koi toot jata hai............

by SURESH SANGWAN on June 13, 2011, 11:42:33 AM
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koi toot jata hai.
      Koi tod jata hai.
Koi mud jata hai.
       Koi mod jata hai. sad7
KOi foot jata hai.
       Koi fod jata hai. BangHead
Koi chhoot jata hai.
       Koi chhod jata hai.
Koi jud jata
       Koi jod jata hai.
Koi jhuk jata hai.
       Koi jhonk jata hai. sad10

Ye jo hune koi koi laga rakhi hai.
samjho waqt ki maut bula rakhi hai. tongue3 tongue3 tongue3
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2011, 12:04:49 PM »
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Suresh Ji,

Bhai...main sanjeeda mood men hoon
aur aap hain ki baar baat hansa dete hain.

Koyee baat naheen..

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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2011, 12:06:47 PM »
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koi toot jata hai.
      Koi tod jata hai.
Koi mud jata hai.
       Koi mod jata hai. sad7
KOi foot jata hai.
       Koi fod jata hai. BangHead
Koi chhoot jata hai.
       Koi chhod jata hai.
Koi jud jata
       Koi jod jata hai.
Koi jhuk jata hai.
       Koi jhonk jata hai. sad10

Ye jo hune koi koi laga rakhi hai.
samjho waqt ki maut bula rakhi hai. tongue3 tongue3 tongue3




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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2011, 12:32:45 PM »
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Suresh Jee Aadaab!


Janab shukra hai waqt ki maut nahi aayi...  Thumbs UP
Achche koshish thi koi koi aise aise hote hai ..  Winking

Koi koi waise waise hote hai.....  NaNaNa

Likhate rahiye...
Aate rahiye.......
Khush O aabaad rahiye...... Usual Smile

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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2011, 12:34:46 PM »
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Suresh Jee Aadaab!


Janab shukra hai waqt ki maut nahi aayi...  Thumbs UP
Achche koshish thi koi koi aise aise hote hai ..  Winking

Koi koi waise waise hote hai.....  NaNaNa

Likhate rahiye...
Aate rahiye.......
Khush O aabaad rahiye...... Usual Smile

Khuda Hafez Usual Smile



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«Reply #5 on: June 14, 2011, 04:40:54 PM »
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bahut 2 shukriya satish ji
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Suresh Ji,

Bhai...main sanjeeda mood men hoon
aur aap hain ki baar baat hansa dete hain.

Koyee baat naheen..

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

 
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«Reply #6 on: June 14, 2011, 04:42:20 PM »
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shukruya adil ji bahut sara shukriya.
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«Reply #7 on: June 14, 2011, 04:44:12 PM »
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parwaz ji aapka ye colourful likhne ka style bahut hi achha hai.
aap issi tarha likhte rahen.
aur pasand farmane ka bahut sara shukriya,
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Janab shukra hai waqt ki maut nahi aayi...  Thumbs UP
Achche koshish thi koi koi aise aise hote hai ..  Winking

Koi koi waise waise hote hai.....  NaNaNa

Likhate rahiye...
Aate rahiye.......
Khush O aabaad rahiye...... Usual Smile

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«Reply #8 on: June 14, 2011, 04:45:46 PM »
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suresh ji aapne ise funny me post kiya hai...fir bhi mujhe ye ek sanjeeda si gahri baat lagi....daad
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«Reply #9 on: June 14, 2011, 04:48:15 PM »
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shukriya bekaraar ji. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

aapko sajeeda laga khair apna 2 nazariya hai.
shayad aap ise padhte waqt sanjeeda mood mein hi honge,
suresh ji aapne ise funny me post kiya hai...fir bhi mujhe ye ek sanjeeda si gahri baat lagi....daad
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«Reply #10 on: June 14, 2011, 04:50:57 PM »
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ji bilkul agar last ki do lines nikaal den aap aur fir se padhen
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«Reply #11 on: June 14, 2011, 04:53:42 PM »
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boht khoob suresh ji
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«Reply #12 on: June 14, 2011, 04:55:53 PM »
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Bekaraar ji ekdam sahi kaha aapne.
last ki do lines nikalne par ye sanjeeda hi ho jayega,
ji bilkul agar last ki do lines nikaal den aap aur fir se padhen
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«Reply #13 on: June 14, 2011, 04:56:36 PM »
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shukriya saahil ji.
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boht khoob suresh ji
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«Reply #14 on: June 26, 2011, 02:58:37 PM »
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koi tapak jata hai
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koi bhatak jata hai
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koi satak jata hai
    koi satka jata hai :-]
koi atak jata hai
    koi atka jata hai tongue3

Deewano ki fherist me yaron
    maut ki bulandiyon ka mukaam nahi tongue3 tongue3 tongue3
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