just kool.............(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on August 07, 2012, 08:10:12 PM
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                                chaman    ko   apna   haal   naa  diyaa kar.!
                                ke dushman ko husn-o-jamaal naa diyaa kar.!!
                                
                                hai   kaafi   ek   hii   thappad   jab.!
                                phir doosra   gaal   naa   diyaa   kar.!

                                bol seedhey -seedhey chahiye kya tujhe.!
                                shabdo.n   ke   jaal   naa  diyaa  kar.!

                                ho   jaataa   hoo.n   be-akhtiyaar main.!
                                cheezein    laal     naa    diyaa   kar.!

                                haar    jaaye    gii    maut     warnaa.!
                                jeene     ka    khayaal  naa  diya  kar.!

                                dekhoo.n  tujhe  yaa  doo.n jawaab main.!
                                mushkil    sawaal    naa    diyaa   kar.!

                                hai  cheez  khatarnaak  to  rahne de ise.!
                                khamosh tariqaa-e-istemaal naa diya kar.!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2012, 12:25:45 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2012, 02:09:18 AM »
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Bahut khoob...
badhiya hai Applause Applause
khamosh tareeka ..kya baat hai
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2012, 02:53:49 AM »
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bahut khub k_A ji..........

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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2012, 03:39:34 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2012, 06:32:26 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2012, 11:01:04 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   bahut bahut sundar K_A ji.. ek se badhkar ek sher hai.. kya khoob likha hai apne... aapke shabdon me hi kahunga "aapki soch humein bhi de dijiye, kuch behtar likh paaunga". Bahut khoobsurat , bahut bahut umda....taarif ke liye shabd kam pad rahe hain, ya kahiye mil hi nahi rahe....taaliyon se kaam poora kar dete hain!!!   Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2012, 04:56:34 PM »
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                                chaman    ko   apna   haal   naa  diyaa kar.!
                                ke dushman ko husn-o-jamaal naa diyaa kar.!!
                               
                                hai   kaafi   ek   hii   thappad   jab.!
                                phir doosra   gaal   naa   diyaa   kar.!

                                bol seedhey -seedhey chahiye kya tujhe.!
                                shabdo.n   ke   jaal   naa  diyaa  kar.!

                                ho   jaataa   hoo.n   be-akhtiyaar main.!
                                cheezein    laal     naa    diyaa   kar.!

                                haar    jaaye    gii    maut     warnaa.!
                                jeene     ka    khayaal  naa  diya  kar.!

                                dekhoo.n  tujhe  yaa  doo.n jawaab main.!
                                mushkil    sawaal    naa    diyaa   kar.!

                                hai  cheez  khatarnaak  to  rahne de ise.!
                                khamosh tariqaa-e-istemaal naa diya kar.!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 09, 2012, 09:08:16 AM »
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wah khamoshji

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«Reply #9 on: August 11, 2012, 03:43:59 PM »
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                                chaman    ko   apna   haal   naa  diyaa kar.!
                                ke dushman ko husn-o-jamaal naa diyaa kar.!!
                               
                                hai   kaafi   ek   hii   thappad   jab.!
                                phir doosra   gaal   naa   diyaa   kar.!

                                bol seedhey -seedhey chahiye kya tujhe.!
                                shabdo.n   ke   jaal   naa  diyaa  kar.!

                                ho   jaataa   hoo.n   be-akhtiyaar main.!
                                cheezein    laal     naa    diyaa   kar.!

                                haar    jaaye    gii    maut     warnaa.!
                                jeene     ka    khayaal  naa  diya  kar.!

                                dekhoo.n  tujhe  yaa  doo.n jawaab main.!
                                mushkil    sawaal    naa    diyaa   kar.!

                                hai  cheez  khatarnaak  to  rahne de ise.!
                                khamosh tariqaa-e-istemaal naa diya kar.!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 11, 2012, 07:39:54 PM »
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Bahut khoob...
badhiya hai Applause Applause
khamosh tareeka ..kya baat hai
likhte rahiye.


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«Reply #11 on: August 13, 2012, 08:46:27 PM »
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bahut khub k_A ji..........

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THANX
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«Reply #12 on: September 06, 2012, 09:59:38 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #13 on: September 18, 2012, 05:37:48 PM »
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bahut badhiya.

thanx -  AM
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