JAAN HO JAATEE ........................................SAINI

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Tere abbu se gar meree  zaraa  pahchaan ho jaatee.
Tere kooche men aamad bas meree aasaan ho jaatee.

Pade haiN aaj tak joote teree galiyoN meN jo mujhko.
Ikatthe gar maiN kar letaa mere dookaan ho jaatee.

Khudaa ne de diyaa hotaa mujhe bhee rang agar thodaa.
Haseenaa har mere ghar kee bhee to mehmaan ho jaaatee.

Supaaree de gayaa meree teraa maamoo kasaai ko.
Teree maamee hee khud ab kyooN naheeN kurbaan ho jaatee.

Tujhe bhejee thee kal chitthee dikhaadee sabko vo tone.
Vagarnaa yooN n ik chitthee  wabaal-e-jaan ho jaatee.

Mahlle men akelaa maiN hee ik naakaam aashiq hooN.
Khudaayaa aashiqee meree azeem-ushshaan ho jaatee.

Faqeeree bhes meN ‘saini’ mundaa kar daadhee,moochh-o-sar.
Abhee bhee sochtaa hai koi uskee jaan ho jaatee .

Dr.Surendra Saini

तेरे अब्बू से गर मेरी ज़रा पहचान हो जाती ।
तेर कूचे में आमद बस मेरी आसान हो जाती ॥

पड़े हैं आज तक जूते तेरी गलियों में जो मुझको ।
इकठ्ठे गर मैं कर लेता मेरी दूकान हो जाती ॥

ख़ुदा ने दे दिया होता मुझे भी रंग अगर थोड़ा ।
हसीना हर मेरे घर की भी तो मेहमान हो जाती ॥

सुपारी दे गया मेरी तेरा मामू कसाई को ।
तेरी मामी ही ख़ुद अब क्यूँ  नहीं कुर्बान हो जाती ॥

तुझे भेजी थी कल चिठ्ठी दिखादी सबको वो तूने ।
वगरना यूँ न इक चिठ्ठी वबाल-ए -जान हो जाती ॥

महल्ले में अकेला मैं ही इक नाकाम आशिक हूँ ।
ख़ुदाया आशिक़ी मेरी अज़ीम-उश्शान हो जाती ॥

फ़क़ीरी भेस में 'सैनी'मुंडा कर दाढी ,मूछ -ओ -सर ।
अभी भी सोचता है कोई उसकी जान हो जाती ॥

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Pade haiN aaj tak joote teree galiyoN meN jo mujhko.
Ikatthe gar maiN kar letaa mere dookaan ho jaatee.

Supaaree de gayaa meree teraa maamoo kasaai ko.
Teree maamee hee khud ab kyooN naheeN kurbaan ho jaatee

Faqeeree bhes meN ‘saini’ mundaa kar daadhee,moochh-o-sar.
Abhee bhee sochtaa hai koi uskee jaan ho jaatee .

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«Reply #2 on: September 13, 2013, 06:37:02 PM »
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तुझे भेजी थी कल चिठ्ठी दिखादी सबको वो तूने ।
वगरना यूँ न इक चिठ्ठी बबाल-ए -जान हो जाती ॥

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah sir,Really Padkar maza aa gaya.
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«Reply #4 on: September 13, 2013, 07:45:11 PM »
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Wah Wah Mahutram Dr.Saini Sahib ....Qaiqaha Amez is hazl numa ghazal per dad ki degh chi ke saat mubarak baad ka donga bhi hazir hai huzoor ...Kamal ke sher kahe hain aapne ...Ap to har fun maula nikle ..zindabad zindabad
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«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2013, 09:35:46 PM »
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hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha mazaa aa gayaa Saini ji padh ke, ek dum masssttt likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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Pade haiN aaj tak joote teree galiyoN meN jo mujhko.
Ikatthe gar maiN kar letaa mere dookaan ho jaatee.

iska matlab kisi aur ne ikattha kar liya...bahut khoob Sir
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«Reply #12 on: September 14, 2013, 04:37:19 AM »
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Tere abbu se gar meree  zaraa  pahchaan ho jaatee.
Tere kooche men aamad bas meree aasaan ho jaatee.

Pade haiN aaj tak joote teree galiyoN meN jo mujhko.
Ikatthe gar maiN kar letaa mere dookaan ho jaatee.
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Touhid bhai shukriya
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