Ghar Aaye Nahi Chachcha ab tak .......( Qais )

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Tuu   raha  Bachche  ka  Bachha  ab tak ,
Kaam  kiya   nahi  koi    achha  ab tak

Hans  ke  kar  sake   Sach   ka  saamna ,
Aisa  nahi  mila  koi   sachcha  ab tak

Cachchi  der  se  khadi  hain  dar  par ,
Ghar   aaye   nahi   chachcha   ab  tak

Haamila murghee  kal maar  ke  khaa lee ,
Uchak raha hai pet mein Bachcha ab  tak

Bund  hai  woh   pinjray   mein   warna ,
Kha  jaata   tujhe   kachha    ab   tak

Kaat  lee  kyu  tuu  ne  Chutkee  "Qais",
Ro  raha   hai   mera  Bachcha  ab  tak
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«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2012, 11:12:48 AM »
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waah waah Qais bhaai kuchh udaasee thee aapkaa kalaam padh kar chehre par muskaan aa gayee dheron daad qubool farmaayen aur ek rau bhee qubool karen
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kese khayi murigi ?
tandoori k masaledar tongue3  Grin

bohot khoob likha qais sir Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2012, 01:41:32 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Qais Ji

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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2012, 04:24:24 PM »
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Vaah vaah qais jee
khoob majedaar rahee aapki peshkash..
maqta khoob farmaaya aapne Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2012, 08:50:59 PM »
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haha mast--
kya kehne
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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2012, 01:17:11 AM »
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wah qais bhai kya baat hai , bohut umda , aur is shair ke liye khusoosi daad qubool kijiye ;;;;;


Haamila murghee  kal maar  ke  khaa lee ,
Uchak raha hai pet mein Bachcha ab  tak
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«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2012, 04:04:52 AM »
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waah waah bahut mazedaar
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2012, 09:29:16 AM »
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waah waah Qais bhaai kuchh udaasee thee aapkaa kalaam padh kar chehre par muskaan aa gayee dheron daad qubool farmaayen aur ek rau bhee qubool karen
Saini sahab , aapke chhre par mukaan meri kamyabi hai.aap ka shukriya.
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2012, 02:02:06 PM »
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Roy saheb,bahut dhanyawaad.
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«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2012, 02:19:33 PM »
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Ha haa haa bahut khoob, maza aa gaya padh ke Qais saheb.
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«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2012, 03:45:19 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Qais ji....!!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 19, 2012, 08:15:18 PM »
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khoob Qais.. bahoot khoob.
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«Reply #13 on: July 19, 2012, 11:23:23 PM »
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Tuu   raha  Bachche  ka  Bachha  ab tak ,
Kaam  kiya   nahi  koi    achha  ab tak

Hans  ke  kar  sake   Sach   ka  saamna ,
Aisa  nahi  mila  koi   sachcha  ab tak

Cachchi  der  se  khadi  hain  dar  par ,
Ghar   aaye   nahi   chachcha   ab  tak

Haamila murghee  kal maar  ke  khaa lee ,
Uchak raha hai pet mein Bachcha ab  tak

Bund  hai  woh   pinjray   mein   warna ,
Kha  jaata   tujhe   kachha    ab   tak

Kaat  lee  kyu  tuu  ne  Chutkee  "Qais",
Ro  raha   hai   mera  Bachcha  ab  tak




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«Reply #14 on: July 23, 2012, 09:00:16 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Qais Ji

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khwaish  bhai , shukriya.
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