JALTEE HUEE KHATAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by qalb on July 10, 2013, 05:09:38 PM
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                             khud    bhee  jee  use   bhee  jeene  de.
                             tu   na   pee    use   toh   peene    de.

                             abb  kyon  ghere  hua  hai mayyat  meree.
                             arre  chhod bhee raasta,  havaa  aane de.

                             sakht  garmee,  us  pe   qillat-e-paanee.
                             aaj  apne  aanso.on  se  hame nahaane de.

                             ek  roti   pe  itnee   farmaaish  na kar.
                             inn niwaal.on ko kuchh der muskuraane de.

                             aakhree  ek  khataa kar le chalte-chalte.
                             shamaa ko qalb  baad sehar bhee jalne de.
                             

                           
                             
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«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2013, 06:04:02 PM »
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 khud    bhee  jee  use   bhee  jeene  de.
 tu   na   pee    use   toh   peene    de.
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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2013, 07:30:38 PM »
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Very Heart Touching.....................
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2013, 08:08:10 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2013, 08:30:36 PM »
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Waaaaah wah
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«Reply #5 on: July 10, 2013, 08:38:32 PM »
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एक  रोटी   पे  इतनी   फरमाइश  ना कर.
                             इन्न नीवाल.ओं को कुच्छ देर मुस्कुराने दे.

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«Reply #6 on: July 10, 2013, 11:20:48 PM »
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achchi peshkash qalbji. dheron daaaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #7 on: July 11, 2013, 01:37:55 AM »
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 Applause Applause Khubsurat matla
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«Reply #8 on: July 11, 2013, 09:20:51 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2013, 12:42:30 AM »
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waah waah janaab excellent, shuru ke donoN sher khususann bahut pasand aae.
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«Reply #10 on: February 22, 2014, 02:36:09 PM »
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khud    bhee  jee  use   bhee  jeene  de.
 tu   na   pee    use   toh   peene    de.
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