""kal shaam vo ghar aya tha""

by nirala on July 27, 2012, 06:30:26 AM
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kal shaam vo ghar aya tha
jis par pahalvano ka shaya tha

zaalim ne fir mujh par beintehan
ghoonsa aur laat batsaya tha

nahi nahi galti uski thi hi nahi
qki barson baad usne mujhko paaya tha

tha rafuchakkar mai hi shahar se
mujh par jb uska hazaaron ka bakaaya tha

ye dukh bhari daastaa sunkar yaaro hasna nahi
apne un paiso ko mere acnt me dalana jise aapne tinka tinka jamaya tha
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«Reply #1 on: July 27, 2012, 10:24:33 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 27, 2012, 10:57:46 AM »
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Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Nirala ji....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 27, 2012, 11:49:32 AM »
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iss tarah se usne yaaron
mera JANAM DIWAS manaya tha
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«Reply #4 on: July 27, 2012, 12:17:12 PM »
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nirala mastana ji aap bhi naaaaaaaa
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«Reply #5 on: July 27, 2012, 12:24:41 PM »
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kuch fasaon me haqeeqat thi aur kuch
haqeeqaton ka fanaana tha
kuch iss tarah se yaaron uss naaznee ka
NIR ki "yaadon ki galiyare" me aana jaana tha
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«Reply #6 on: July 27, 2012, 03:46:57 PM »
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Bahut khoob Nirala jee.
ye post to all in one ban gayee..
sabhi rang barsa diye aapne.
Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 30, 2012, 09:38:44 AM »
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Quote from: nirala on July 27, 2012, 06:30:26 AM
kal shaam vo ghar aya tha
jis par pahalvano ka shaya tha

zaalim ne fir mujh par beintehan
ghoonsa aur laat batsaya tha

nahi nahi galti uski thi hi nahi
qki barson baad usne mujhko paaya tha

tha rafuchakkar mai hi shahar se
mujh par jb uska hazaaron ka bakaaya tha

ye dukh bhari daastaa sunkar yaaro hasna nahi
apne un paiso ko mere acnt me dalana jise aapne tinka tinka jamaya tha



naice Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #8 on: February 14, 2014, 05:16:33 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 27, 2012, 10:24:33 AM
Applause Applause Applause
thanx
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 27, 2012, 10:57:46 AM
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Nirala ji....!!!
thanx
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«Reply #10 on: February 14, 2014, 05:20:27 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 27, 2012, 12:17:12 PM
nirala mastana ji aap bhi naaaaaaaa
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 27, 2012, 12:17:12 PM
nirala mastana ji aap bhi naaaaaaaa

thanx K mam
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Quote from: mkv on July 27, 2012, 03:46:57 PM
Bahut khoob Nirala jee.
ye post to all in one ban gayee..
sabhi rang barsa diye aapne.
Applause Applause
thanx
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 30, 2012, 09:38:44 AM
naice Laughing hard Laughing hard
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