Joote uchhal rahe haiN !

by shara63 on December 10, 2012, 11:46:40 AM
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Joote uchhal rahe hain sar-e-aam dekhiye,
izzat ka ho raha hai Qatl-e-aam dekhiye

Tahzeeb ka ye kaisa ho raha hai muzahira
kya de rahe hain duniya ko pighaam dekhiye ?

Kaheen izhaar-e-ghussa to kaheen mahaz mazaaq
badnaamiyoN me bhi ho raha kuchh naam dekhiye ! ..........'ainy'



Note : In dinon duniya bhar me doosroN par joote phainkney ka ek chalan sa ho gaya hai...chhut bhaiye neta se lekar bade naami girami shakhsiyaten bhi iski zad me aa chuki hain....aur bass isi ki den hai yeh chand laaine..bass maza leejie aur daad dena mat bhooliyega !! shukria !
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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2012, 12:21:47 PM »
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shara63 ji...waaaah bahut khoob....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2012, 12:31:24 PM »
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Tahzeeb ka ye kaisa ho raha hai muzahira
kya de rahe hain duniya ko pighaam dekhiye ?

jo dard aur peeda is kalaam me chupi hai uski vajah se chaahkar bhi muskarahat na aa saki,
bebasee si mahsoos hoti hai ye sab dekhkar.
shara jee
Bahut badhiya likha hai aapne
mubaarakbaad qubool kareN


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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2012, 12:33:05 PM »
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Joote uchhal rahe hain sar-e-aam dekhiye,
izzat ka ho raha hai Qatl-e-aam dekhiye

Tahzeeb ka ye kaisa ho raha hai muzahira
kya de rahe hain duniya ko pighaam dekhiye ?

Kaheen izhaar-e-ghussa to kaheen mahaz mazaaq
badnaamiyoM me bhi ho raha kuchh naam dekhiye ! ..........'ainy'



Note : In dinon duniya bhar me doosroN par joote phainkney ka ek chalan sa ho gaya hai...chhut bhaiye neta se lekar bade naami girami shakhsiyaten bhi iski zad me aa chuki hain....aur bass isi ki den hai yeh chand laaine..bass maza leejie aur daad dena mat bhooliyega !! shukria !
WONDERFUL AINY...JHOOTON KE BARE MEIN KYA SACH LIKHA HAI AAPNE ,
TAREEF KE QABIL, DAAD QUBOOL KIJIYE.
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2012, 12:35:39 PM »
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Sharaa Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... Badi achche ashaar kahe haiN
aapne.... Usual Smile

Par haaN juta usi par feka jaata hai jo uske layaq ban jata hai
Hum toH unhe mante haiN jo Jutaa fekte haiN...  icon_geek


Wel humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye..

Khuda Hafezx..
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2012, 01:18:47 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2012, 04:09:41 PM »
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nice . bahut khoob likha hai. eik ghazal , ' khumar jooton ka '
kabhi  main  ne  bhi  likhi  thhi . waqt  mile  to  parhyega.
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«Reply #7 on: December 10, 2012, 06:33:21 PM »
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Behad gehri soch aap ki..dil se daad kabool karein uss soch ke liye...
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«Reply #8 on: December 11, 2012, 01:12:15 AM »
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wah wah, dhero dad
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«Reply #9 on: December 11, 2012, 01:27:05 AM »
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bahut umda tanz kahunga maiN ise, meri taraf se ek rau qubool farmaaiye....
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«Reply #10 on: December 11, 2012, 03:13:59 AM »
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wah shara jee umda ghazal hai, daad qubool karen , mazahiya nahi nihayat umda tanziya kalaam hai, wah wah wah,
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«Reply #11 on: December 11, 2012, 07:17:24 AM »
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waaah shara jee bahut khoob likha hai aapne.dheron mubarakbad qubool kare
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«Reply #12 on: December 11, 2012, 08:26:16 AM »
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Satish Shukla ji, kalaam ko padhne aur pasand karne ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukria...bass yuNhi hausla dete rahiyega!
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«Reply #13 on: December 11, 2012, 08:35:48 AM »
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mkv sb,  tanz vo hatiyaar hai ke jisse Qatl bhi ho jae aur khoon bhi na nikle...yaani baat maze maze me sahii jagah pahunch jaae..bass kuchh yahi kosish ki hai....bahut Shukria aapka !
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«Reply #14 on: December 11, 2012, 08:37:40 AM »
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Thankyou Sahl sb, bass taaliyon ki khanak yuNhi goonjti rahe to achha hoga!..bahut shukria aapka!!
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