GHAZAL: "RAU KAUN BADHAYEGA MERE TAU"........IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on May 09, 2012, 02:54:17 PM
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Sabzi kaun laayega mere tau
Aata kaun lagayega mere tau

Aata laga ke kahaa.n khisak liye
Roti  kaun  banayega  mere  tau

Bana rakhha hai ghar ko kabadkhana
Jhaadu   kaun   lagayega mere  tau

Padh lee.n kitaabein aur yunhi patak diya
Almira   kaun   sajayega  mere   tau

Jab jahaa.n neend aayi pad gaye
Bistar kaun  lagayega  mere tau

Muft mei.n ghazal padh ke khisak liye
Rau   kaun  badhayega  mere   tau

Iftakhar ghazal na likhe to YOINDIA ki,
Raunak   kaun   badhayega   mere   tau
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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2012, 03:13:39 PM »
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Waah Waah Iftakhar jee  Applause Applause Applause Applause
aur isi Baat par ek rau  Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2012, 03:21:08 PM »
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wah wah wah wah janab .
Maan gaye apko tau .
Sahil barhayega apki rau
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2012, 03:22:29 PM »
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Bahut khoob  Iftakhar saheb.In Tau ke liye eik Rau.
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«Reply #4 on: May 09, 2012, 03:26:50 PM »
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le lo is bemisal gazal pe ek rau ,
par tau to nahi kaho na  mere bhau
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #5 on: May 09, 2012, 03:49:27 PM »
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bhai tau ji main to pahle hee de chukaa rau abto daad lelo rau kaa no to ab kal hee aayegaa
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«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2012, 03:59:50 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Anahita Jee, Sahil bhai, Hasan Saheb, Ghanshyam BHAU aur Saini Jee.
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«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2012, 04:01:32 PM »
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mast mast kalaam Usual Smile

hum rau dekar jatate nahi
aapse hi barkaraar h bazm ki !rau! nakk magar--
hum ye khuleaam kabhi bataate nahi
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daad daad daad
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2012, 04:07:46 PM »
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bhai tau ji main to pahle hee de chukaa rau abto daad lelo rau kaa no to ab kal hee aayegaa
Saini Jee, Rau dena bhoolna mat kal.
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«Reply #9 on: May 09, 2012, 04:08:16 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Sarfira Jee.
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«Reply #10 on: May 09, 2012, 04:49:56 PM »
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Laughing hardLaughing hardLaughing hardLaughing hard....bdiya iftikharji...khoob raunak lagai....

:calp:ApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #11 on: May 09, 2012, 04:50:25 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Iftakhar ji....!!!
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«Reply #12 on: May 09, 2012, 04:52:09 PM »
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Dolly Jee, Hriday Jee, Bina Rau k kaam nahi chalega. Ab main kaise samjhaun aap logo.n ko.
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«Reply #13 on: May 09, 2012, 06:02:48 PM »
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Sabzi kaun laayega mere tau
Aata kaun lagayega mere tau

Aata laga ke kahaa.n khisak liye
Roti  kaun  banayega  mere  tau

Bana rakhha hai ghar ko kabadkhana
Jhaadu   kaun   lagayega mere  tau

Padh lee.n kitaabein aur yunhi patak diya
Almira   kaun   sajayega  mere   tau

Jab jahaa.n neend aayi pad gaye
Bistar kaun  lagayega  mere tau

Muft mei.n ghazal padh ke khisak liye
Rau   kaun  badhayega  mere   tau

Iftakhar ghazal na likhe to YOINDIA ki,
Raunak   kaun   badhayega   mere   tau


bhai bahut khoob...........!


 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

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«Reply #14 on: May 09, 2012, 06:13:22 PM »
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Shukriya Sheba Jee.
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