JahaaN dekha DhuaN kabhi !!!

by sarfira on August 15, 2011, 05:56:43 AM
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diloN me jagah banate chala
mai apne-gairon ko apnaate chala

jahan dekha dhuan kabhi
ashq wahiN bahaate chala

jee machlaaye jab Ro Ne ko
zakhm auroN ke sahlaate chala

aa jaaye muskaaN laboN pe
mai Vaani wahi sunaate chala

iss qadar mai khoya hooN
khud me hi khud ko bhulaate chala

do GaZZ jahaaN mil jaaye
KaandhoN ki peetH thapthapate chala

log kaheN !SaRfIrA! nirala paagal mujhe
mai maNd maNd muskaate chala

jaaM hothoN se laagate chala
mai geet khushi ke gaate chala
!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2011, 06:32:00 AM »
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bht khoob sarfira ji....
Pr aapne ye shayri majakiya section me kyu post ki hai.... Bht accha likha hai aapne... And it shd be posted at right place....
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2011, 05:13:32 PM »
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diloN me jagah banate chala
mai apne-gairon ko apnaate chala

jahan dekha dhuan kabhi
ashq wahiN bahaate chala

jee machlaaye jab Ro Ne ko
zakhm auroN ke sahlaate chala

aa jaaye muskaaN laboN pe
mai Vaani wahi sunaate chala

iss qadar mai khoya hooN
khud me hi khud ko bhulaate chala

do GaZZ jahaaN mil jaaye
KaandhoN ki peetH thapthapate chala

log kaheN !SaRfIrA! nirala paagal mujhe
mai maNd maNd muskaate chala

jaaM hothoN se laagate chala
mai geet khushi ke gaate chala
!!
!!

Bahut Bahut Khoooooob S.f Ji..

Bahut Acha Likha Hai, Jazbaaton Se Labrez..Har Ek As'haar Lajawaab

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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2011, 05:40:42 PM »
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bht khoob sarfira ji....
Pr aapne ye shayri majakiya section me kyu post ki hai.... Bht accha likha hai aapne... And it shd be posted at right place....
dhanyabaad ji--
aapne saraha yahi kaafi hai--
raha sawaal section ka to kachre ke dher me bhi ye rahta to yahi rahta na--so section se mujhe koi mtlb nhi rahta Usual Smile

haste rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2011, 08:17:37 PM »
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S Fira jee aadaab!

Waah janab waah kia baat hai..
Badi khub kalaam kahi hai janab Usual Smile
Matle se maqte tak behad achchi aur
khub peshkash rahi... Usual Smile

Kuch ashaar to behad gehre kahe hai
janab daad daad daad Usual Smile

Aise hi khub kalaamoN ke saath aate
rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile       

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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2011, 08:25:33 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooooob S.f Ji..

Bahut Acha Likha Hai, Jazbaaton Se Labrez..Har Ek As'haar Lajawaab

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dhanyabaad khuaish ji-- Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2011, 09:37:18 AM »
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diloN me jagah banate chala
mai apne-gairon ko apnaate chala

jahan dekha dhuan kabhi
ashq wahiN bahaate chala

jee machlaaye jab Ro Ne ko
zakhm auroN ke sahlaate chala

aa jaaye muskaaN laboN pe
mai Vaani wahi sunaate chala

iss qadar mai khoya hooN
khud me hi khud ko bhulaate chala

do GaZZ jahaaN mil jaaye
KaandhoN ki peetH thapthapate chala

log kaheN !SaRfIrA! nirala paagal mujhe
mai maNd maNd muskaate chala

jaaM hothoN se laagate chala
mai geet khushi ke gaate chala
!!
!!


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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2011, 10:32:57 AM »
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S Fira jee aadaab!

Waah janab waah kia baat hai..
Badi khub kalaam kahi hai janab Usual Smile
Matle se maqte tak behad achchi aur
khub peshkash rahi... Usual Smile

Kuch ashaar to behad gehre kahe hai
janab daad daad daad Usual Smile

Aise hi khub kalaamoN ke saath aate
rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile       


dhanyabaad Parwaaz sahab
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