samnoj
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ye poem HEER ke naam
kisi charsi bewde ki batli ho tum
kya bimar ho bahut patli ho tum
barso pahle hua bahut bada kasoor ho tum
ped pe latka hua khajoor ho tum
bin badal ke jaise barkha ho tum
khadi banto hai jis se wo charkha ho tum
kitni tareef karu ke kya ho tum
ek hi kafi hai wo jhatka ho tum
be wakoof ho bilkul anadi ho tum
bina ghode ki gaadi ho tum
puri amawas ki shaam ho tum
bilkul choosa hua aam ho tum
galat disha me nikli bijli ho tum
kabhi na mitne wali khujli ho tum
jise koi nahi dekhte wo cinema ho tum
bina nade ka phisalta paijama ho tum
saare din padosiyo ko satati ho tum
gadho ki kya kami hai jo gati ho tum
adhmare ko maarti poora ho tum
kabhi na baje wo tamboora ho tum
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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2013, 01:22:12 PM » |
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haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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«Reply #2 on: February 01, 2013, 02:14:15 PM » |
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«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2013, 02:17:28 PM » |
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hahaha...
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sarfira
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«Reply #4 on: February 01, 2013, 03:15:19 PM » |
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ye poem HEER ke naam
kisi charsi bewde ki batli ho tum
kya bimar ho bahut patli ho tum
barso pahle hua bahut bada kasoor ho tum
ped pe latka hua khajoor ho tum
bin badal ke jaise barkha ho tum
khadi banto hai jis se wo charkha ho tum
kitni tareef karu ke kya ho tum
ek hi kafi hai wo jhatka ho tum
be wakoof ho bilkul anadi ho tum
bina ghode ki gaadi ho tum
puri amawas ki shaam ho tum
bilkul choosa hua aam ho tum
galat disha me nikli bijli ho tum
kabhi na mitne wali khujli ho tum
jise koi nahi dekhte wo cinema ho tum
bina nade ka phisalta paijama ho tum
saare din padosiyo ko satati ho tum
gadho ki kya kami hai jo gati ho tum
adhmare ko maarti poora ho tum
kabhi na baje wo tamboora ho tum
hehehehehe mast mast super mast  wese Samnoj sirji Heer ne ka jawaab aaega bs taiyaar rahiega |
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«Reply #5 on: February 01, 2013, 05:33:51 PM » |
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ye poem HEER ke naam
kisi charsi bewde ki batli ho tum
kya bimar ho bahut patli ho tum
barso pahle hua bahut bada kasoor ho tum
ped pe latka hua khajoor ho tum
bin badal ke jaise barkha ho tum
khadi banto hai jis se wo charkha ho tum
kitni tareef karu ke kya ho tum
ek hi kafi hai wo jhatka ho tum
be wakoof ho bilkul anadi ho tum
bina ghode ki gaadi ho tum
puri amawas ki shaam ho tum
bilkul choosa hua aam ho tum
galat disha me nikli bijli ho tum
kabhi na mitne wali khujli ho tum
jise koi nahi dekhte wo cinema ho tum
bina nade ka phisalta paijama ho tum
saare din padosiyo ko satati ho tum
gadho ki kya kami hai jo gati ho tum
adhmare ko maarti poora ho tum
kabhi na baje wo tamboora ho tum
ek hi kaafi hai.. wo jhatkaa ho tum... kyaa hi khoob ... waah .............. |
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nandbahu
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2013, 01:38:37 AM » |
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samnoj
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2013, 02:38:15 AM » |
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thanx saini ji
thanx masoom ji..aap itna has rahe ho..heer se bachke rahna
thanx suman ji
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samnoj
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«Reply #8 on: February 02, 2013, 02:40:43 AM » |
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thanx sarfira ji..jawab ka hi to intezar hai..
Thanx janumanu ji
thanx nandbahu jii
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«Reply #9 on: February 02, 2013, 04:40:00 AM » |
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samnoj
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«Reply #10 on: February 02, 2013, 05:49:51 AM » |
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kya hua heer ji,. Hum to jawab ke intezar me baithe the..aap to aise hi chal diye
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«Reply #11 on: February 02, 2013, 06:48:11 AM » |
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aap bina jawab die nhi ja skte Heer - self respect bhi koi chij hoti h |
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samnoj
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«Reply #12 on: February 02, 2013, 06:52:00 AM » |
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sahi kaha sarfira ji
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«Reply #13 on: February 02, 2013, 07:10:35 AM » |
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naakoN chne chbwa degi
dharti se uthwa degi
na kahunga ab mai bhi kuch
Heer madam deewaroN me chunwa degi
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«Reply #14 on: February 02, 2013, 07:23:18 AM » |
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samjh sako to samjho sarfitra ji and samnoj ji..... hamari khamoshi hi sab keh jati hai...
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