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by SURESH SANGWAN on September 05, 2010, 01:18:12 PM
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friends aaj maine apne guruji ke baare mein teachers day par ek poem likhi,directly on yo india screen.submit hone hi wali thi hang ho gai.

kya kar diya tune kisi ka khoon--e-jigar.  
mili sakht sajaa, hang ho gai meri kavita iss kadar.

yun bhi na hua ki message box hi dikh jata.
apne guru ki mahima bade dil se likhi thi jidhar.

dosto kuch zazbaat ,kuch alfaaz ,kuch khas pal,
lakh chaho to bhi nahin aate hain lautkar .

jee to karta hai ki restart karoon computer ko.
par abhi ummeed baki hai,nahi mitati hai mitkar.
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2010, 05:00:47 PM »
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Suresh Jee Aadaab!

Kia kahne hai aapke waah Jii waah Dil shad kar diyaa aapke aakhri dono ashaaroN ke khayaal ne.... behad sahiN farmaya janab.....

Dil se daad kabool kijiye....
Likhate rahiye..... Aap kafi achcah likhate hai....

Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2010, 05:04:34 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2010, 06:20:52 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on September 05, 2010, 01:18:12 PM
friends aaj maine apne guruji ke baare mein teachers day par ek poem likhi,directly on yo india screen.submit hone hi wali thi hang ho gai.

kya kar diya tune kisi ka khoon--e-jigar. 
mili sakht sajaa, hang ho gai meri kavita iss kadar.

yun bhi na hua ki message box hi dikh jata.
apne guru ki mahima bade dil se likhi thi jidhar.

dosto kuch zazbaat ,kuch alfaaz ,kuch khas pal,
lakh chaho to bhi nahin aate hain lautkar .

jee to karta hai ki restart karoon computer ko.
par abhi ummeed baki hai,nahi mitati hai mitkar.
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2010, 08:04:12 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya parwaz ji.aapne waqt diya aur saraaha.
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 05, 2010, 05:00:47 PM
Suresh Jee Aadaab!

Kia kahne hai aapke waah Jii waah Dil shad kar diyaa aapke aakhri dono ashaaroN ke khayaal ne.... behad sahiN farmaya janab.....

Dil se daad kabool kijiye....
Likhate rahiye..... Aap kafi achcah likhate hai....

Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2010, 08:05:43 AM »
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lakh lakh shukriya anamika ji. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2010, 08:10:03 AM »
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shukriya manoj ji icon_flower icon_flower :icon_flower:please likhte rahen.
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