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Fighter Plane Ka Jet HaiN Hum...

by Bishwajeet &#039;Musaahib&#039; on November 12, 2013, 02:02:55 PM

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Iftakhar Ahmad

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«Reply #30 on: November 13, 2013, 10:08:55 PM »

Quote from: mkv on November 12, 2013, 02:30:43 PM

khoob dil khol kar likha hai aapne..
is mazahiya kalaam par hamari taraf se bahut bahut mubarakbaad.
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vaise to koi kuch bhi likh sakta hai..par vo adab ke daayre men hai ya naheen iska faisla bazm ke haathon men hai..
mera vyaktigat khayaal hai ki, mazahiya/etc ke naam par jiyadah liberty lene se hamen bachna chahiye..
Hamare alfaaz, hamari soch ko khule aam darshaate hain. aur yahee alfaaz to shairi ki buniyaad hain.

eik baar phir se aapko mubarakbaad is khoobsurat, rang birange kalaam ke liye.

I strongly agree you Mukesh bhai on this. We should avoid writing something which may hurt others. We should focus only on poetry, a clean poetry.


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Bishwajeet Anand Bsu

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Re: Fighter Plane Ka Jet HaiN Hum...

«Reply #31 on: November 14, 2013, 01:21:55 PM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on November 13, 2013, 10:08:55 PM

I strongly agree you Mukesh bhai on this. We should avoid writing something which may hurt others. We should focus only on poetry, a clean poetry.

Iftakhar Sahab maine puri kosis ki hai ki kisi ka dil na dukhe koi heart na ho, ye sirf ek hazal hai or sabne ise hazal ki hi tarah liya hai.... or Sir agar aap heart hue to I personally say sorry to you... I only tried to make people laugh and they are laughing....