa key sudher jaa tu.!
                      baney sitaarey sabhi buss main chiraag niklaa.!


                      karey daaavaa  kapdey ki safaai ka  jo.!
                      uss 'DETERGENT'sey bhii dekhiye daagh niklaa.!


                      kaashtkaari karein kaise abb hum khamosh!
                      daalaa beej dhaan kaa aur saag niklaa.!
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2012, 12:30:51 AM »
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bahut khoob khamosh ji, dhero dad
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Bahut bahut umda kalaam KA jee
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BAhut Khub K_A JI BAhut Umda
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waah waah laajawaab bahut khoob
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Bahut bahut umda kalaam KA jee
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BAhut Khub K_A JI BAhut Umda

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