KAVEE VARR KEE KAVITAA KAA SAVAASHT ACHHHA HAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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                               zaraa  adab   se  boliye   aadaab  khud   chall kar aaye gaa.
                               kabhee shamaa kee tarah jaliye parvanaa machall kar aaye gaa.


                               suit aur  maflar  kee  seyaasat chhodiye bhee janaab abb toh.
                               lafz.ON ko sahee pahchaan dijiye phir sher nikall kar aaye gaa.

  
                               AAP ke khayaal.ON kee roshnee se jagmagaa rahaa hai bazm itna.
                               lagtaa  hai  yahaan  andheraa  khuchh   sambhall kar aaye gaa.


                               paddd  gaee  hai  barff  bhee  suraj  per  yahaan  aate-jaate.
                               sabr   karo  abkee  woh  sahee   se   jall   kar  aaye   gaa.


                             nikal kar shaayree kee ghuutan se gayaa hai tazaa havaa khaane.
                             kuchh    der   se   yahaan     qalb   tahall  kar   aaye   gaa.
                              

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«Reply #1 on: February 20, 2015, 04:22:23 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 20, 2015, 04:47:44 PM »
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                               zaraa  adab   se  boliye   aadaab  khud   chall kar aaye gaa.
                               kabhee shamaa kee tarah jaliye parvanaa machall kar aaye gaa.


                               suit aur  maflar  kee  seyaasat chhodiye bhee janaab abb toh.
                               lafz.ON ko sahee pahchaan dijiye phir sher nikall kar aaye gaa.

 
                               AAP ke khayaal.ON kee roshnee se jagmagaa rahaa hai bazm itna.
                               lagtaa  hai  yahaan  andheraa  khuchh   sambhall kar aaye gaa.


                               paddd  gaee  hai  barff  bhee  suraj  per  yahaan  aate-jaate.
                               sabr   karo  abkee  woh  sahee   se   jall   kar  aaye   gaa.


                             nikal kar shaayree kee ghuutan se gayaa hai tazaa havaa khaane.
                             kuchh    der   se   yahaan     qalb   tahall  kar   aaye   gaa.
                               

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«Reply #3 on: February 20, 2015, 06:37:26 PM »
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waah waah waah waah Qalb ji, kyaa kehne, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, dil khush ho gayaa padh ke, kuch likhe binaa rahaa nahi gayaa, aap jaisaa achchaa to likh nahi paate hain, bas yunhi halke fulke do chaar lines likh diye...



na badlaa hai lekin jald hi badal jaayegaa
mausam hi hai, kabhi to laut kar aayegaa

intezaar kijiye hawaa kaa rukh badalne kaa
jo dhund rahe hain woh bhi mil hi jaayegaa

bas thodi si dhul jam gayi hai kaagaz par
hawaa ke chalte hi yeh saaf ho hi jaayegaa

shabd aur ehsaas kahin chhip gaye hain bas
kuch der mein ghazal bhi ban hi jaayegaa

dhundte rahiye koyle ki khaan mein yunhi
heeraa bhi kahin naa kahin mil hi jaayegaa


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«Reply #4 on: February 20, 2015, 09:08:07 PM »
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waaah waah waah kyaa baat hai janaab Qalb sahib dheron dherooooooN daad Rau ke saath.
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2015, 05:07:39 AM »
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bahhut khub..... qalbji.....
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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2015, 06:22:16 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2015, 08:54:19 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: February 22, 2015, 06:54:19 AM »
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behad umda peshkash daaaaaaaaaaaadddddddd
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«Reply #10 on: February 23, 2015, 06:48:51 AM »
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Waah janab bahut khoob kaha aapne...
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«Reply #11 on: February 25, 2015, 10:30:15 AM »
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waah, waah daad.


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«Reply #12 on: March 05, 2015, 05:25:56 AM »
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waah waah waah waah Qalb ji, kyaa kehne, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, dil khush ho gayaa padh ke, kuch likhe binaa rahaa nahi gayaa, aap jaisaa achchaa to likh nahi paate hain, bas yunhi halke fulke do chaar lines likh diye...



na badlaa hai lekin jald hi badal jaayegaa
mausam hi hai, kabhi to laut kar aayegaa

intezaar kijiye hawaa kaa rukh badalne kaa
jo dhund rahe hain woh bhi mil hi jaayegaa

bas thodi si dhul jam gayi hai kaagaz par
hawaa ke chalte hi yeh saaf ho hi jaayegaa

shabd aur ehsaas kahin chhip gaye hain bas
kuch der mein ghazal bhi ban hi jaayegaa

dhundte rahiye koyle ki khaan mein yunhi
heeraa bhi kahin naa kahin mil hi jaayegaa


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«Reply #13 on: March 28, 2015, 09:27:05 AM »
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waaah waah waah kyaa baat hai janaab Qalb sahib dheron dherooooooN daad Rau ke saath.

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